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Keep on
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light
Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)
Thoughtful, and cradles quiet despair back to earth....
I like the way you write, in general folk can walk in, superficially explore your gallery in spite of small signposts suggesting, erm, there is more, but will still take away a small...
"Carol was back on the scene and already, Vanessa was carrying the resulting emotions like a simmering pustule of interned venom; objectionable sibling syndrome, there’s no cure but a good friend will listen to you scream while you lance the...
"The roofs were grey. Tom thought they looked like the sides of matchboxes, where the matches were struck. He imagined a big match coming down from the sky and running along them until it sparked into flame"
Keep on
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light
xxx
L
Read full commentPosted in Bar room blues
Like this very much Tina,
Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014
Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)
all the best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Definitely Not Just Another Dog Story
Ahh,
Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2025
...the conveniently forgotten bits no country wants to brag about.
best
Lx
Read full commentPosted in Wrong Town On A Sunday
oo-er
Posted on Fri, 11 Apr 2025
Couple of deadly sins begining to peek through in this relationship :)
Best as ever
L x
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 57
Thoughtful, and cradles quiet
Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025
Thoughtful, and cradles quiet despair back to earth....
I like the way you write, in general folk can walk in, superficially explore your gallery in spite of small signposts suggesting, erm, there is more, but will still take away a small...
Read full commentPosted in The Young Man
:)
Posted on Fri, 28 Feb 2025
"... a lorry full of squid"
A surreal and yet parallel universe unfolds. :)
Best
L x
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 54
:)
Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2024
"Carol was back on the scene and already, Vanessa was carrying the resulting emotions like a simmering pustule of interned venom; objectionable sibling syndrome, there’s no cure but a good friend will listen to you scream while you lance the...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 44
Raised tea cup...
Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2024
to Crado, saddened for you. The marvellous adventure and Seafood Spaghetti sound wonderful.
"four snorkelers snorkelling " now embedded and will sneak into the L-Elf seasonal family squawk-along while baking later this year :)
Best...
Read full commentPosted in The Old Man and the Libyan Sea
In the moment,
Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2024
well caught: I won't call this a snapshot, because you take us back, take us there and I'm grinning like a peach on the wall :)
best to you
L
Read full commentPosted in Tom Tom Turnaround (3)
Full, vibrant
Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024
...enjoyed.
"The roofs were grey. Tom thought they looked like the sides of matchboxes, where the matches were struck. He imagined a big match coming down from the sky and running along them until it sparked into flame"
Spare use...
Read full commentPosted in Tom Tom Turnaround (1)
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