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2716 of my comments have received 2810 Great Feedback votes

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Edited or not, this is

Posted on Thu, 02 Nov 2017

Edited or not, this is shaping up very well. Lots of detail in this part, but you've managed to present it in a way that keeps this reader's interest!

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An interesting think-piece

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017

An interesting think-piece Tom, thank you for posting it

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painfully raw 

Posted on Sat, 07 Oct 2017

painfully raw 

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This is stunningly beautiful

Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017

This is stunningly beautiful Di - it reads like an impressionist painting - so yes, a bit of work needed, but all the better for it. I've been to a few places like this and I know exactly what you mean. A brilliant pick

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Some really interesting

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2017

Some really interesting twists and turns in this piece, and I'd love to read another part of it ( I hope there's more to come?)

If you're looking for suggestions, here's one big thing: Are you saying that the 8yr old thought he could lay...

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This is our Facebook and

Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017

This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day

Please share/retweet if you like it too!

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A great word picture, and the

Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017

A great word picture, and the metaphors are strong, never too contrived. Well done

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Very interesting Elsie - a

Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2017

Very interesting Elsie - a kind of mix of social history and your own personal history. I remember listening to something on radio four - I'm sure it was more recent than 30 years ago - about how many holocaust survivors were only recently...

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You've managed the dialogue

Posted on Wed, 16 Aug 2017

You've managed the dialogue between Jack and his mum beautifully - very believable, both the spoken and unspoken bits.

One small suggestion:

'he knew it must be late but he daren’t check the time on his phone'

should probably...

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Could you put a link here for

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Could you put a link here for us Elsie? I'm sure quite a few of us would like to order a copy

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