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(This Life) Part 10 – Chapter 1: The Dream Catcher’s Tale

By bhi on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

Continuing the This Life series, this is the first chapter of Part 10 and tells the story of a remarkable woman.

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(This Life) Part 9: Forever Pure

By bhi on Wed, 13 Jul 2022

love pays no attention to boundaries.

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(This Life) Part 8: Love and The Clarinet Maker

By bhi on Tue, 28 Jun 2022

the intensity of love

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(This Life) Part 6: The Bee Keeper’s Daughter

By bhi on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

Unique lives and friendships - each to be appreciated

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Vividly desctribed. This

Posted on Mon, 09 Aug 2021

Vividly desctribed. This captures the progress of rain perfectly, and reminds me of the other morning when I took the dogs for a walk, and we had gone no more than 50 metres when we heard the sheeted feet of a rain storm accelerating up the road...

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beautifully measured from the

Posted on Fri, 06 Aug 2021

beautifully measured from the opening lines to the stunning finish.

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Such a rich and evocative

Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021

Such a rich and evocative poem - I was there, eyes closed and the poem washing over me.

There is nothing as satisfying as watching bees gathering for their hives - we have lavender back and front and the hum of the wings adds to the beauty...

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A wonderfully rich and

Posted on Thu, 05 Aug 2021

A wonderfully rich and evocative account.

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I must say that I will look

Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021

I must say that I will look at Ikea cafes in a totally different light from now on. What a wonderful love poem.

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So much to chew on here Paul.

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

So much to chew on here Paul. I will be reading it many more times to digest and enjoy.

Bhi

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What a wonderful use of

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

What a wonderful use of flagitious, M. Well deserved accolades.

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Such simplicity and yet so

Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021

Such simplicity and yet so much said and implied. I often wish that I could retread my tongue and wipe out the last utterance, but that wish cannot be; what is said is heard and what is heard is stored and when the time comes taken out with care...

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Thank you airy. Accepting who

Posted on Thu, 08 Jul 2021

Thank you airy. Accepting who we are and being comfortable with that is an essential part of life, or is of my life. And all of the events depicted are true - I found myself perched on the sloping roof wondering how I was going to come back down...

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What a wonderfully

Posted on Sun, 06 Jun 2021

What a wonderfully descriptive piece! OMT, you have this ability, this connection, which colours the garden and the metamorphosis taking place. I read in awe.