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I have 224 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 230249 times and 101 of my stories have been cherry picked.
17 of my 1,031 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 18 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

My stories

Cherry

Statesmanship

Who the heck knows DaftDoodle
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Cherry

Her Gift

What was of real value?
Gold cherry

Adrift

Edited repost. Nearly five doodle

Hand on the Dial

Temperature of change

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17 of my comments have received 18 Great Feedback votes

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Like this very much Tina,

Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014

Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)

all the best

Lena x

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Posted in Definitely Not Just Another Dog Story

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Now there's a song

Posted on Fri, 09 Aug 2019

...in the making.

Enjoyed

Lxx

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Posted in The Ballad of Laura Middleton

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Subjects frozen..

Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019

...in current climate of distaste for those who don't fit a functional mould. Damned good write Ewan, Rylands curates relics and fortunes in literary text, who holds or promises concrete future for those unwritten?

best wishes

Lena...

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Posted in Winter in Manchester

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Enjoyed

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018

I like ideas running through this; futility of pinning a butterfly wing of time, "She said they only knew how to pin minutes" and the inevitability of decay, however wrought. 

 

all the best

Lena x

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Posted in Pins (3)

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Good to hear your voice again :)

Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018

Gut reaction: I like the format, sands of time and an inhale <> exhale of lungs breathing through the scented trail of the past (you draw attention to smell several times) Good stuff sir.

best regards

Lena x

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Posted in The Journey Back

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...Did that...

Posted on Thu, 05 Oct 2017

...and the clutter pile began again. We are our memories, however we amass and tag them :)

Like very much.

Best regards

Lena x

 

 

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Posted in Vanity and Bonfires

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Each detail.

Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017

...blends, but stark in its own right. The submerged in water and life beneath earth, that creates earth, a draw to the eye and mind. Excellent, enjoyed reading xx

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Posted in Submerged

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Striking

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

Damned enjoyable. The narrator as  alienated observer, is crafted well. A sense of this pervades. Though at an uneasy peace with a culture and heat to which he does not belong, he yet observes in practice, and masters local pleasantries. Again...

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Posted in Tail-end

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Embracing ..

Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016

... an idealised memory of self and nation...that never was.....

Good read.

Lena x

 

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Posted in Dream On

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Duality...

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016

...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry  so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.

hug to you and your...

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Posted in The Silent Witness

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