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The Syllables of The Other

By bhi on Wed, 15 Sep 2021

Before the first word a moment, within that moment all moments, and within those moments the collective hymns for each world and each instant of...

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On the bridge

By bhi on Wed, 08 Sep 2021

We met for an early lunch, unplanned - text from you saying, “meet2eat?” I crossed from the north to Borough Market, aromas of the many kitchens...

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The physiognomy of stones

By bhi on Fri, 03 Sep 2021

I can remember my first; bronzed, in the shape of a closed hand, taken from the inner wall of the sleeping hall when the old single storey house was...

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Last night we touched

By bhi on Tue, 31 Aug 2021

Talking in tongues only the flesh understands We moved pulled by Saturn Driven by the tide surge Into the orbit of Mars Our fingers surfing the...

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This is such a rich and dense

Posted on Sun, 08 Aug 2021

This is such a rich and dense poem which evokes the man himself. This is one to savour again and again and allow the words to wash over. You should record this and it would be great to hear the cadence of you in this poem.

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Very clever interpretation.

Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021

Very clever interpretation. This got me thinking - which is never a good thing - about beginnings and endings; the art is to begin something and have the ending in mind, and to build towards that with an open mind and heart and with respect. But...

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The contrast between the

Posted on Tue, 24 Aug 2021

The contrast between the plastic, the throwaway consumer society and the grim realities of life, pushed into the backs of our minds by the gaudiness of the Fair, is portrayed with subtle power and heightened by the last lines which create a...

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Vividly desctribed. This

Posted on Mon, 09 Aug 2021

Vividly desctribed. This captures the progress of rain perfectly, and reminds me of the other morning when I took the dogs for a walk, and we had gone no more than 50 metres when we heard the sheeted feet of a rain storm accelerating up the road...

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beautifully measured from the

Posted on Fri, 06 Aug 2021

beautifully measured from the opening lines to the stunning finish.

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Such a rich and evocative

Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021

Such a rich and evocative poem - I was there, eyes closed and the poem washing over me.

There is nothing as satisfying as watching bees gathering for their hives - we have lavender back and front and the hum of the wings adds to the beauty...

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A wonderfully rich and

Posted on Thu, 05 Aug 2021

A wonderfully rich and evocative account.

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I must say that I will look

Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021

I must say that I will look at Ikea cafes in a totally different light from now on. What a wonderful love poem.