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Nolan
There's a rainbow in my soul
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And the rainbow never ends
drop capitals?
Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2022
Lovely poem but if I were you I would drop all punctuation and capitals you have little enough already. The poem the appearance could show better and more attractive. and the poem read more fluent. Well that's just me. Merely a suggestion....
Read full commentPosted in A Fox In A Moon Night
actual reality
Posted on Sat, 18 Jun 2022
Thanks David! Jenny Jenny, dreams are ten a penny... In the end it's not virtual but it is actual reality that we want but yes dreams can be very pleasant but they disappear with the morning mist.
Cheers.Nolan &
Read full commentPosted in dream and dream
garden adventures
Posted on Sat, 21 May 2022
As kids everyday common home garden adventures, in wonder as children fascinated and great excitement much better than tv, while we grown-ups hardly notice goes just goes past around us lazy bones.
I like the tree squirrel one! Very clever...
Read full commentPosted in A Hive of Activity
reading poetry
Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022
There are different interpretations this is on purpose. The way I write poetry is to read as you wish I choose the words very carefully sometimes it takes long. All in lower case and without punctuation.
What you read is what it says it is...
Read full commentPosted in morning dreams
between blue and violet
Posted on Wed, 04 May 2022
Yes in rainbows between blue and violet, it is a colour of royalty. And what a lovely wonderful colour, and there are butterfies and lilys and daisies flowers and gem stones and the far mountains shades of love and hard to capture.
Thanks...
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kentucky cathedrals
Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022
I am the eagle I live in high country, Kentucky cathedrals that reach to the sky. And all those that see me, and all that believe in me, Share in the freedom I feel when I fly.
Do you like John Denver's music Richard? He died young was...
Read full commentPosted in Tumultuous Times
empty grave
Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022
The last verse says it all, wonderful simple truth. The empty tomb, Jesus's victory over death itself. How else can you explain it?
Have a great week Rhiannon! & Nolan
Read full commentPosted in Opened to show He’s gone!
Lovely words Rhiannon!
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
Lovely words Rhiannon! Hope you are well & have a wonderful week! It is amazing how the old prophets all came together so. Scary actually.
& Nolan
Read full commentPosted in Freed to Free
hectic
Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2022
Good Work Rhiannon! Had a bit hectic weekend I'll read it properly still, it's a lot longer than most of your poem/hymns. Yes "Promised from the beginning" is very appropriate.
Have a wonderful week! Nolan
Read full commentPosted in Promised from the beginning
Indeed, "worst folly
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
Indeed, "worst folly is this presuming there’s no-one far greater than we", even with all the human rights stuff- who gave us all these supposed rights?
Especially the first stanza is brilliant but both are. Lovely lyrics lovely poetry and...
Read full commentPosted in Folly forsakes the foundation
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