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StoryThe Anatomy of a Death - Chapter 4: The Taxi Ride bhi05 months 2 weeks ago
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StoryThe Anatomy of a Death - Chapter 2: The Waiting Room bhi55 months 3 weeks ago
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StoryAnnouncing the birth of our sweet Mary bhi06 months 14 hours ago
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My stories

Gold cherry
Poem of the week

she calls

when there is love death can be conquered

The Mythicals: i witness

the prequel to the three Mythicals' poems already posted
Cherry

the face in the window

for those that take the time to love
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Gold cherry

The Mythicals - 2: a study of grief

an experimental piece to finish the three poems about death and commemoration
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Cherry

Split Atoms and Broken Suns

woke up to find the sun hidden behind thick cloud and lightning playing on the horizon
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31 of my comments have received 32 Great Feedback votes

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G, I would love to hear the

Posted on Mon, 12 Apr 2021

G, I would love to hear the longer story, but this is a wonderful tribute. 

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Posted in A Ship Passing No More

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Beautiful poem, and the last

Posted on Tue, 06 Apr 2021

Beautiful poem, and the last sentence is sublime.

It would be great if we could pick up time. My grandmother told me that life was all about making memories and stringing them like pearls into our souls, and at end of says we can take them...

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Posted in to pick up time

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visual in a verbal way.

Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021

visual in a verbal way. Nature's vistas can be inspiring. Wonderful poem.

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Posted in After the Blizzard

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This line is superb - 

Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021

This line is superb - 

"a mirror

of night in scissor-tailed sorcery."

And I must ask, why "biologically armed"? It invokes a picture of war, and not the serenity of love, or maybe that is my tinted glass view!

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Posted in Swallow-tailed Kites

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You have an eye for detail

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

You have an eye for detail and building the images for the reader.

The last line is a perfect ending: "and life was translucent." 

bhi

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Posted in A Secret Forest

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Beautiful creatures whose

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

Beautiful creatures whose grace and dilemma have been captured perfectly in this poem. 

These line:

"I sense the fray 

of identity against my need

to belong to anything, any

thing, when I do not know

why...

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Posted in Herring Gull

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Condensed imagery invoking

Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2020

Condensed imagery invoking much

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Posted in Inconsequence

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This shows great empathy and

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

This shows great empathy and understanding of a country which does very often lead to an immediate "love/hate" relationship. The detail shows a sharp eye and the narrative flows very well with the interlinking of your back story with the...

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Posted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

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Wonderful poem. LIke this

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021

Wonderful poem. LIke this verse:

"The past leaves

Only prints, disordered.

Details burned beneath the acids

Of emotion, colours telling lies

Hiding in the fade of time"

 

Just one observation: did...

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Posted in The Edge of Colour

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There are some fantastic

Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2021

There are some fantastic phrases in this poem, this in particular:

"Only

to be woken by crows,

black mornings, broken

by the flight of brimstone

butterflies in transformation."

Beautifully crafted....

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Posted in Oh, What’s That In The Hollow?

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