lenchenelf

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I have 236 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 295070 times and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
41 of my 1,126 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 47 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

 

My stories

Gold cherry

Out in the Fields

Inspiration point/speed write
Cherry

Pretty Woman

Edited repost from 2019 No, not that appalling film.
Cherry

Hoist Your Colours

Repost. Removed because I reflected that it may be too simple, angry and direct. It is, what it is.
Gold cherry

Table

Love doodle
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41 of my comments have received 47 Great Feedback votes

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Possibly..

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2019

...the most memorable and resonating piece I've read this year. Your ability to bring sense of place, immediacy of actions and effect within a context of past events are skilfully controlled and enviable, you never let the narrative run away from...

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Posted in Trees on the Arapuni Road

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Hello RhiannonW

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, there have been initiatives to clear up our de-oxygenated waterways from physical clutter and grot, but in truth, this is constantly undermined by raw sewage dumps from manufacturers and water...

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Posted in Out in the Fields

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Keep on

Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019

...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light

xxx

L

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Posted in Bar room blues

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Like this very much Tina,

Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014

Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)

all the best

Lena x

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Posted in Definitely Not Just Another Dog Story

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Sharp

Posted on Wed, 20 Oct 2021

We indulge our fancies in nature, they find their own balance.

best

L xx

 

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Posted in A Sparrow

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Subtle

Posted on Mon, 18 Oct 2021

...as ever Luigi; so often we lose ourselves in ephemera of day to day, reverie of the past and don't notice the juggerernaut of our future until it is almost upon us.

Best wishes

Lena xx

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Posted in A Sleepless Night

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Clever

Posted on Tue, 12 Oct 2021

You balance empathy and personal loss with objectivity, insider humour an essential pivot. Though he would be a bit miffed that they'd kept the seat of his demise as a preserved vintage curiousity rather than investigated as he wished!

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Posted in The Senile Neurologist

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Don't

Posted on Sun, 10 Oct 2021

change it unless it jars Your soundscape. 

Good stuff

best

Lena xx

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Posted in My Body Belongs to the Earth

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Lesson 1

Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021

...how to survive and thrive under patriarchy.

Beautiful and elegant, smashing piece.

Best wishes

Lx

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Posted in To Begin at the Beginning

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Not at all Luigi

Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021

Your piece captures movement, passion, a moment, my thought merely a reflection on their dance and your vision ...

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Posted in Autumn Leaves

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