lenchenelf

Primary tabs

TypeTitleAuthorRepliesLast updated
StoryTroy and Me (A Christmas Tale) Part 2 drew_gummerson1213 hours 35 min ago
StoryUgly Puggly 99 celticman102 days 8 hours ago
StoryThe Woman on the Other Side of the Screen Ewan123 days 7 hours ago
StoryCascade Lady mcscraic115 days 13 hours ago
StoryPulses TJW86 days 5 hours ago
StoryIn These Small Things lenchenelf21 week 12 hours ago
StoryVariations on a Poem Read at My Mother's Funeral Kilb5082 weeks 2 days ago
StoryOf War and Peace luigi_pagano122 weeks 4 days ago
StoryCenter of its own Universe lenchenelf193 weeks 9 hours ago
StoryIvy Ciadish53 weeks 2 days ago
StoryYou Smell Ciadish33 weeks 5 days ago
StoryThe mayfly hoalarg173 weeks 6 days ago
StoryBronte's Inferno XXII (Enough Room For Hattie Jacques) Ewan11 month 3 days ago
StoryDown Pigsty Hill catherine poarch221 month 1 week ago
StoryOur Second Core Belief is Loyalty-Based Leadership csquirrel71 month 1 week ago
StoryBronte's Inferno XXI ("Com-for-ta-ble") Ewan21 month 1 week ago
StoryUgly Puggly 98 celticman51 month 1 week ago
StoryUgly Puggly 97 celticman61 month 1 week ago
StoryUgly Puggly 96 celticman111 month 1 week ago
StoryUgly Puggly 95 celticman101 month 2 weeks ago
StoryUgly Puggly 93 celticman91 month 2 weeks ago
StoryClimate, Change. lenchenelf91 month 2 weeks ago
StoryBronte's Inferno XIX (Alligator Lizards On The Way To Malham) Ewan11 month 2 weeks ago
StoryUgly Puggly 92 celticman141 month 2 weeks ago
StoryUgly Puggly 91 celticman91 month 2 weeks ago

Pages

My stories

Gold cherry
Poem of the week
Pick of the Month

Center of its own Universe

Smol Doodle whimsy
1 likes
Gold cherry

At this time

mid-season doodle
1 likes
Cherry

Feint Right

edited doodle
Gold cherry

Contour and wave.

Inspiration Point "Contest" doodle
1 likes

Pages

108 of my comments have received 117 Great Feedback votes

3 Votes

Possibly..

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2019

...the most memorable and resonating piece I've read this year. Your ability to bring sense of place, immediacy of actions and effect within a context of past events are skilfully controlled and enviable, you never let the narrative run away from...

Read full comment

Posted in Trees on the Arapuni Road

2 Votes

:)

Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022

Good stuff Jack; I can see what Ewan means in his well measured comment, it is startling, but in UP's defence and character so far, so is he, and quite like a few folk I know who will, prompted or not, become very concise and articulate when...

Read full comment

Posted in Ugly Puggly 7

2 Votes

Stripped down

Posted on Wed, 09 Mar 2022

language, controlled, the poem becomes an embodiment of the poetic voice in pain.

Very, very good

L x

 

Read full comment

Posted in Nil by Mouth

2 Votes

Buffoonery

Posted on Wed, 24 Nov 2021

... emanating from any political/ideological standpoint leaves said performance open to a prod in a free and democratic society, and Ewan delivers a goodly poke in a satirical music-hall/ballad style as would have been tradition for many a...

Read full comment

Posted in It Seems Our Leader Is Unwell

2 Votes

Hello RhiannonW

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, there have been initiatives to clear up our de-oxygenated waterways from physical clutter and grot, but in truth, this is constantly undermined by raw sewage dumps from manufacturers and water...

Read full comment

Posted in Out in the Fields

2 Votes

Keep on

Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019

...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light

xxx

L

Read full comment

Posted in Bar room blues

2 Votes

Like this very much Tina,

Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014

Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)

all the best

Lena x

Read full comment

Posted in Definitely Not Just Another Dog Story

1 Vote

Just

Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022

...what I needed, rousing, reflective and  textured reverie.

Enjoyable read, well written.

Best to you and thanks

Lena xx

Read full comment

Posted in Variations on a Poem Read at My Mother's Funeral

1 Vote

Laughed out loud

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

 

" I leaned into the driving rain, half-expecting to see some demented Charlotte Bronte fan channelling Kate Bush and running hell for leather down the hillside, without actually wearing any shoes."

" ...the door opened with a...

Read full comment

Posted in Bronte's Inferno XXI ("Com-for-ta-ble")

1 Vote

Who...

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022

is going to drop whom into Janets's Foss and make a wish ;)

Best

Lena x

Read full comment

Posted in Bronte's Inferno XIX (Alligator Lizards On The Way To Malham)

Pages