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Keep on
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light
Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)
Thoughtful, and cradles quiet despair back to earth....
I like the way you write, in general folk can walk in, superficially explore your gallery in spite of small signposts suggesting, erm, there is more, but will still take away a small...
Keep on
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light
xxx
L
Read full commentPosted in Bar room blues
Like this very much Tina,
Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014
Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)
all the best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Definitely Not Just Another Dog Story
So much said...
Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025
quietly, and with grace.
"Gulls seem noble here, hermits
not beggars all must be living with us; even were the sea
empty and their searching faith only, this place is better
dusk is winning and we...
Read full commentPosted in before Floris
There's a hint...
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2025
of Wilde and Wodehouse in the humour:
" ‘I’ve been up close to it. The paint is very real, I can assure you.’
Enjoyed
L
Posted in Rodeo
Exquisite
Posted on Sun, 20 Jul 2025
"where grief rips and burns"
Yes, we search and find, where wild things thrive.
Best to you
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in The Fox and the Elm Tree
S'lovely
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
...to just walk away from my laptop after a cuppa break. I refuse to have any of those apps. on my phone.
Cleverly done young Lawrie :)
best
L
Read full commentPosted in 3 oz of Insanity
Enjoyed
Posted on Tue, 06 May 2025
I've looked forward to each installment and have loved the humour suffused in...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You - Part 61 (the end)
Ahh,
Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2025
...the conveniently forgotten bits no country wants to brag about.
best
Lx
Read full commentPosted in Wrong Town On A Sunday
oo-er
Posted on Fri, 11 Apr 2025
Couple of deadly sins begining to peek through in this relationship :)
Best as ever
L x
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 57
Thoughtful, and cradles quiet
Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025
Thoughtful, and cradles quiet despair back to earth....
I like the way you write, in general folk can walk in, superficially explore your gallery in spite of small signposts suggesting, erm, there is more, but will still take away a small...
Read full commentPosted in The Young Man
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