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StoryIn the shadow of geraniums bhi122 days 5 hours ago
StoryA Secret Forest marandina284 days 5 hours ago
StoryImpaired Yutka165 days 8 hours ago
StoryCouncil Estate Jesus Mark Burrow325 days 9 hours ago
StoryLilies: Love's Opening bhi06 days 19 hours ago
StoryCorn luigi_pagano101 week 7 hours ago
StoryBuilding A Boat onemorething121 week 12 hours ago
StoryCrow onemorething172 weeks 3 hours ago
StoryIcecream onemorething312 weeks 7 hours ago
StoryWakening bhi02 weeks 1 day ago
Storyshe calls bhi152 weeks 4 days ago
StoryWandering Albatross onemorething103 weeks 22 hours ago
StoryPad Life: The Joy of Jabbing airyfairy253 weeks 6 days ago
StoryA Ship Passing No More Gothicman94 weeks 10 hours ago
StoryThe Mythicals: i witness bhi01 month 1 hour ago
StoryResting Place skinner_jennifer251 month 8 hours ago
Storythe face in the window bhi61 month 1 day ago
StoryThe Mythicals - 0: Archie – a memorial bhi61 month 1 day ago
StoryPretty Woman lenchenelf41 month 3 days ago
StoryThe Domestication of Sheep onemorething41 month 4 days ago
StoryThe Mythicals - 2: a study of grief bhi61 month 6 days ago
StorySplit Atoms and Broken Suns bhi61 month 1 week ago
Storyjust deserts Di_Hard311 month 1 week ago
StoryTrout onemorething161 month 1 week ago
StoryThe Hierophant onemorething61 month 1 week ago

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Lilies: Love's Opening

Standing in front of the florist’s, “I want flowers,” she said, “Lilies. These’ll open in Ireland; only Ones that will; like those inked glories Olga...
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In the shadow of geraniums

a passion play with geraniums as the backdrop
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Wakening

Part of the passion series
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Poem of the week

she calls

when there is love death can be conquered

The Mythicals: i witness

the prequel to the three Mythicals' poems already posted

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26 of my comments have received 27 Great Feedback votes

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Very clever interpretation.

Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021

Very clever interpretation. This got me thinking - which is never a good thing - about beginnings and endings; the art is to begin something and have the ending in mind, and to build towards that with an open mind and heart and with respect. But...

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Thank you, Penny. There is

Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021

Thank you, Penny. There is something magical watching these flowers open and the sheer red was such an unconscious and subtle extravangance. An amazing sight.  

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A thought provoking poem.

Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021

A thought provoking poem. Please take care of yourself.

Crows are a wonder. My grandmother would keep the windows on her balcony open to allow these birds to come into the house; she welcomed their silent company when my grandfather died...

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OMT, there is always the

Posted on Wed, 19 May 2021

OMT, there is always the possibility of a reply, and you have created the framework for that reply. 

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OMT, you should write more

Posted on Fri, 16 Apr 2021

OMT, you should write more prose; this is a sublime story, the more so that it is part of you.

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Posted in Icecream

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Your love comes across in

Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021

Your love comes across in each line, and the the fractues of her life are strikingly portrayed in this unforgettable piece.

bhi 

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The connection to all that is

Posted on Thu, 06 May 2021

The connection to all that is around us is so evident in the poem and the desire to be part of that so strong. Wonderful poem to read and reread and enjoy the different threads that it pursues and also as a monument to those that we love.

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Posted in Resting Place

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The colour of joy is firstly,

Posted on Fri, 07 May 2021

The colour of joy is firstly, the simplicity oif new life, and then secondly the giving of love as that life blossoms. As always, OMT, there are so many themes to explore and so many questions raised; "Rachel means ewe" works on many levels and i...

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"every moment holds 

Posted on Thu, 29 Apr 2021

"every moment holds 

a capacity for conversion," - OMT, I shall carry this sentence with me as a reminder that change is the only fixed reality. A beautiful and haunting poem.

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This is constructed with

Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

This is constructed with consummate skill; there is such wonderful word play and thoughfulness into each line. Thank you for highlighting this problem. In the village and those around we're letting the verges grow wild, clearing old ponds to...

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