lenchenelf

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I have 235 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 287456 times and 115 of my stories have been cherry picked.
31 of my 1,100 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

My stories

Cherry

Pretty Woman

Edited repost from 2019 No, not that appalling film.
Cherry

Hoist Your Colours

Repost. Removed because I reflected that it may be too simple, angry and direct. It is, what it is.
Gold cherry

Table

Love doodle
1 likes
Cherry

Not Digitally Enhanced

Absentminded doodle

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31 of my comments have received 36 Great Feedback votes

3 Votes

Possibly..

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2019

...the most memorable and resonating piece I've read this year. Your ability to bring sense of place, immediacy of actions and effect within a context of past events are skilfully controlled and enviable, you never let the narrative run away from...

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Posted in Trees on the Arapuni Road

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Keep on

Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019

...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light

xxx

L

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Posted in Bar room blues

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Like this very much Tina,

Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014

Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)

all the best

Lena x

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Posted in Definitely Not Just Another Dog Story

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Well drawn

Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021

...and enjoyed.

Best

L xx

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Posted in later

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Lovely

Posted on Sun, 11 Apr 2021

...quiet and lovely.

best

Lxx

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Posted in Trout

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:)

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Your poems beg to be read aloud for their inner music, smashing stuff  x

best

L x

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Posted in Toad

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Lovely

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Evocative and a delight to read.

best

L x

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Posted in Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

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Don't forget

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

... to forgive yourself, for feeling and being vulnerable; you are not the responsible adult in this situation. Several have given good advice and contacts in preceding comments, reach out, you need and deserve support.

In doing so, you...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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Its seeming simplicity...

Posted on Sun, 13 Dec 2020

...belies intrinsic complexity, really enjoyed reading.

best

L x

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Posted in Certain Memories

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There's nowt wrong

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2020

... with a bit of experimental noodling, as many have echoed, truth can be found in the strangest of places :)

best

L x

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Posted in Phyllida Case

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