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My stories

Hand on the Dial

Temperature of change
Cherry

Ocular

Doodle while musing in a glade.
Cherry

Talkin' Brass

Uncomplicated Jarrow doodle.
Cherry

Thrum

harmonics in the breeze doodle

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23 of my comments have received 27 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

Good to hear your voice again :)

Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018

Gut reaction: I like the format, sands of time and an inhale <> exhale of lungs breathing through the scented trail of the past (you draw attention to smell several times) Good stuff sir.

best regards

Lena x

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Posted in The Journey Back

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...Did that...

Posted on Thu, 05 Oct 2017

...and the clutter pile began again. We are our memories, however we amass and tag them :)

Like very much.

Best regards

Lena x

 

 

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Posted in Vanity and Bonfires

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Each detail.

Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017

...blends, but stark in its own right. The submerged in water and life beneath earth, that creates earth, a draw to the eye and mind. Excellent, enjoyed reading xx

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Posted in Submerged

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Striking

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

Damned enjoyable. The narrator as  alienated observer, is crafted well. A sense of this pervades. Though at an uneasy peace with a culture and heat to which he does not belong, he yet observes in practice, and masters local pleasantries. Again...

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Posted in Tail-end

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Embracing ..

Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016

... an idealised memory of self and nation...that never was.....

Good read.

Lena x

 

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Posted in Dream On

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Duality...

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016

...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry  so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.

hug to you and your...

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Posted in The Silent Witness

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Lovely

Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016

as the tide's wave on sand; melancholy, joy, breathe in,  breathe out.

best regards

Lena xx

 

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Posted in Girl with Yellow Wings (Poetry Monthly)

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Succint

Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016

..and successfully conveys amongst other many other inherent themes, simplicity and complexity of learned motor skills/comfort/autopilot as part of addiction/comfort process (mimes filling and switching on electric kettle)  Like,like, like....

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This..

Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014

...'

 within the tangled scrim,

a branch snags, and eyes – orbs, 

a lethal mix of ambergris

and antonyms

reflect –  become

the moon.'

 

By crikey lovely lass, tha' can conjure dark beauty!...

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Posted in Night Moves

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Lovely surreal soundscape...

Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2014

... I wondered if you might look at your enjambment and punctuation; consider pace you'd like the reader to follow with eye and heart. Quick review of spelling. All these edits I make too, so not poking at you. :)

best wishes

lena...

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