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Nolan
There's a rainbow in my soul
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And the rainbow never ends
simbamba simbamba brave little zimba mamas little lion mamas little cub simbamba simbamba slumber little zimba slumber little zimba simbamba simbamba...
work of god so lovely so beautiful a breast he made a friend graceful twins of lambs playing in her blouse hide and seek joyful bouncing beauty stiff...
356 of my comments have received 360 Great Feedback votes
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lovely descriptive language
Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024
Very original, lovely descriptive language like grey tracery ; fine fawn point, furl of zingy ; woods afizz". These ones among others I don't really know what they mean, claggy ignominy. breathing deep-pile hug".
A holy time of the year, and sombre, time for reflection and gratitude and compassion. I have the Mel Gibson film "Passion of the Christ" here on Dvd I haven't seen it yet will watch it within a day or two. I hear it is really very heavy but they...
Lovely Jenny, wonderful! I always feel so empty and bored with my life compared to how full and beautiful your days are, well that's why reading your work is such a pleasure. And for many of us too! Although I do think I have a very rich inner...
Well done, good style Max, postponing, and each time building up a little bit of tension, and then, yes it was tennis all the time! But before then it was the radio cozy in the living room, that was really pleasant family time! Doing your...
Funny hey Max?! I have you 100% One thing you mustn't lose is your glasses especially when your eyes are th'at bad as yours! You will never find them again- and without telling the future now! Or without another pair at least, once I thought I...
lovely descriptive language
Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024
Very original, lovely descriptive language like grey tracery ; fine fawn point, furl of zingy ; woods afizz". These ones among others I don't really know what they mean, claggy ignominy. breathing deep-pile hug".
Sad to say your output of...
Read full commentPosted in Two kinds of crying : 15th February 2024
A holy time of the year
Posted on Sun, 24 Mar 2024
A holy time of the year, and sombre, time for reflection and gratitude and compassion. I have the Mel Gibson film "Passion of the Christ" here on Dvd I haven't seen it yet will watch it within a day or two. I hear it is really very heavy but they...
Read full commentPosted in Five days before he was crucified
wonderful! lovely work!
Posted on Wed, 24 Aug 2022
Lovely Jenny, wonderful! I always feel so empty and bored with my life compared to how full and beautiful your days are, well that's why reading your work is such a pleasure. And for many of us too! Although I do think I have a very rich inner...
Read full commentPosted in What I Love
funny!
Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2020
Good humour you can almost see the chase! Nolan
Read full commentPosted in Chasing a Mosquito
gentle modest dignity
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020
Sparrows are the most beautiful of birds, in their common, gentle modest dignity &&
Always warm and kind, loving, cheerful and playful. See you then Richard!
Read full commentPosted in Here Birdie
good style
Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2025
Well done, good style Max, postponing, and each time building up a little bit of tension, and then, yes it was tennis all the time! But before then it was the radio cozy in the living room, that was really pleasant family time! Doing your...
Read full commentPosted in Arthur Ashe. Sunday's Coming.
the attraction
Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2025
As an outsider now, It seems the great attraction in the end of social media is that it makes one feel important.
Well, Good luck! Nolan &
Read full commentPosted in Unseen.
doesn't sound so terrible
Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2025
This doesn't sound so bad to me I can only imagine much worse. A case of "what the eye doesn't see the heart doesn't desire" my mother always said,
And I know some sweet lovely girls working their way through university, treat your...
Read full commentPosted in Unseen.
In your land of dreams,
Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2009
Though you were far from me
In the land of Sleep and Silence,
Still the voice of love would reach you
& Goodnight darling!
Read full commentPosted in a wedding song
Funny!
Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2025
Funny hey Max?! I have you 100% One thing you mustn't lose is your glasses especially when your eyes are th'at bad as yours! You will never find them again- and without telling the future now! Or without another pair at least, once I thought I...
Read full commentPosted in The Golden Ticket.
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