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There's a rainbow in my soul
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And the rainbow never ends
A few words I don't know
Posted on Tue, 13 Sep 2022
A few words I don't know, but it is a good poem. Our African bees are apparently of high regard and I'm allergic as well. A bee sting can kill you.
They're probably more poisonous than spiders, but a big spider is very scary don't know...
Read full commentPosted in A Lamentation of Bees
english country garden
Posted on Wed, 17 Aug 2022
Very good poem Jenny, isn't there something like "an english country garden"? On autumn there are lots.
Looks like it's our turn now for the heat last year there was a lot of rain let's hope. It's already warm and barely into spring. To...
Read full commentPosted in Afternoon Delight
doctor – patient
Posted on Sun, 28 Aug 2022
Usually any kind of relationship of a patient with a doctor is strongly discouraged and for good reasons. There is to be no emotional attachment or involvement I think that is why it is a "clinical" psychologist. Where there is a professional...
Read full commentPosted in Thank you
visible ghosts
Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022
You wrote an excellent poem Jenny, especially I like the idea of a feathered ghost it conjures up images like a flying spook or a tarred and feathered one which presumably one would be able to see. Swift breath of invisible breeze ... full of...
Read full commentPosted in View Beyond
Mine had a bet of a temper
Posted on Fri, 19 Aug 2022
Mine had a bet of a temper and didn't spare the rod. Could never understand why I loved him so. You know Richard alcoholism is hereditary well I've sober for very long. A new life.
All the best & Nolan
Read full commentPosted in The Bone of Night
persecution
Posted on Sun, 07 Aug 2022
A painful fact and the persecution will keep on until the end, Judgement day or whatever you want to call it, and it will probably get worse. Though the church in history is always strongest in times of persecution.
Have a good week &...
Read full commentPosted in The Real Jesus
waiting for her
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2022
I'll wait just a little bit longer, love grows just a little bit stronger
From a lovely poem of Jacques, Baker Street
Read full commentPosted in A Little Love
purple
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
Wonderful! What is heather Jenny? It is also purple? We hear of these flowers never really knowing what they are.There are other common purple flowers too I think? By the way we have your "african violet".
See you hope all goes well and...
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Violet
prison sentence at age 101
Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2022
Wonderful, still so loved. I heard on the radio the other day of a man of 101 he has been sentenced as a war criminal for 4 years. Just an ordinary nazi soldier happened to be in the wrong place, a concentration camp like Auswitz, the wrong time...
Read full commentPosted in 105 Years Young
drop capitals?
Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2022
Lovely poem but if I were you I would drop all punctuation and capitals you have little enough already. The poem the appearance could show better and more attractive. and the poem read more fluent. Well that's just me. Merely a suggestion....
Read full commentPosted in A Fox In A Moon Night
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