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I have 42 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 6786 times and 27 of my stories have been cherry picked.
26 of my 86 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 27 votes

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My stories

The Mythicals: i witness

the prequel to the three Mythicals' poems already posted
Cherry

the face in the window

for those that take the time to love
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Gold cherry

The Mythicals - 2: a study of grief

an experimental piece to finish the three poems about death and commemoration
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Cherry

Split Atoms and Broken Suns

woke up to find the sun hidden behind thick cloud and lightning playing on the horizon
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Cherry

The Mythicals - 1: the illusion of travelling

another story from the viillage. this is about the myth of travelling for the constant travellers.
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26 of my comments have received 27 Great Feedback votes

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I love the picture of "a

Posted on Sun, 11 Apr 2021

I love the picture of "a trout feels the river." And the contrast with the mayfly. The lesson I take away - and this is my aged age talking - is to feel the flow of life as it streams past. Another wonderful poem from your sharp pen.

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Posted in Trout

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This is a fitting tribute and

Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021

This is a fitting tribute and may they always coruscate.

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Posted in Setting Sons

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We thought the trees had

Posted on Tue, 13 Apr 2021

We thought the trees had perished and had it not been for the persistence of the youngest would have been cut down and uprooted. We had to be patient, but in the end we had what we had always wanted; trees as generous as the mother and partner we...

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Thank you so much for reading

Posted on Tue, 13 Apr 2021

Thank you so much for reading this and commenting. Memories can be overwhelming and we are constantly reminded, but we have to learn to see what is there now and appreciate. That is what she taught me and our daughters, and the revenant tree...

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I am glad you enjoyed this.

Posted on Thu, 08 Apr 2021

I am glad you enjoyed this. Love is a journey and the expectancy of return is one of its joys.

B

 

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Posted in the art of loving through frosted glass

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G, I would love to hear the

Posted on Mon, 12 Apr 2021

G, I would love to hear the longer story, but this is a wonderful tribute. 

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Posted in A Ship Passing No More

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Beautiful poem, and the last

Posted on Tue, 06 Apr 2021

Beautiful poem, and the last sentence is sublime.

It would be great if we could pick up time. My grandmother told me that life was all about making memories and stringing them like pearls into our souls, and at end of says we can take them...

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Posted in to pick up time

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visual in a verbal way.

Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021

visual in a verbal way. Nature's vistas can be inspiring. Wonderful poem.

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Posted in After the Blizzard

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This line is superb - 

Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021

This line is superb - 

"a mirror

of night in scissor-tailed sorcery."

And I must ask, why "biologically armed"? It invokes a picture of war, and not the serenity of love, or maybe that is my tinted glass view!

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Posted in Swallow-tailed Kites

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You have an eye for detail

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

You have an eye for detail and building the images for the reader.

The last line is a perfect ending: "and life was translucent." 

bhi

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Posted in A Secret Forest

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