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I have 22 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 58442 times and 30 of my stories have been cherry picked.
41 of my 1,995 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 43 votes

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simon whitworth

 

My stories

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Story of the week

Spank the Monkey

A story about a man and his monkey set in the future. This is part 1.
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Half a Tangerine (Part 2)

Part 2 of a ghost story. Will he make it home?
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Story of the week

Half a Tangerine (Part 1)

A ghost story for Christmas in two parts.
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Some Seam Shared

So she's slumped over sobbing, great heaves of regret falling onto orange nylon, and there's a baby murmuring and the still-hot-hard brittle sound of...
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Gold cherry

Raising the Dead

...and what would they have to say for themselves?

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41 of my comments have received 43 Great Feedback votes

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You're like that basketball

Posted on Wed, 13 Nov 2019

You're like that basketball player called Carl Malone whose nickname was "The Mailman" because he always delivered.  - I can't remember reading something of yours I didn't enjoy. 

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Posted in A river slipping by

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This is well deserving of

Posted on Mon, 19 Nov 2018

This is well deserving of cherries Rhiannon and today they are gold in colour. I've read this a few times now and can appreciate how difficult the form must have been to use and make the poem work as well as you have. Congratulations, this is our...

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Posted in Cywydd [Cuh-with] Form, Wintery

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This incredible poem is our

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2017

This incredible poem is our Twitter/Facebook pick of the day. It could not be more relevant, please like and share so others can read it.

 

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Posted in sometimes

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Just brilliant. Jammed with

Posted on Fri, 24 Jan 2020

Just brilliant. Jammed with the minute detail of the ordinary made wonderful and very funny. 

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Posted in A Piece of Ass. Part 4. Mermaid.

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This wonderful poem is our

Posted on Thu, 23 Jan 2020

This wonderful poem is our Facebook/Twitter pick for today. Please like and share if you agree. 

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Posted in January

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Not the raging sea of a

Posted on Wed, 15 Jan 2020

Not the raging sea or a turbid heart...  One of the best opening lines I have read in a while. The poem that follows is wonderful. Congratulations, this our Facebook/Twitter pick for today. If you enjoyed Yutka's beautiful poem, please give it a...

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Posted in Song of the Water Spirit

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We are not street corner

Posted on Wed, 15 Jan 2020

We are not street corner scarecrows to frit the unwary...brilliant line, brilliant poem.

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Posted in The Low Men

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Congratulations! Ewan's story

Posted on Thu, 12 Dec 2019

Congratulations! Ewan's story is our Facebook/Twitter pick for today. Please like and share so others can enoy it too.

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Posted in Breakfast at Georgiou's

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Just brilliant writing.

Posted on Thu, 28 Nov 2019

Just brilliant writing.

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Posted in Seven Nights at the Flamingo Hotel (Friday, at work. The Greatest Love of All. Polye Thylene.)

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Congratulations! This is our

Posted on Thu, 21 Nov 2019

Congratulations! This is our Facebook/Twitter pick for today. Please like and share if you enjoyed it as much as we have.

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Posted in Mars

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