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I have 21 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 47326 times and 27 of my stories have been cherry picked.
27 of my 1,937 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 28 votes

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simon whitworth

 

My stories

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Half a Tangerine (Part 2)

Part 2 of a ghost story. Will he make it home?
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Story of the week

Half a Tangerine (Part 1)

A ghost story for Christmas in two parts.
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Some Seam Shared

So she's slumped over sobbing, great heaves of regret falling onto orange nylon, and there's a baby murmuring and the still-hot-hard brittle sound of...
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Raising the Dead

...and what would they have to say for themselves?
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Poem of the week
Pick of the Month

Submerged

The telly is not working so I forced myself to write a poem.

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27 of my comments have received 28 Great Feedback votes

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This is well deserving of

Posted on Mon, 19 Nov 2018

This is well deserving of cherries Rhiannon and today they are gold in colour. I've read this a few times now and can appreciate how difficult the form must have been to use and make the poem work as well as you have. Congratulations, this is our...

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Posted in Cywydd [Cuh-with] Form, Wintery

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This incredible poem is our

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2017

This incredible poem is our Twitter/Facebook pick of the day. It could not be more relevant, please like and share so others can read it.

 

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Posted in sometimes

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Lovely, a simple thing made

Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018

Lovely, a simple thing made beautiful in your poem.

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Posted in love and laundry

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Cracking.

Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018

Cracking.

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Posted in Elsewhere

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Oh well, you can't please em

Posted on Mon, 21 May 2018

Oh well, you can't please em all. I've not done many readings, but I remember once being first up and staring out at what looked like a veterans meeting of the WI, and wondering if somehow I could replace all the cunts and fucks in the poems I...

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Posted in Chicken Caesar

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This is a belter and is most

Posted on Wed, 16 May 2018

This is a belter and is most definitely ou Facebook/Twitter pick of the day. If you enjoyed Crazu and Trazu's adventures, please like and share so others can enjoy.

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Posted in Crazu the Brave

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I always thought as I got

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

I always thought as I got older, I would become more right wing than my socialist early self, but that's like saying the older you get, the more of an uncaring, stupid cunt you become. I am at a loss to understand why people vote the way they do...

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Posted in coldest planet

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You've educated me. I thought

Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2018

You've educated me. I thought Gilgamesh was the bad wizard in The Smurfs and The Smurfs 2. This is very good Ewan. The masterstroke - convince millions trampled underfoot to lap up the pain and poverty by pinpointing a common enemy. Rinse and...

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Posted in Gods And Men

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A really engrossing story

Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2018

A really engrossing story that I enjoyed. Ambiguous time and setting which works really well with the subject matter. 

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Posted in Ready. Aim. Fire.

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Congratulations, your poem is

Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017

Congratulations, your poem is our Facebook/Twitter pick of the day. Please like and share if you enjoyed it too.

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Posted in Love in Sight

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