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skillful notably the rhyme
Posted on Wed, 12 Dec 2018
Very skillful the rhyme especially is, it must have been an effort this is a lot of work and dedication. (I know the word "succour" only from one place, the Battle Hymn of the Republic).
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a rainbow that never ends
Posted on Fri, 30 Nov 2018
What a lovely little story! I would just want to change "The End" to "The Beginning" and "The End of the Rainbow" with "The Beginning of the Rainbow."
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Posted in The Beginning of the Rainbow
Posted on Wed, 07 Nov 2018
The poem has beautiful imagery and lovely metaphors. I just love camping being so close to nature and the elements with only bare nessacities. Itwould me nice to have company you know like a young woman. Maybe one day.
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Posted in NATURE
scifi - a.i - v.r - etc
Posted on Fri, 27 Jul 2018
Interesting speculation on the future. Personally I'd rather be dead than artificially intelligent in a virtual reality ...
Good Scifi! I would say you have some original ideas ...
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an american dream
Posted on Tue, 09 Oct 2018
Always wondered what the women are up to in those fashion shops in & out the change rooms all the time carting clothes and stuff around ... So in fact it all turns out actually very mundane.
Your story was good but probably more women'...Read full comment
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