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I have 60 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 11911 times and 44 of my stories have been cherry picked.
39 of my 136 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 41 votes

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Folds

following the theme of passion.
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Cherry

The Syllables of The Other

Before the first word a moment, within that moment all moments, and within those moments the collective hymns for each world and each instant of...
Cherry

On the bridge

We met for an early lunch, unplanned - text from you saying, “meet2eat?” I crossed from the north to Borough Market, aromas of the many kitchens...
Gold cherry

The physiognomy of stones

I can remember my first; bronzed, in the shape of a closed hand, taken from the inner wall of the sleeping hall when the old single storey house was...
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Cherry

Last night we touched

Talking in tongues only the flesh understands We moved pulled by Saturn Driven by the tide surge Into the orbit of Mars Our fingers surfing the...

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39 of my comments have received 41 Great Feedback votes

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This is such a rich and dense

Posted on Sun, 08 Aug 2021

This is such a rich and dense poem which evokes the man himself. This is one to savour again and again and allow the words to wash over. You should record this and it would be great to hear the cadence of you in this poem.

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Posted in Fleeting Observations Of A Poet

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Very clever interpretation.

Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021

Very clever interpretation. This got me thinking - which is never a good thing - about beginnings and endings; the art is to begin something and have the ending in mind, and to build towards that with an open mind and heart and with respect. But...

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Posted in Humpty Dumpty

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The contrast between the

Posted on Tue, 24 Aug 2021

The contrast between the plastic, the throwaway consumer society and the grim realities of life, pushed into the backs of our minds by the gaudiness of the Fair, is portrayed with subtle power and heightened by the last lines which create a...

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Posted in jormungandr

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Vividly desctribed. This

Posted on Mon, 09 Aug 2021

Vividly desctribed. This captures the progress of rain perfectly, and reminds me of the other morning when I took the dogs for a walk, and we had gone no more than 50 metres when we heard the sheeted feet of a rain storm accelerating up the road...

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Posted in suddenly

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beautifully measured from the

Posted on Fri, 06 Aug 2021

beautifully measured from the opening lines to the stunning finish.

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Posted in White Sailors

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Such a rich and evocative

Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021

Such a rich and evocative poem - I was there, eyes closed and the poem washing over me.

There is nothing as satisfying as watching bees gathering for their hives - we have lavender back and front and the hum of the wings adds to the beauty...

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Posted in Alternative Currency

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A wonderfully rich and

Posted on Thu, 05 Aug 2021

A wonderfully rich and evocative account. 

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Posted in Henrietta Maria Prepares to Depart

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I must say that I will look

Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021

I must say that I will look at Ikea cafes in a totally different light from now on. What a wonderful love poem.

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Posted in In IKEA, he dreams about the woman he loves

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So much to chew on here Paul.

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

So much to chew on here Paul. I will be reading it many more times to digest and enjoy. 

Bhi

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Posted in Saccades of Sands

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What a wonderful use of

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

What a wonderful use of flagitious, M. Well deserved accolades.

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Posted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain

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