lenchenelf

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I have 233 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 274566 times and 112 of my stories have been cherry picked.
29 of my 1,083 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 34 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

My stories

Cherry

Hoist Your Colours

Repost. Removed because I reflected that it may be too simple, angry and direct. It is, what it is.
Gold cherry

Table

Love doodle
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Cherry

Not Digitally Enhanced

Absentminded doodle
Cherry

Marshmallows

Thanks
Gold cherry

No matter the grey

https://www.abctales.com/inspiration-point-ip
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29 of my comments have received 34 Great Feedback votes

3 Votes

Possibly..

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2019

...the most memorable and resonating piece I've read this year. Your ability to bring sense of place, immediacy of actions and effect within a context of past events are skilfully controlled and enviable, you never let the narrative run away from...

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Posted in Trees on the Arapuni Road

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Keep on

Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019

...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light

xxx

L

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Posted in Bar room blues

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Like this very much Tina,

Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014

Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)

all the best

Lena x

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Posted in Definitely Not Just Another Dog Story

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:)

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Your poems beg to be read aloud for their inner music, smashing stuff  x

best

L x

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Posted in Toad

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Lovely

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Evocative and a delight to read.

best

L x

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Posted in Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

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Don't forget

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

... to forgive yourself, for feeling and being vulnerable; you are not the responsible adult in this situation. Several have given good advice and contacts in preceding comments, reach out, you need and deserve support.

In doing so, you...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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Its seeming simplicity...

Posted on Sun, 13 Dec 2020

...belies intrinsic complexity, really enjoyed reading.

best

L x

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Posted in Certain Memories

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There's nowt wrong

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2020

... with a bit of experimental noodling, as many have echoed, truth can be found in the strangest of places :)

best

L x

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Posted in Phyllida Case

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How quiet...

Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2020

still and unknowable that space between them and us, where words and images repeated often enough on social media become meaningless, taste of ashes or nothing but our own tooth decay.. Looking forward to you kicking 'em inna googlies for the...

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Posted in Burning Bridges

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Like this a good deal, puts

Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2019

Like this a good deal, puts me in mind of Wendell Berrys' "Peace of Wild Things" and the work of Mary Oliver.

Best L x

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Posted in Black Herons

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