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2600 of my comments have received 2664 Great Feedback votes

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Part of something bigger? I'd

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2016

Part of something bigger? I'd love to read more of this..

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Beautifully done. The

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

Beautifully done. The repetition works really well. One to read aloud

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you rated the story fine! It

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

you rated the story fine! It's just if you know you have something not U rated in the first few lines, then make sure you create a teaser without those words - so in this instance I omitted the 'fucked in the head'. I hope that makes sense

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You've correctly categorised

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

You've correctly categorised this as an 18, but the teaser (which defaults to the first couple of lines) appears on the front page, and so it has to be U rated - as well as the title.  I've fixed this one for you

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if it's published, why not

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

if it's published, why not put a link here, so people can buy it? If not, I'd love to read another extract!

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Posted in Mwambeshi Memories

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A delightful piece of life

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

A delightful piece of life writing. Is it part of something bigger?

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Posted in Mwambeshi Memories

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A good start! I like the way

Posted on Sun, 10 Apr 2016

A good start! I like the way it jumps all over the place (in sync with the character). Do post more soon

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A very interesting idea!

Posted on Sat, 02 Apr 2016

A very interesting idea!

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Posted in Another time Another Place

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I didn't see that coming!

Posted on Wed, 30 Mar 2016

I didn't see that coming! This might work even better if you drew it out a bit - spent more time on the hunt for the man, perhaps even his history. Very well done as it is though!

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couple of typos in this:

Posted on Fri, 25 Mar 2016

couple of typos in this:

look pass the bed

look pass the person

and also I'm not sure about a la chacun - shouldn't it be chacun a ses besoins etc?

 

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