bhi

Primary tabs

I have 42 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 6714 times and 27 of my stories have been cherry picked.
26 of my 84 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 27 votes

bhi's picture

 

My stories

Cherry

The Mythicals - 0: Archie – a memorial

i walk our dogs through the woods each day and on one path there is a bench dedicated to one lost young.
Cherry

A walk through Cricklewood Broadway

taking a leisurely walk up the Broadway.
Cherry

Gratitude

they were blighted, our Japanese Mimosas. the frost bit twice, two weeks apart; the first stunted the new growth, the second chilled the roots. a...
1 likes
Cherry

Time

continuing the exploration of IS
Cherry

the art of loving through frosted glass

6:28- I’m stationed in the courtyard. punctual, 2 minutes later, she appears framed in the bathroom window, undraped, her lines from breast to hip...
1 likes

Pages

26 of my comments have received 27 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

Beautiful creatures whose

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

Beautiful creatures whose grace and dilemma have been captured perfectly in this poem. 

These line:

"I sense the fray 

of identity against my need

to belong to anything, any

thing, when I do not know

why...

Read full comment

Posted in Herring Gull

1 Vote

Condensed imagery invoking

Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2020

Condensed imagery invoking much

Read full comment

Posted in Inconsequence

1 Vote

This shows great empathy and

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

This shows great empathy and understanding of a country which does very often lead to an immediate "love/hate" relationship. The detail shows a sharp eye and the narrative flows very well with the interlinking of your back story with the...

Read full comment

Posted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

1 Vote

Wonderful poem. LIke this

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021

Wonderful poem. LIke this verse:

"The past leaves

Only prints, disordered.

Details burned beneath the acids

Of emotion, colours telling lies

Hiding in the fade of time"

 

Just one observation: did...

Read full comment

Posted in The Edge of Colour

1 Vote

There are some fantastic

Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2021

There are some fantastic phrases in this poem, this in particular:

"Only

to be woken by crows,

black mornings, broken

by the flight of brimstone

butterflies in transformation."

Beautifully crafted....

Read full comment

Posted in Oh, What’s That In The Hollow?

1 Vote

healing

Posted on Sun, 20 Dec 2020

this is a wonderful healing poem. The measured pace forces each word to be savioured before moving on to the next and then the end which is the return to wonder. 

bhi

Read full comment

Posted in Morning

Pages