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I have 228 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 525930 times
and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
176 of my 1,544 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 188 votes

Juxtaposition
Posted on Mon, 27 Feb 2023
of attachment and imbued meaning in cherished "stuff" and that of personal freedom in that which is free of ritual meaning nicely done.
"It was as if she had taken
its form, eager to remain
refusing to vacate, her...
Read full commentPosted in Triptych
You play
Posted on Thu, 09 Feb 2023
with words to cushion their blow, our loved ones lives are carried and vivified by ours.
Lovely.
Best as always
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in For As Long As
Pretty and immersive;
Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023
Liked the clever use of "mossy dew kissing uncloven feet." to remove hint of mythos, purely a shared joy of an observable and natural world :)
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in The Great and Secret Show
Good read
Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023
I like the way his thoughts meander, grief as the rain always there, even in his brightest memory. Well handled, no jump scare, just love.
best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?
Gentle and quiet reflection
Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022
Gentle and quiet reflection on the strength of their love. Saddened and sorry for your loss Ewan.
Best to you and your family
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Hereafter
Just
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
...what I needed, rousing, reflective and textured reverie.
Enjoyable read, well written.
Best to you and thanks
Lena xx
Read full commentPosted in Variations on a Poem Read at My Mother's Funeral
Laughed out loud
Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022
" I leaned into the driving rain, half-expecting to see some demented Charlotte Bronte fan channelling Kate Bush and running hell for leather down the hillside, without actually wearing any shoes."
" ...the door opened with a...
Read full commentPosted in Bronte's Inferno XXI ("Com-for-ta-ble")
Who...
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022
is going to drop whom into Janets's Foss and make a wish ;)
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Bronte's Inferno XIX (Alligator Lizards On The Way To Malham)
There's nothing like
Posted on Wed, 19 Oct 2022
... an open offer, and that's nothing like one.
Enjoyed
Lena xx
Read full commentPosted in Bronte's Inferno XVII (Probably In His Underpants)
Though they, steeped
Posted on Sun, 25 Sep 2022
in Ichor, chirp beyond our our pen.
A fine piece.
Lena xx
Read full commentPosted in The Ghost of The Bird
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