lenchenelf
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I have 226 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 375370 times
and 162 of my stories have been cherry picked.
158 of my 1,500 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 168 votes
Now there's a song
Posted on Fri, 09 Aug 2019
...in the making.
Enjoyed
Lxx
Read full commentPosted in The Ballad of Laura Middleton
Subjects frozen..
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
...in current climate of distaste for those who don't fit a functional mould. Damned good write Ewan, Rylands curates relics and fortunes in literary text, who holds or promises concrete future for those unwritten?
best wishes
Lena...
Read full commentPosted in Winter in Manchester
Enjoyed
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
I like ideas running through this; futility of pinning a butterfly wing of time, "She said they only knew how to pin minutes" and the inevitability of decay, however wrought.
all the best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Pins (3)
Good to hear your voice again :)
Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018
Gut reaction: I like the format, sands of time and an inhale <> exhale of lungs breathing through the scented trail of the past (you draw attention to smell several times) Good stuff sir.
best regards
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in The Journey Back
...Did that...
Posted on Thu, 05 Oct 2017
...and the clutter pile began again. We are our memories, however we amass and tag them :)
Like very much.
Best regards
Lena x
Posted in Vanity and Bonfires
Each detail.
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017
...blends, but stark in its own right. The submerged in water and life beneath earth, that creates earth, a draw to the eye and mind. Excellent, enjoyed reading xx
Read full commentPosted in Submerged
Striking
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Damned enjoyable. The narrator as alienated observer, is crafted well. A sense of this pervades. Though at an uneasy peace with a culture and heat to which he does not belong, he yet observes in practice, and masters local pleasantries. Again...
Read full commentPosted in Tail-end
Embracing ..
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016
... an idealised memory of self and nation...that never was.....
Good read.
Lena x
Posted in Dream On
Duality...
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.
hug to you and your...
Read full commentPosted in The Silent Witness
Lovely
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016
as the tide's wave on sand; melancholy, joy, breathe in, breathe out.
best regards
Lena xx
Posted in Girl with Yellow Wings (Poetry Monthly)
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