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I have 13 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1295 times and 3 of my stories have been cherry picked.
5 of my 17 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 5 votes

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Cherry

mary spins herself a wondrous form

No 2 in the series “The Life and Times of Mary” describing the growth of Mary, who may or may not have existed, inside her father’s womb.

Announcing the birth of our sweet Mary

Part of a collection "The Life and Times of Mary" - this is No 3 describing the birth of Mary, who may or may not have existed, into this world and an announcement of her lofty ambitions.

The Anatomy of a Death - Chapter 2: The Waiting Room

Chapter 2 of the story: The police have called Bonny and she is on the way to Victoria Station to meet her sister.

Hiroshima, Mon Amour

My eyes watch the buildings block you, Your scent dissolving, drowned in fumes. Your steps fade, the traffic hisses Higher: the cold freezes your...

Wabi-Sabi

The joyful pursuit of imperfection The teapot in the charity shop window Spout stained, broken and repaired I bought it for three pounds fifty,...
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5 of my comments have received 5 Great Feedback votes

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Condensed imagery invoking

Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2020

Condensed imagery invoking much

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Posted in Inconsequence

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This shows great empathy and

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

This shows great empathy and understanding of a country which does very often lead to an immediate "love/hate" relationship. The detail shows a sharp eye and the narrative flows very well with the interlinking of your back story with the...

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Posted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

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Wonderful poem. LIke this

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021

Wonderful poem. LIke this verse:

"The past leaves

Only prints, disordered.

Details burned beneath the acids

Of emotion, colours telling lies

Hiding in the fade of time"

 

Just one observation: did...

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Posted in The Edge of Colour

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There are some fantastic

Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2021

There are some fantastic phrases in this poem, this in particular:

"Only

to be woken by crows,

black mornings, broken

by the flight of brimstone

butterflies in transformation."

Beautifully crafted....

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Posted in Oh, What’s That In The Hollow?

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healing

Posted on Sun, 20 Dec 2020

this is a wonderful healing poem. The measured pace forces each word to be savioured before moving on to the next and then the end which is the return to wonder. 

bhi

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Posted in Morning