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Assembly

By lenchenelf on Tue, 30 Oct 2012

poem

Miscellaneous

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A shift in the scenery

By lenchenelf on Sat, 27 Oct 2012

Poem. minor ed. 30/10/12

Nature

An invalid diet for season's change

By lenchenelf on Wed, 17 Oct 2012

IP Brown and Yellow

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The World Turns

By lenchenelf on Tue, 11 Sep 2012

doodlydoodle

Love

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Striking

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

Damned enjoyable. The narrator as alienated observer, is crafted well. A sense of this pervades. Though at an uneasy peace with a culture and heat to which he does not belong, he yet observes in practice, and masters local pleasantries. Again...

Posted in Tail-end

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Embracing ..

Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016

... an idealised memory of self and nation...that never was.....

Good read.

Lena x

Posted in Dream On

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Duality...

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016

...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.

hug to you and your...

Posted in The Silent Witness

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Lovely

Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016

as the tide's wave on sand; melancholy, joy, breathe in, breathe out.

best regards

Lena xx

Posted in Girl with Yellow Wings (Poetry Monthly)

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Succint

Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016

..and successfully conveys amongst other many other inherent themes, simplicity and complexity of learned motor skills/comfort/autopilot as part of addiction/comfort process (mimes filling and switching on electric kettle) Like,like, like....

Posted in Never forget smoking

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This..

Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014

...'

within the tangled scrim,

a branch snags, and eyes – orbs,

a lethal mix of ambergris

and antonyms

reflect – become

the moon.'

By crikey lovely lass, tha' can conjure dark beauty!...

Posted in Night Moves

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Lovely surreal soundscape...

Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2014

... I wondered if you might look at your enjambment and punctuation; consider pace you'd like the reader to follow with eye and heart. Quick review of spelling. All these edits I make too, so not poking at you. :)

best wishes

lena...

Posted in a light

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Expressed...

Posted on Sat, 26 Jul 2014

...as milk from a breast with mastitis. Some pains cannot be prepared for, You handled this piece with sensitivity and knowing. A carefully worded build of peer networks and experience relied on, to a point where they cannot go, because all else...

Posted in It All Came Out in the Wash

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Surprised...

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

...that this wasn't an editor's choice. You've handled an abhorrent practice with a dry, factual narrative, a voice relating incident as so 'ordinary' as counterpoint to this horror, raising the mostrousity beyond any use of hyperbole.

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