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I have 67 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 22331 times and 56 of my stories have been cherry picked.
42 of my 158 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 45 votes

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Ostrich eggs and elephant milk

The joy of cooking without a recipe book
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Folds

following the theme of passion.
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Cherry

The Syllables of The Other

Before the first word a moment, within that moment all moments, and within those moments the collective hymns for each world and each instant of...
Cherry

On the bridge

We met for an early lunch, unplanned - text from you saying, “meet2eat?” I crossed from the north to Borough Market, aromas of the many kitchens...
Gold cherry

The physiognomy of stones

I can remember my first; bronzed, in the shape of a closed hand, taken from the inner wall of the sleeping hall when the old single storey house was...
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42 of my comments have received 45 Great Feedback votes

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OMT, there is always the

Posted on Wed, 19 May 2021

OMT, there is always the possibility of a reply, and you have created the framework for that reply. 

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Posted in Wandering Albatross

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Your love comes across in

Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021

Your love comes across in each line, and the the fractues of her life are strikingly portrayed in this unforgettable piece.

bhi 

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Posted in Impaired

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The connection to all that is

Posted on Thu, 06 May 2021

The connection to all that is around us is so evident in the poem and the desire to be part of that so strong. Wonderful poem to read and reread and enjoy the different threads that it pursues and also as a monument to those that we love.

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Posted in Resting Place

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The colour of joy is firstly,

Posted on Fri, 07 May 2021

The colour of joy is firstly, the simplicity oif new life, and then secondly the giving of love as that life blossoms. As always, OMT, there are so many themes to explore and so many questions raised; "Rachel means ewe" works on many levels and i...

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Posted in The Domestication of Sheep

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"every moment holds 

Posted on Thu, 29 Apr 2021

"every moment holds 

a capacity for conversion," - OMT, I shall carry this sentence with me as a reminder that change is the only fixed reality. A beautiful and haunting poem.

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Posted in The Hierophant

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This is constructed with

Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

This is constructed with consummate skill; there is such wonderful word play and thoughfulness into each line. Thank you for highlighting this problem. In the village and those around we're letting the verges grow wild, clearing old ponds to...

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Posted in just deserts

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This is a fitting tribute and

Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021

This is a fitting tribute and may they always coruscate.

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Posted in Setting Sons

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We thought the trees had

Posted on Tue, 13 Apr 2021

We thought the trees had perished and had it not been for the persistence of the youngest would have been cut down and uprooted. We had to be patient, but in the end we had what we had always wanted; trees as generous as the mother and partner we...

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Posted in Gratitude

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Thank you so much for reading

Posted on Tue, 13 Apr 2021

Thank you so much for reading this and commenting. Memories can be overwhelming and we are constantly reminded, but we have to learn to see what is there now and appreciate. That is what she taught me and our daughters, and the revenant tree...

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Posted in Gratitude

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I am glad you enjoyed this.

Posted on Thu, 08 Apr 2021

I am glad you enjoyed this. Love is a journey and the expectancy of return is one of its joys.

B

 

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Posted in the art of loving through frosted glass

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