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I have 230 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 595051 times
and 172 of my stories have been cherry picked.
198 of my 1,603 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 211 votes







Keep on
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
...keeping on. In Leeds, the facade changes, corporate aspirations rise, still the same heartsink beyond gentrification and tarmaced over cobbles. Stay bright and look for points of light
xxx
L
Read full commentPosted in Bar room blues
Like this very much Tina,
Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014
Like this very much Tina, there's a considered and deliberate fracture in the rhythm to add weight to the cracks of her day and in temperment. Carefully crafted, as ever with you. :)
all the best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Definitely Not Just Another Dog Story
In the tradition...
Posted on Tue, 23 Dec 2025
of great satirical fabulists (including Calvino and Dario Fo)
Cracking read.
Best as ever
Lena
Read full commentPosted in The Plenilune
Wistful smile
Posted on Thu, 04 Dec 2025
Nicely told, I often re-visit Pennine walks I can't take anymore, hope my memories hold at least :)
Best as ever
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in An elderly dream
Sharp description
Posted on Tue, 25 Nov 2025
... formed in little slices to underpin sensation in cut of sudden winter.
Delightful.
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Glinting Diamonds Everywhere!
Love it,
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2025
wry and telling: modern "magical" aspirations deconstructed
best as...
Read full commentPosted in FAIRY CAKES
Structure
Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025
carefully crafted to reflect fragmentation of thought displaced by ever present unwanted memory.
Excellent
best as ever
Lena
Read full commentPosted in Put The Sword Down
Reminds me
Posted on Thu, 16 Oct 2025
of Plath and her figs of opportunity in The Bell Jar.
Good read and enjoyed
best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in At Home in the Pause
:)
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2025
Birds song, mad parrots at Hampton court, peppergun hailed with beechnuts, toe-footie with chestnuts, upbraided by squizzas, and a sack of windfall apples in the woods this weekend.
We need to breathe, yet time and money wrenches us into...
Read full commentPosted in Virtual Reality
Agree
Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2025
...particularly moved by implied symbolism of the puzzle cube, that all colours should be seperated asap, an ideology that appears to infest social thought, seemingly without applied reason.
best
Lena
Read full commentPosted in The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube
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