before Floris

By Di_Hard
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bright low disc shining through cool ruffled grey clouds, late sun
caught on purple knapweed and creamy meadowsweet sprays
where our goal opens, calm's pull
to tranquil west, peace embracing this bay, Saint Ninian's
heron, long and shy, upright in flat water; a curlew, curved beak
dibbling clear shallows. Smooth grey sand then white
white shells, come to rest, testament of many cockle lives
broken into a new grace, at crunchy dry seaweed-dark, laced
with cinquefoil's small yellow flowers and questing stalks
like red liquorice. Gulls seem noble here, hermits
not beggars all must be living with us; even were the sea
empty and their searching faith only, this place is better
dusk is winning and we turn back. A shimmering of chirps
Swifts! gathered into thrilling tinsel on telphone wires
change is present everywhere, as thoughts fly
far away; at last governments join in offering
to accept Palestine as a state, and hope sparks
a distant light. Over a stone wall, lush grass
homes a pale universe of clover stars
feeding moths with beauty, frail and prehistoric
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Breathtakingly beautiful -
Breathtakingly beautiful - please don't delete this one di
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My thoughts
Your poetic description of the beautiful nature around you at this time of year and the situation in Palestine are each at opposite ends of the spectrum of what's exists daily n my mind Di. It increases the need for we in safer countries to appreciate what we have.
An excellent thought-provoking poem.
Turlough
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What a lovely place to be,
What a lovely place to be, what a lovely walk! And all recorded in mind and paper/computer. Thank you. Rhiannon
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