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I have 69 stories published in
5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 45688 times
and 62 of my stories have been cherry picked.
43 of my 174 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 46 votes
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(This Life) Part 5: Fox binned
Garden out of bounds – builders’ mess spreading fast this past week - we turn left into Katherine’s rutted lane, dogs scenting, pulling, me...
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(This Life) Part 4: The Neighbour’s Wife
to be part of, to see, to be
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(This Life) Part 3: The Butcher’s Wi(n)dow
The local butcher's shop was gutted by fire and rebuilt. We passed by early morning once the scaffolding and boards had been taken down.
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(This Life) Part 2: Webs
walks with my dogs
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(This Life) Part 1: Dog Treats
Contemplations ....
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Vividly desctribed. This
Posted on Mon, 09 Aug 2021
Vividly desctribed. This captures the progress of rain perfectly, and reminds me of the other morning when I took the dogs for a walk, and we had gone no more than 50 metres when we heard the sheeted feet of a rain storm accelerating up the road...
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beautifully measured from the
Posted on Fri, 06 Aug 2021
beautifully measured from the opening lines to the stunning finish.
Read full commentPosted in White Sailors
Such a rich and evocative
Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021
Such a rich and evocative poem - I was there, eyes closed and the poem washing over me.
There is nothing as satisfying as watching bees gathering for their hives - we have lavender back and front and the hum of the wings adds to the beauty...
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A wonderfully rich and
Posted on Thu, 05 Aug 2021
A wonderfully rich and evocative account.
Read full commentPosted in Henrietta Maria Prepares to Depart
I must say that I will look
Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021
I must say that I will look at Ikea cafes in a totally different light from now on. What a wonderful love poem.
Read full commentPosted in In IKEA, he dreams about the woman he loves
So much to chew on here Paul.
Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021
So much to chew on here Paul. I will be reading it many more times to digest and enjoy.
Bhi
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What a wonderful use of
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
What a wonderful use of flagitious, M. Well deserved accolades.
Read full commentPosted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain
Such simplicity and yet so
Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021
Such simplicity and yet so much said and implied. I often wish that I could retread my tongue and wipe out the last utterance, but that wish cannot be; what is said is heard and what is heard is stored and when the time comes taken out with care...
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Thank you airy. Accepting who
Posted on Thu, 08 Jul 2021
Thank you airy. Accepting who we are and being comfortable with that is an essential part of life, or is of my life. And all of the events depicted are true - I found myself perched on the sloping roof wondering how I was going to come back down...
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What a wonderfully
Posted on Sun, 06 Jun 2021
What a wonderfully descriptive piece! OMT, you have this ability, this connection, which colours the garden and the metamorphosis taking place. I read in awe.
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