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There's a rainbow in my soul
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And the rainbow never ends
excellent scifi
Posted on Fri, 11 Feb 2022
Really enjoying these stories, excellent scifi you give the imagination free reigns. Very original and creating a whole world, similar to Tolkien with Middle-Earth or Asimov's Robot scifi books. This story is very good it is clever. Obviously...
Read full commentPosted in Visions of Hope
great rhyme
Posted on Sun, 13 Feb 2022
In a nutshell !!
Very good Rhiannon, great rhyme-- regular, easy but whithout compulsion or doggerel, attractive and not forced in any way. I have never managed to get it quite right.
Enjoy your week, don't step on snowdrops! &...
Read full commentPosted in Arrival, Departure, Arrival
Zephyr
Posted on Sat, 08 Jan 2022
"Zephyr" is a beautiful word I wonder what the origin is it is not used often. Could be Greek? I know it from the Ford Zephyr a kind of sports car actually a 6 cylinder I think. First we had an Anglia father of the Ford Escorts, yes I was a baby...
Read full commentPosted in On Track With The Seasons
criminal mind
Posted on Fri, 21 Jan 2022
This is good prose Rob, just slightly incoherent maybe also your punctuation is a bit casual. Myself could never understand a criminal mind I knew someone who majored in criminology and psychology that's about it. Sounds very boring. Some guys...
Read full commentPosted in Inside the steel cage
Lovely words Rhiannon!
Posted on Sun, 09 Jan 2022
Lovely words Rhiannon! Very well written this is a lot of work. "Two men look through the same bars, one sees the mud, the other the stars". Can you now attend church again, as before Covid?
Have wonderful day! Nolan &
Read full commentPosted in Certainties for a New Year
student slogan
Posted on Sun, 02 Jan 2022
"In heaven there is no beer, that's why I drink it here".
Of German origin I believe &
Read full commentPosted in Keeping Teeth and Kidneys for Beginners
pencils
Posted on Tue, 28 Dec 2021
Good luck experiment a bit I would say! All the best Di!
Nolan &
Read full commentPosted in BBBB
Come, all ye faithful
Posted on Sat, 22 Dec 2012
Come all ye faithful, joyful and triumphant come ye o come ye to Bethlehem
Come and behold Him, born the King of Angels
O come, let us adore Him, O come let us adore Him
Come all ye faithful, joyful and triumphant, O come let...
Read full commentPosted in Tidings of Rejoicing!
Hi Jenny! Your diary entries
Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021
Hi Jenny! Your diary entries are in such detail and complete. This is very nice it's well written and interesting and not monotonous or boring at all. The way you divide the paragraphs up works very well it's a pleasure to read.
My diary...
Read full commentPosted in Trail Of Misunderstanding
birds and beez
Posted on Sun, 24 Oct 2021
I could never understand all those birds and beeze stories.That farm-girl I can understand all that fresh air and cows and that yes I think I understand. Good for the libido.
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Read full commentPosted in The Farm Girl
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