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I have 230 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 558620 times
and 172 of my stories have been cherry picked.
189 of my 1,587 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 202 votes

Metaphor
Posted on Wed, 25 Oct 2023
... well handled, loan sharks, or bloodsuckers?
Loved "The “what if?” question circled like a bi-plane stalking a giant gorilla."
"The only light was from streetlamps on the sidewalk; shadows and silhouettes shifted about in the...
Read full commentPosted in Diner
Acidulated
Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023
...like cut apples, to preserve colour when exposed to air.
Tart, Paul, very sharp :)
Nicely done.
best
L xx
Read full commentPosted in This England
:)
Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023
Inspired. My son and daughter had an innate ability to pick out the patterns in music, daughter taught herself to sight read music at age seven; son was ascribing numbers rather than musical notation to Bach at age 20mths he could "hear it",...
Read full commentPosted in Music
Clever
Posted on Thu, 05 Oct 2023
...and lovely; children are young scientists learning to ask the right questions of the world around them :)
best
L x
Read full commentPosted in The puzzle of shadows
:)
Posted on Thu, 28 Sep 2023
Such a lovely snapshot, we fetched up in Anglesey a few weeks back and the weather made scenery dance from foreboding to welcoming laughter, you've caught that here.
best
L x
Read full commentPosted in Pembrokeshire — two seasons
Lyrical
Posted on Wed, 27 Sep 2023
and quite lovely, what a super memory to have.
I'll bet the Irish tourist board would love this. it's now on my wish list of places to visit :)
best
L x
Read full commentPosted in Beneath Cnoc Daod
Controlled
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
and more powerful for it.
Good stuff.
best
L x
Read full commentPosted in Nisi
Thanks Paul
Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2023
Just listened, so lovely.
best to you
L xx
Read full commentPosted in Queen Of Creation
Stunning
Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023
Absorbing, rich in detail. I found myself immersed. Amost a song/aria/opera in its pace.
So good, a world into which the reader is mesmerised by unfolding dimensions without ever being repulsed.
That, I feel, is how to make folk ...
Read full commentPosted in (This Life) Part 10 – Chapter 1: The Dream Catcher’s Tale
Compassion and Empathy
Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023
... are gifts we have as humans, but use too infrequently.
best to you, thought provoking (as it should be) Poem ...
Read full commentPosted in 'With what judgment you judge, you will be judged'
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