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I have 119 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 18857 times and 6 of my stories have been cherry picked.
7 of my 106 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 7 votes

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niamh cosgrove

Hi I'm Niamh

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

First summer rain

I close my eyes as the first summer rain Gently clashes and cascades down the window pane. I look down and see a small pair of army green Wellington...

The Ocean

I can taste the salt coming from the spray of the high tides Ocean as its waves break against the rocks. As I watch the children play, unbeknownst to...
Cherry

Aurora

I stood on a mound of dew kissed blades of grass Overlooking the lake. The reflection of the lights dancing On the waters ripples were like that of...

Speechless

You stand there with your blackened teeth, And pose with your knife so sharp, You make my choices obsolete, On and on you harp, About killing me, my...

You'd be scared too!

You’d be scared too, if you were me! A black toothed man is who I see, He carries around a hunting knife, And constantly threatens to end my life...

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7 of my comments have received 7 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

very well written

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020

once again onemorething you got a well deserved cherry.

i really enjoyed your work, the imagery is very vivid

very well written!!

monodemo

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Posted in I Tell Myself This When I Am Afraid

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wow

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

wow onemorething!

that is an amazing poem! it was gripping in its descriptions of spring from beginning to end.

thank you for sharing it with us!

monodemo

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Posted in Worm Moon

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OMG

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry. 

i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well. 

honestly, a great piece of work

well done

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Posted in The Fox Hunt

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nice one

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

i liked this poem. it was short and to the point. also i liked the use of the word thunder.

well done

 

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Posted in Impressions

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nice one

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

wow, what a great poem!

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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nice one

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

i liked this poem richard, i liked it because it was easy to read and the ending was sweet!

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Posted in If Only

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thank you

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.

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Posted in the zoo