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Part of a collection "The Life and Times of Mary" - this is No 3 describing the birth of Mary, who may or may not have existed, into this world and an announcement of her lofty ambitions.
This shows great empathy and understanding of a country which does very often lead to an immediate "love/hate" relationship. The detail shows a sharp eye and the narrative flows very well with the interlinking of your back story with the...
this is a wonderful healing poem. The measured pace forces each word to be savioured before moving on to the next and then the end which is the return to wonder.
Condensed imagery invoking
Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2020
Condensed imagery invoking much
Read full commentPosted in Inconsequence
This shows great empathy and
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
This shows great empathy and understanding of a country which does very often lead to an immediate "love/hate" relationship. The detail shows a sharp eye and the narrative flows very well with the interlinking of your back story with the...
Read full commentPosted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh
Wonderful poem. LIke this
Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021
Wonderful poem. LIke this verse:
"The past leaves
Only prints, disordered.
Details burned beneath the acids
Of emotion, colours telling lies
Hiding in the fade of time"
Just one observation: did...
Read full commentPosted in The Edge of Colour
There are some fantastic
Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2021
There are some fantastic phrases in this poem, this in particular:
"Only
to be woken by crows,
black mornings, broken
by the flight of brimstone
butterflies in transformation."
Beautifully crafted....
Read full commentPosted in Oh, What’s That In The Hollow?
healing
Posted on Sun, 20 Dec 2020
this is a wonderful healing poem. The measured pace forces each word to be savioured before moving on to the next and then the end which is the return to wonder.
bhi
Read full commentPosted in Morning