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Call of the Minster
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Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017
...blends, but stark in its own right. The submerged in water and life beneath earth, that creates earth, a draw to the eye and mind. Excellent, enjoyed reading xxRead full comment
Posted in Submerged
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Damned enjoyable. The narrator as alienated observer, is crafted well. A sense of this pervades. Though at an uneasy peace with a culture and heat to which he does not belong, he yet observes in practice, and masters local pleasantries. Again...Read full comment
Posted in Tail-end
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016
... an idealised memory of self and nation...that never was.....
Posted in Dream On
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
...of existence. How to function? Heart wrenching. Poetry so often addresses ephemeral, but pleasing states of being; this is crafted, but raw in a pain that leaves the reader breathless, and with you. Keep strong.
hug to you and your...Read full comment
Posted in The Silent Witness
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016
as the tide's wave on sand; melancholy, joy, breathe in, breathe out.
Posted in Girl with Yellow Wings (Poetry Monthly)
Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016
..and successfully conveys amongst other many other inherent themes, simplicity and complexity of learned motor skills/comfort/autopilot as part of addiction/comfort process (mimes filling and switching on electric kettle) Like,like, like....Read full comment
Posted in Never forget smoking
Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014
within the tangled scrim,
a branch snags, and eyes – orbs,
a lethal mix of ambergris
reflect – become
By crikey lovely lass, tha' can conjure dark beauty!...Read full comment
Posted in Night Moves
Lovely surreal soundscape...
Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2014
... I wondered if you might look at your enjambment and punctuation; consider pace you'd like the reader to follow with eye and heart. Quick review of spelling. All these edits I make too, so not poking at you. :)
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Posted in a light
Posted on Sat, 26 Jul 2014
...as milk from a breast with mastitis. Some pains cannot be prepared for, You handled this piece with sensitivity and knowing. A carefully worded build of peer networks and experience relied on, to a point where they cannot go, because all else...Read full comment
Posted in It All Came Out in the Wash
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
...that this wasn't an editor's choice. You've handled an abhorrent practice with a dry, factual narrative, a voice relating incident as so 'ordinary' as counterpoint to this horror, raising the mostrousity beyond any use of hyperbole.
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Posted in Crime and Punishment