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I have 252 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 370803 times
and 151 of my stories have been cherry picked.
124 of my 1,427 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 134 votes
Maddalena
Doodles, scribbles and poesy.
Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.
Why? We're all folk, that's why.
My stories
Lullaby, lull our senses.
Poesy
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Cook Book Medicine
Agenda >=< Profit
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Duality...
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.
hug to you and your...
Read full commentPosted in The Silent Witness
Lovely
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016
as the tide's wave on sand; melancholy, joy, breathe in, breathe out.
best regards
Lena xx
Read full commentPosted in Girl with Yellow Wings (Poetry Monthly)
Succint
Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016
..and successfully conveys amongst other many other inherent themes, simplicity and complexity of learned motor skills/comfort/autopilot as part of addiction/comfort process (mimes filling and switching on electric kettle) Like,like, like....
Read full commentPosted in Never forget smoking
This..
Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014
...'
within the tangled scrim,
a branch snags, and eyes – orbs,
a lethal mix of ambergris
and antonyms
reflect – become
the moon.'
By crikey lovely lass, tha' can conjure dark beauty!...
Read full commentPosted in Night Moves
Lovely surreal soundscape...
Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2014
... I wondered if you might look at your enjambment and punctuation; consider pace you'd like the reader to follow with eye and heart. Quick review of spelling. All these edits I make too, so not poking at you. :)
best wishes
lena...
Read full commentPosted in a light
Expressed...
Posted on Sat, 26 Jul 2014
...as milk from a breast with mastitis. Some pains cannot be prepared for, You handled this piece with sensitivity and knowing. A carefully worded build of peer networks and experience relied on, to a point where they cannot go, because all else...
Read full commentPosted in It All Came Out in the Wash
Surprised...
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
...that this wasn't an editor's choice. You've handled an abhorrent practice with a dry, factual narrative, a voice relating incident as so 'ordinary' as counterpoint to this horror, raising the mostrousity beyond any use of hyperbole.
...
Read full commentPosted in Crime and Punishment
Gentle trotting rhythm,
Posted on Sat, 31 Dec 2011
Gentle trotting rhythm, warm, melting into the green of ancient woodland :-) Ah, g'wan, I'm an old softy. Happy new year Ewan xxxRead full commentPosted in Raggle Taggle
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