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Keep on
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light
Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)
for its presentation, and as a poet you ask yourself, as many do, do you write for this for purely this time and audience or for truth of humanity throughout tech and age, evoke and critique what we are? Really like what you've done.
Keep on
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light
xxx
L
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Like this very much Tina,
Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014
Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)
all the best
Lena x
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Happy Birthday Ewan
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2026
Interesting times indeed, some so awful that it robs us of speech to encompass the enourmity of that which overwhelms in our seeming futility.
Timely and taut.
Hope you found some personal joy on your day, music need not be loud to...
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Oranges
Posted on Tue, 24 Feb 2026
and clemantines yield an intense sweetness if juiced when slightly wrinkled
I...
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Thoughtful and measured
Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2026
for its presentation, and as a poet you ask yourself, as many do, do you write for this for purely this time and audience or for truth of humanity throughout tech and age, evoke and critique what we are? Really like what you've done.
Best...
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Wistful smile
Posted on Thu, 04 Dec 2025
Nicely told, I often re-visit Pennine walks I can't take anymore, hope my memories hold at least :)
Best as ever
Lena x
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Sharp description
Posted on Tue, 25 Nov 2025
... formed in little slices to underpin sensation in cut of sudden winter.
Delightful.
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Glinting Diamonds Everywhere!
Love it,
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2025
wry and telling: modern "magical" aspirations deconstructed
best as...
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Structure
Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025
carefully crafted to reflect fragmentation of thought displaced by ever present unwanted memory.
Excellent
best as ever
Lena
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Reminds me
Posted on Thu, 16 Oct 2025
of Plath and her figs of opportunity in The Bell Jar.
Good read and enjoyed
best
Lena x
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