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Casting call for Sci-fi B movie
Just be.
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Companion planting
Bedding policy.
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Melange IV
Under construction
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Each detail.
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017
...blends, but stark in its own right. The submerged in water and life beneath earth, that creates earth, a draw to the eye and mind. Excellent, enjoyed reading xx
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Striking
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Damned enjoyable. The narrator as alienated observer, is crafted well. A sense of this pervades. Though at an uneasy peace with a culture and heat to which he does not belong, he yet observes in practice, and masters local pleasantries. Again...
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Embracing ..
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016
... an idealised memory of self and nation...that never was.....
Good read.
Lena x
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Duality...
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.
hug to you and your...
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Lovely
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016
as the tide's wave on sand; melancholy, joy, breathe in, breathe out.
best regards
Lena xx
Read full commentPosted in Girl with Yellow Wings (Poetry Monthly)
Succint
Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016
..and successfully conveys amongst other many other inherent themes, simplicity and complexity of learned motor skills/comfort/autopilot as part of addiction/comfort process (mimes filling and switching on electric kettle) Like,like, like....
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This..
Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014
...'
within the tangled scrim,
a branch snags, and eyes – orbs,
a lethal mix of ambergris
and antonyms
reflect – become
the moon.'
By crikey lovely lass, tha' can conjure dark beauty!...
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Lovely surreal soundscape...
Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2014
... I wondered if you might look at your enjambment and punctuation; consider pace you'd like the reader to follow with eye and heart. Quick review of spelling. All these edits I make too, so not poking at you. :)
best wishes
lena...
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Expressed...
Posted on Sat, 26 Jul 2014
...as milk from a breast with mastitis. Some pains cannot be prepared for, You handled this piece with sensitivity and knowing. A carefully worded build of peer networks and experience relied on, to a point where they cannot go, because all else...
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Surprised...
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
...that this wasn't an editor's choice. You've handled an abhorrent practice with a dry, factual narrative, a voice relating incident as so 'ordinary' as counterpoint to this horror, raising the mostrousity beyond any use of hyperbole.
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