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I have 249 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 354052 times and 146 of my stories have been cherry picked.
108 of my 1,368 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 117 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

 

My stories

Cherry

Seasoning

Guess How Much I love you?
Cherry

Maple fall.

Syrup free doodle.
Cherry

All Saints

Who, us guv?

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108 of my comments have received 117 Great Feedback votes

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Twigged

Posted on Thu, 28 Oct 2021

..after the first stream, good stuff.

Small typo "..didn’t look right/good/geunine"

The "not autistic" unecessary I feel.

best wishes

L x

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Posted in Pain au chocolat

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So good.

Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021

You've taken a theme explored by many horror/fantasy tale tellers and given it a superb new twist

Timeless allegorical warning. Cracking read.

Best

Lena xx

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Posted in Wintered Thin

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O I Larfed

Posted on Sun, 24 Oct 2021

"A poem is about as much effort as picking your nose. Though it breathes new meaning into the expression: ‘Food for thought.’ "

Saha!

"Whistles for hoard of grubby, lyrical upcoming urchins with potential of unpaid placement in an...

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Posted in Cash for Cherries, Food for Thought

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Sharp

Posted on Wed, 20 Oct 2021

We indulge our fancies in nature, they find their own balance.

best

L xx

 

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Posted in A Sparrow

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Subtle

Posted on Mon, 18 Oct 2021

...as ever Luigi; so often we lose ourselves in ephemera of day to day, reverie of the past and don't notice the juggerernaut of our future until it is almost upon us.

Best wishes

Lena xx

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Posted in A Sleepless Night

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Don't

Posted on Sun, 10 Oct 2021

change it unless it jars Your soundscape. 

Good stuff

best

Lena xx

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Posted in My Body Belongs to the Earth

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Lesson 1

Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021

...how to survive and thrive under patriarchy.

Beautiful and elegant, smashing piece.

Best wishes

Lx

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Posted in To Begin at the Beginning

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Not at all Luigi

Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021

Your piece captures movement, passion, a moment, my thought merely a reflection on their dance and your vision ...

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Posted in Autumn Leaves

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Enjoyed

Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021

...reading, a peep into Cecilys' world.

Best wishes

Lx

 

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Posted in Beneath An Autumn Moon The Poem

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Well drawn

Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021

...and enjoyed.

Best

L xx

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