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I have 22 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 53221 times and 30 of my stories have been cherry picked.
31 of my 1,967 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 32 votes

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simon whitworth

 

My stories

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Story of the week

Spank the Monkey

A story about a man and his monkey set in the future. This is part 1.
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Half a Tangerine (Part 2)

Part 2 of a ghost story. Will he make it home?
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Story of the week

Half a Tangerine (Part 1)

A ghost story for Christmas in two parts.
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Some Seam Shared

So she's slumped over sobbing, great heaves of regret falling onto orange nylon, and there's a baby murmuring and the still-hot-hard brittle sound of...
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Raising the Dead

...and what would they have to say for themselves?

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31 of my comments have received 32 Great Feedback votes

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This is well deserving of

Posted on Mon, 19 Nov 2018

This is well deserving of cherries Rhiannon and today they are gold in colour. I've read this a few times now and can appreciate how difficult the form must have been to use and make the poem work as well as you have. Congratulations, this is our...

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Posted in Cywydd [Cuh-with] Form, Wintery

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This incredible poem is our

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2017

This incredible poem is our Twitter/Facebook pick of the day. It could not be more relevant, please like and share so others can read it.

 

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Posted in sometimes

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I like to think I'm pretty

Posted on Wed, 10 Apr 2019

I like to think I'm pretty good at choosing an eye-catching title for my poems and stories, but this is a humdinger. I take my hat off to you Sir.

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Posted in I'm In Jail Because Of My Wife's Breasts

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You had me at Pickled

Posted on Mon, 01 Apr 2019

You had me at Pickled Hemorrhoid, and now I know how to spell hemorrhoid correctly.

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Posted in The Unsent Letter

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An excellent poem Di,

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

An excellent poem Di, particularly fond of like glitter in a snowglobe shook. I like the shopping detail very much as well, gives the poem an anchor.

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Posted in herring gull gallantry

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Lovely, a simple thing made

Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018

Lovely, a simple thing made beautiful in your poem.

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Posted in love and laundry

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Cracking.

Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018

Cracking.

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Posted in Elsewhere

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This is a belter and is most

Posted on Wed, 16 May 2018

This is a belter and is most definitely ou Facebook/Twitter pick of the day. If you enjoyed Crazu and Trazu's adventures, please like and share so others can enjoy.

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Posted in Crazu the Brave

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I always thought as I got

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

I always thought as I got older, I would become more right wing than my socialist early self, but that's like saying the older you get, the more of an uncaring, stupid cunt you become. I am at a loss to understand why people vote the way they do...

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Posted in coldest planet

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You've educated me. I thought

Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2018

You've educated me. I thought Gilgamesh was the bad wizard in The Smurfs and The Smurfs 2. This is very good Ewan. The masterstroke - convince millions trampled underfoot to lap up the pain and poverty by pinpointing a common enemy. Rinse and...

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Posted in Gods And Men

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