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Subjects frozen..
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
...in current climate of distaste for those who don't fit a functional mould. Damned good write Ewan, Rylands curates relics and fortunes in literary text, who holds or promises concrete future for those unwritten?
I like ideas running through this; futility of pinning a butterfly wing of time, "She said they only knew how to pin minutes" and the inevitability of decay, however wrought.
...blends, but stark in its own right. The submerged in water and life beneath earth, that creates earth, a draw to the eye and mind. Excellent, enjoyed reading xx
Damned enjoyable. The narrator as alienated observer, is crafted well. A sense of this pervades. Though at an uneasy peace with a culture and heat to which he does not belong, he yet observes in practice, and masters local pleasantries. Again...
...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.
..and successfully conveys amongst other many other inherent themes, simplicity and complexity of learned motor skills/comfort/autopilot as part of addiction/comfort process (mimes filling and switching on electric kettle) Like,like, like....
Subjects frozen..
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
...in current climate of distaste for those who don't fit a functional mould. Damned good write Ewan, Rylands curates relics and fortunes in literary text, who holds or promises concrete future for those unwritten?
best wishes
Lena...
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Enjoyed
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
I like ideas running through this; futility of pinning a butterfly wing of time, "She said they only knew how to pin minutes" and the inevitability of decay, however wrought.
all the best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Pins (3)
...Did that...
Posted on Thu, 05 Oct 2017
...and the clutter pile began again. We are our memories, however we amass and tag them :)
Like very much.
Best regards
Lena x
Posted in Vanity and Bonfires
Each detail.
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017
...blends, but stark in its own right. The submerged in water and life beneath earth, that creates earth, a draw to the eye and mind. Excellent, enjoyed reading xx
Read full commentPosted in Submerged
Striking
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Damned enjoyable. The narrator as alienated observer, is crafted well. A sense of this pervades. Though at an uneasy peace with a culture and heat to which he does not belong, he yet observes in practice, and masters local pleasantries. Again...
Read full commentPosted in Tail-end
Embracing ..
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016
... an idealised memory of self and nation...that never was.....
Good read.
Lena x
Posted in Dream On
Duality...
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.
hug to you and your...
Read full commentPosted in The Silent Witness
Lovely
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016
as the tide's wave on sand; melancholy, joy, breathe in, breathe out.
best regards
Lena xx
Posted in Girl with Yellow Wings (Poetry Monthly)
Succint
Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016
..and successfully conveys amongst other many other inherent themes, simplicity and complexity of learned motor skills/comfort/autopilot as part of addiction/comfort process (mimes filling and switching on electric kettle) Like,like, like....
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This..
Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014
...'
within the tangled scrim,
a branch snags, and eyes – orbs,
a lethal mix of ambergris
and antonyms
reflect – become
the moon.'
By crikey lovely lass, tha' can conjure dark beauty!...
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