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I have 226 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 370983 times and 162 of my stories have been cherry picked.
157 of my 1,496 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 167 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

 

My stories

Cherry

Thrum

harmonics in the breeze doodle
Cherry

Soma

Walk around a lake on Christmas day doodle, hey better late than never :)
Cherry

Seasoning

Guess How Much I love you?
Cherry

Maple fall.

Syrup free doodle.

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157 of my comments have received 167 Great Feedback votes

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Clever

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022

"A wee boy, all bright eyes, stared out a window as we trudged past his house. An almost unconscious ritual hoping to see something better, something more than us grey ghosts, outside time, and we fell silent under his gaze."

A foil to the...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 44

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See Di-Hards' comment above:

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

and yes > ‘Noo, yer talkin shite –yed never get doubletime.’

Dark humour well handled.

More (greedy)

Lena x

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 42

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:)

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

Loved the little detail of the chicken attached to the musketeers bandolier, swinging there among the apostles :)

This is building very nicely, threads teased out ready to be woven.

Best

Lena x

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Posted in The Castle (16)

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Lovely

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

A real sense of place.

Best

Lena x

 

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Posted in Evening peace

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A quiet revelation

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

of promise in small things. Delightful and enjoyed.

best

Lena xx

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Posted in Meadowsweet

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"Time, you trickster"

Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022

yes, o yes

 

"Time you trickster,

 

with your end-of-pier magic

your patter and illusions

your shadowy assistant

 

clad in black."

 

Your kenning raises a wry smile, spot on!...

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Posted in Time and its Jovial Deceptions

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Very good

Posted on Thu, 05 May 2022

enjoyed x

best

Lena

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Posted in Hræfn

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I wondered...

Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022

...at the "pipe format" then came upon

"The beach,

a narrow strip

with the sharpest

jagged rocks..."

Ah! Good stuff

Best

Lena x

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Posted in You Looked Like You Had Lost

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Astounded by your kindness

Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2022

...if I may direct attention to kilb50

a good and well timed kick up the carpe diem

 https://www.abctales.com/story/kilb50/living-life-backwards

and a...

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Posted in Drones and Harpies

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Suspect

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

this is too close to truth to raise a smile.

best to you

Lena x 

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Posted in There is a Great Picture of Great Emperor Plutinplot! By Alfred N.Muggins

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