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2675 of my comments have received 2761 Great Feedback votes

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I'm so sorry you still aren't

Posted on Sun, 07 Aug 2016

I'm so sorry you still aren't getting email notifications Alphadog. Lluis the techie is working on it. Is there any other possible reason why they mightn't work for you? Could you check the email address on your account is still current? Have you...

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This is very well written - I

Posted on Thu, 04 Aug 2016

This is very well written - I'm enjoying it!

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Posted in Ned (2)

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I had to read back at one

Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016

I had to read back at one point to work out how many people there were and who was who, but apart from that this is great. The dialogue feels very authentic - really nice to see some prose from you! 

One typo - discrete should be discreet

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Posted in Dogs

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looking forward to finding

Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016

looking forward to finding out more - Welcome to ABCTales!

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Posted in Memoirs of a Wanna Be: Intro and Chapter 1

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A very original idea and

Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016

A very original idea and elevated by the wealth of period detail. Brilliant!

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Posted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)

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Hi Deerman, welcome to

Posted on Mon, 04 Jul 2016

Hi Deerman, welcome to ABCTales from me too! Just re-title this as part one, and then post the remaining text as part two. Hope that helps!

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Posted in The Spectator, chapters 1-3

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Very nicely done. Fantasy is

Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2016

Very nicely done. Fantasy is not my thing but you kept my attention. A good balance of description and action.

A couple of suggestions for you:

Feeling the warmth of his hands she smiled and opened her eyes and looked into his. Her...

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Posted in Goodbye

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so strange and touching how a

Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016

so strange and touching how a few words can take on such a special significance. Perhaps it's because of the care she's showing for you in saying them? 

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Posted in Drive carefully

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This is a wonderful poem

Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016

This is a wonderful poem Lavadis. I've removed the photo pending your reply to my email

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There's a lot to cut when you

Posted on Sat, 21 May 2016

There's a lot to cut when you do your next draft - too much waffle, but the voice is very well done - very believable, and this is a brilliant line! Do keep going..

'He is a Smiths playlist away from rock bottom'

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