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Welcome to ABC Venegas. I

Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2013

Welcome to ABC Venegas. I enjoyed reading this - you have an easy writing style. I hope you'll post more soon. As you mention specific people and places quite often, you might want to change their names, given the nature of your writing.

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Hello Enemy - welcome to ABC.

Posted on Fri, 06 Dec 2013

Hello Enemy - welcome to ABC. I'm not a fantasy fan, so you should take it as a compliment when I say I found this very readable. You write with an easy fluency, although it would be a good idea to have another edit to remove some typos. I will...

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..... a very nicely paced,

Posted on Wed, 16 Oct 2013

..... a nicely paced, well-rounded peice. I enjoyed it very much.

One tiny suggestion: for authenticity, I think they would have used the word "wireless" instead of radio then. 

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Hi Maddi - you said all

Posted on Sun, 13 Jan 2013

Hi Maddi - you said all comments welcome so .... first "Fred woke with a finish" ... not quite sure finish is the right word here More generally .... I enjoyed reading this, but I think it needs some rearranging. It's quite odd that you don't...Read full comment

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there's something different

Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2011

there's something different about the style of this, compared to your usual - what do you think fatboy? It's very good, and I really like it - it just seems unlike you (not in a bad way)Read full comment

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I like this very much

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I like this very muchRead full comment

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That was really good

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That was really goodRead full comment

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