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Beautiful creatures whose
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
Beautiful creatures whose grace and dilemma have been captured perfectly in this poem.
"I sense the fray
of identity against my need
to belong to anything, any
thing, when I do not know
why...Read full comment
Posted in Herring Gull
This shows great empathy and
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
This shows great empathy and understanding of a country which does very often lead to an immediate "love/hate" relationship. The detail shows a sharp eye and the narrative flows very well with the interlinking of your back story with the...Read full comment
Posted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh
There are some fantastic
Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2021
There are some fantastic phrases in this poem, this in particular:
to be woken by crows,
black mornings, broken
by the flight of brimstone
butterflies in transformation."
Beautifully crafted....Read full comment
Posted in Oh, What’s That In The Hollow?