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Welcome to ABC Venegas. I
Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2013
Welcome to ABC Venegas. I enjoyed reading this - you have an easy writing style. I hope you'll post more soon. As you mention specific people and places quite often, you might want to change their names, given the nature of your writing.
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Hello Enemy - welcome to ABC.
Posted on Fri, 06 Dec 2013
Hello Enemy - welcome to ABC. I'm not a fantasy fan, so you should take it as a compliment when I say I found this very readable. You write with an easy fluency, although it would be a good idea to have another edit to remove some typos. I will...
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..... a very nicely paced,
Posted on Wed, 16 Oct 2013
..... a nicely paced, well-rounded peice. I enjoyed it very much.
One tiny suggestion: for authenticity, I think they would have used the word "wireless" instead of radio then.
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Hi Maddi - you said all
Posted on Sun, 13 Jan 2013
Hi Maddi - you said all comments welcome so .... first "Fred woke with a finish" ... not quite sure finish is the right word here More generally .... I enjoyed reading this, but I think it needs some rearranging. It's quite odd that you don't...Read full commentPosted in Just Starting: Part 1
there's something different
Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2011
there's something different about the style of this, compared to your usual - what do you think fatboy? It's very good, and I really like it - it just seems unlike you (not in a bad way)Read full commentPosted in I Can't Help Wishing Christopher
I like this very much
Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2010
I like this very muchRead full commentPosted in The approach of winter
That was really good
Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2009
That was really goodRead full commentPosted in Safety Information
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