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I have 226 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 370983 times
and 162 of my stories have been cherry picked.
157 of my 1,496 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 167 votes
Clever
Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022
"A wee boy, all bright eyes, stared out a window as we trudged past his house. An almost unconscious ritual hoping to see something better, something more than us grey ghosts, outside time, and we fell silent under his gaze."
A foil to the...
Read full commentPosted in Ugly Puggly 44
See Di-Hards' comment above:
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
and yes > ‘Noo, yer talkin shite –yed never get doubletime.’
Dark humour well handled.
More (greedy)
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Ugly Puggly 42
:)
Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022
Loved the little detail of the chicken attached to the musketeers bandolier, swinging there among the apostles :)
This is building very nicely, threads teased out ready to be woven.
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in The Castle (16)
Lovely
Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022
A real sense of place.
Best
Lena x
Posted in Evening peace
A quiet revelation
Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022
of promise in small things. Delightful and enjoyed.
best
Lena xx
Read full commentPosted in Meadowsweet
"Time, you trickster"
Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022
yes, o yes
"Time you trickster,
with your end-of-pier magic
your patter and illusions
your shadowy assistant
clad in black."
Your kenning raises a wry smile, spot on!...
Read full commentPosted in Time and its Jovial Deceptions
Very good
Posted on Thu, 05 May 2022
enjoyed x
best
Lena
Read full commentPosted in Hræfn
I wondered...
Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022
...at the "pipe format" then came upon
"The beach,
a narrow strip
with the sharpest
jagged rocks..."
Ah! Good stuff
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in You Looked Like You Had Lost
Astounded by your kindness
Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2022
...if I may direct attention to kilb50
a good and well timed kick up the carpe diem
https://www.abctales.com/story/kilb50/living-life-backwards
and a...
Read full commentPosted in Drones and Harpies
Suspect
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
this is too close to truth to raise a smile.
best to you
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in There is a Great Picture of Great Emperor Plutinplot! By Alfred N.Muggins
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