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There's a rainbow in my soul
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And the rainbow never ends
good style
Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2025
Well done, good style Max, postponing, and each time building up a little bit of tension, and then, yes it was tennis all the time! But before then it was the radio cozy in the living room, that was really pleasant family time! Doing your...
Read full commentPosted in Arthur Ashe. Sunday's Coming.
the attraction
Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2025
As an outsider now, It seems the great attraction in the end of social media is that it makes one feel important.
Well, Good luck! Nolan &
Read full commentPosted in Unseen.
doesn't sound so terrible
Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2025
This doesn't sound so bad to me I can only imagine much worse. A case of "what the eye doesn't see the heart doesn't desire" my mother always said,
And I know some sweet lovely girls working their way through university, treat your...
Read full commentPosted in Unseen.
In your land of dreams,
Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2009
Though you were far from me
In the land of Sleep and Silence,
Still the voice of love would reach you
& Goodnight darling!
Read full commentPosted in a wedding song
Funny!
Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2025
Funny hey Max?! I have you 100% One thing you mustn't lose is your glasses especially when your eyes are th'at bad as yours! You will never find them again- and without telling the future now! Or without another pair at least, once I thought I...
Read full commentPosted in The Golden Ticket.
It's Ok Maxine
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
It's Ok Maxine it is understandable you could make such a mistake, it just shows you what a devil the man really was, meaning our reaction to the name even just by itself.
I was never really upset I mean, one has to have a good amount of...
Read full commentPosted in Malta, My Favourite Place On Earth. x
all comes together!
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
So how do you explain all that! And from then even further, countless nerve cells and neurons and dendrites to many miriads parts of the brain! Mind heart spirit and soul, all is One, onne beauutiful, wwonderful, mmiracle!
Ammazzing! Nolan...
Read full commentPosted in Hear, think, speak!
after hours
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2025
Believe it or not I knew a time when house doctors made rounds after hours, we were kids our gp actually came round to our house! And we were never rich.
After the examining and putting stethoscope back in his black satchel "marmite with...
Read full commentPosted in "The Doctor Will See You Now."
each word
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
Brilliantly descriptive with adverbs and addnouns each one in its place! Each word a rich history!
Nolan &
Read full commentPosted in Let Me Go Back
very clever!
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
A very clever litle poem Rhiannon, great for kids! Nolan &
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