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I have 19 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 37407 times and 23 of my stories have been cherry picked.
22 of my 1,886 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 22 votes

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simon whitworth

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Gold cherry

Some Seam Shared

So she's slumped over sobbing, great heaves of regret falling onto orange nylon, and there's a baby murmuring and the still-hot-hard brittle sound of...
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Raising the Dead

...and what would they have to say for themselves?
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Submerged

The telly is not working so I forced myself to write a poem.
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Gloaming

There I was, not coming or going, trying to find a path through, on and through and into the old ways and see how it was before. And so stood useless...
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The Lookout Boy

No blood relation. Sentry at the gatehouse of some vast and rambling estate. His wife had followed him down through the years, held the front-line in...
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22 of my comments have received 22 Great Feedback votes

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This incredible poem is our

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2017

This incredible poem is our Twitter/Facebook pick of the day. It could not be more relevant, please like and share so others can read it.

 

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Posted in sometimes

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I always thought as I got

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

I always thought as I got older, I would become more right wing than my socialist early self, but that's like saying the older you get, the more of an uncaring, stupid cunt you become. I am at a loss to understand why people vote the way they do...

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Posted in coldest planet

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You've educated me. I thought

Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2018

You've educated me. I thought Gilgamesh was the bad wizard in The Smurfs and The Smurfs 2. This is very good Ewan. The masterstroke - convince millions trampled underfoot to lap up the pain and poverty by pinpointing a common enemy. Rinse and...

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Posted in Gods And Men

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A really engrossing story

Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2018

A really engrossing story that I enjoyed. Ambiguous time and setting which works really well with the subject matter. 

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Posted in Ready. Aim. Fire.

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Congratulations, your poem is

Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017

Congratulations, your poem is our Facebook/Twitter pick of the day. Please like and share if you enjoyed it too.

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Posted in Love in Sight

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Lovely poem Richard.

Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017

Lovely poem Richard.

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Posted in Love in Sight

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Hi Poppy, I read your forum

Posted on Sun, 03 Dec 2017

Hi Poppy, I read your forum comment and then chose a random poem. I could say I really like this, or that doesn't work for me, but what do I know? Someone will come along and say, no I like that, he's wrong etc

For what it's worth and this...

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Posted in Child

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Super poem.  

Posted on Sun, 19 Nov 2017

Super poem.

 

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Posted in Come With Me

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A lovely journey and many,

Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017

A lovely journey and many, many beautiful images. Most of what I write is probably nonsense to most, but if they like a phrase or a few parts, great - if they get the whole, even better - if they don't like it, or don't have time to decipher my...

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Posted in time travelling

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