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I have 230 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 573788 times
and 172 of my stories have been cherry picked.
193 of my 1,592 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 206 votes
Maddalena
Doodles, scribbles and poesy.
Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.
Why? We're all folk, that's why.
Thank you for reading.
My stories
Lullaby, lull our senses.
Poesy
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Cook Book Medicine
Agenda >=< Profit
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Strummer on a late summers' day
Doodle
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Surreal
Posted on Sat, 12 Feb 2022
... if scripted out for production, would choose Terry Gilliam as your director :)
Enjoyed
L x
Read full commentPosted in Grafting Haddock in the George
That..
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
was your best yet imho. Thundering pace, sharply observed, this is a song of folk that needs to be sung.
Lx
Read full commentPosted in Her Troubles
So much more tucked away
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
in your writing, I had to remind myself of Hullen and discovery of the Girt big Direwolves, prob. nothing to do with your work.
Though refs. to two dodgy timepieces, where will this all lead?
Onward!
best
Lena
Read full commentPosted in Bronte's Inferno VIII (Girt!)
Vivid
Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022
in the subtle shapes and images that weave and lope through the poem... a fine resolution; together we can make it through ...
Enjoyed
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Wolves, blizzard
Ha!
Posted on Fri, 14 Jan 2022
Lightly done and hearkens to Pratchett/Gaimans' sense of humour.
Enjoyed
L
Read full commentPosted in The God of Mistakes
Sharp and funny
Posted on Fri, 21 Jan 2022
...with bite :)
"He had a half-finished wine-spritzer in front of him. I almost wished I’d arrived earlier to hear him order it." < arf! and "the dog from the flats" was a corker.
Tip o' t'hat to The Master
best
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Read full commentPosted in Bronte's Inferno VI (The Oldest Pub Still Open)
Outstanding...
Posted on Mon, 03 Jan 2022
use of imagery to convey internal desolation at recall of horror (Rwanda?)
best to you
Lena xx
Read full commentPosted in (This Life) Part 3: The Butcher’s Wi(n)dow
A good pun
Posted on Mon, 06 Dec 2021
never goes amiss, your title an exemplar :)
In your vignette of rural Bulgarian life, you show a small but significant glimpse of real and perpetual problems of global economic inequality, your chosen subject one that highlights an ideal...
Read full commentPosted in Copse and Robbers
Glorious
Posted on Tue, 14 Dec 2021
...splash of vibrancy on a grey day.
Enjoyed reading
Best
Lena
Read full commentPosted in Feria
Such beauty
Posted on Wed, 01 Dec 2021
in fierce contrast. A poem I will enjoy coming back to.
Best
L xx
Read full commentPosted in (This Life) Part 2: Webs
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