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Very clever interpretation.
Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021
Very clever interpretation. This got me thinking - which is never a good thing - about beginnings and endings; the art is to begin something and have the ending in mind, and to build towards that with an open mind and heart and with respect. But...Read full comment
Posted in Humpty Dumpty
A thought provoking poem.
Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021
A thought provoking poem. Please take care of yourself.
Crows are a wonder. My grandmother would keep the windows on her balcony open to allow these birds to come into the house; she welcomed their silent company when my grandfather died...Read full comment
Posted in Crow
The connection to all that is
Posted on Thu, 06 May 2021
The connection to all that is around us is so evident in the poem and the desire to be part of that so strong. Wonderful poem to read and reread and enjoy the different threads that it pursues and also as a monument to those that we love.
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Posted in Resting Place
The colour of joy is firstly,
Posted on Fri, 07 May 2021
The colour of joy is firstly, the simplicity oif new life, and then secondly the giving of love as that life blossoms. As always, OMT, there are so many themes to explore and so many questions raised; "Rachel means ewe" works on many levels and i...Read full comment
Posted in The Domestication of Sheep
This is constructed with
Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021
This is constructed with consummate skill; there is such wonderful word play and thoughfulness into each line. Thank you for highlighting this problem. In the village and those around we're letting the verges grow wild, clearing old ponds to...Read full comment
Posted in just deserts