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I have 249 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 353994 times and 146 of my stories have been cherry picked.
108 of my 1,368 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 117 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

 

My stories

Cherry

Hoist Your Colours

Repost. Removed because I reflected that it may be too simple, angry and direct. It is, what it is.
Gold cherry

Table

Love doodle
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Cherry

Not Digitally Enhanced

Absentminded doodle
Cherry

Marshmallows

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108 of my comments have received 117 Great Feedback votes

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Caught up

Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022

...so I'll have to be patient, while you cast your eye over Moffat 3

Enjoyed reading the story so far.

Best

Lena x

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Posted in The Picture Ranch 60

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Body count

Posted on Wed, 10 Nov 2021

rising, tho' Eleanor seems to have the higher score so far, I haven't kept tally :) Fisher appears to be better known, and targeted than he'd like, makes me wonder why she chose to use his services in the first place, given her apparent...

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Posted in The Picture Ranch 55

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Grim

Posted on Mon, 05 Jun 2017

and well told. Not a huge fan of this genre usually, but I'm hooked :)

Best as ever

Lena

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Posted in The Picture Ranch 28

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Clever

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022

"A wee boy, all bright eyes, stared out a window as we trudged past his house. An almost unconscious ritual hoping to see something better, something more than us grey ghosts, outside time, and we fell silent under his gaze."

A foil to the...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 44

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See Di-Hards' comment above:

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

and yes > ‘Noo, yer talkin shite –yed never get doubletime.’

Dark humour well handled.

More (greedy)

Lena x

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 42

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Caught up

Posted on Fri, 17 Jun 2022

and enjoyed reading. Arent is a bit impulsive :) Look forward to your next installment.

Best

L x

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Posted in The Castle (23)

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:)

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

Loved the little detail of the chicken attached to the musketeers bandolier, swinging there among the apostles :)

This is building very nicely, threads teased out ready to be woven.

Best

Lena x

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Posted in The Castle (16)

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Lovely

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

A real sense of place.

Best

Lena x

 

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Posted in Evening peace

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A quiet revelation

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

of promise in small things. Delightful and enjoyed.

best

Lena xx

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Posted in Meadowsweet

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All armies take

Posted on Thu, 26 May 2022

...whatever their war machine needs, be it Polearms or cannon fodder.

"soldiers polluting the grasslands - felling the great oaks to fashion pike rods and baggage wagons; digging the lush saddle of land where they lived to pitch their...

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Posted in The Castle (7)

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