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I have 230 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 621132 times
and 172 of my stories have been cherry picked.
201 of my 1,612 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 214 votes
Maddalena
Doodles, scribbles and poesy.
Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.
Why? We're all folk, that's why.
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My stories
Hand on the Dial
Temperature of change
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I have taken you as far as I can...
Ahh, g'wan doodle
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Talkin' Brass
Uncomplicated Jarrow doodle.
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Sumptuous
Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023
and vivid. You could have rested on the thoughtful descriptions alone, but
"...but Beware another brightness -
Fire licking!"
plus discarded cans for the treasure seeker.
Perhaps a presage of another searingly hot...
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No worries
Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023
It was a lovely photo of light playing on the bark.
thank you again
Lena xxx
Read full commentPosted in This Green Isle
:)
Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023
Witty, pointed and delightful, looking forward to your next thrilling installment
best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 2)
Caught up
Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023
and enjoyed.
best to you
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 21-22
Juxtaposition
Posted on Mon, 27 Feb 2023
of attachment and imbued meaning in cherished "stuff" and that of personal freedom in that which is free of ritual meaning nicely done.
"It was as if she had taken
its form, eager to remain
refusing to vacate, her...
Read full commentPosted in Triptych
You play
Posted on Thu, 09 Feb 2023
with words to cushion their blow, our loved ones lives are carried and vivified by ours.
Lovely.
Best as always
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in For As Long As
Pretty and immersive;
Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023
Liked the clever use of "mossy dew kissing uncloven feet." to remove hint of mythos, purely a shared joy of an observable and natural world :)
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in The Great and Secret Show
Good read
Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023
I like the way his thoughts meander, grief as the rain always there, even in his brightest memory. Well handled, no jump scare, just love.
best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?
Gentle and quiet reflection
Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022
Gentle and quiet reflection on the strength of their love. Saddened and sorry for your loss Ewan.
Best to you and your family
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Hereafter
Just
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
...what I needed, rousing, reflective and textured reverie.
Enjoyable read, well written.
Best to you and thanks
Lena xx
Read full commentPosted in Variations on a Poem Read at My Mother's Funeral
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