monodemo

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I have 331 stories published in 12 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 86055 times and 63 of my stories have been cherry picked.
27 of my 274 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 28 votes

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Hi I'm monodemo,

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

Runaway Mother chapter 21

Has Mary been handed an olive branch? If so, from who?
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Cherry

Runaway Mother chapter 20

Does the tension rise between Mary and Zach?
Cherry

Runaway Mother chapter 17

Can Mary finally catch a break? It's date night! I wonder how it goes....
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27 of my comments have received 28 Great Feedback votes

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thank you so much for not

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022

thank you so much for not only a cherry but the golden cherry. i really appreciate it and its so unexpected! 

my nanny is a wonderful woman both now and then and even though i have to seperate the two which is hard i do it for my own...

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Posted in Nanny part 1

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 thank you abc tales

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

thank you abc tales for not only the cherries, but the golden cherries as well. you have really turned my day around!

i feel very close to this book and am pouring my heart and soul into it. im not doing to well mentally at the minute, but...

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Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 13

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thanks jenny

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

just wait, one of these days they might get closer to finding her....!

mono

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Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 13

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well done

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

nice one richard. a great take on a shadow. i especially loved the last stanza. 

congratulations on a great poem

mono

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Posted in WhoIsIt

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well done

Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022

that was a lovely piece jenny. thanks for letting me into your world. i have a great appreciation of music too and im sorry nik turner passed. he was a good age though!

lovely piece

mono

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Posted in Edge Of Time That Influenced Mine - Nik Turner Tribute

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thank you abc tales

Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2022

id like to thank everyone at abc tales for the honour of the golden cherries today. i started out late in my writing, i was in my early thirties, and to come as far as having golden cherries means more than i can say

thank you

mono

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Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 9

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yes the picture is copywrite

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2022

yes the picture is copywrite free i got it off flickr

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Posted in heart string's part one (Tom)

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exactly what i tried to make

Posted on Sun, 28 Aug 2022

exactly what i tried to make the reader feel. well that and the story is actually true. its sad and in my life i have been dealt shitty cards but there are people out there who do genuinely care about others well being and try to the best of...

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Posted in Thank you

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thank you for the cherries. i

Posted on Mon, 22 Aug 2022

thank you for the cherries. i really appreciate them. its hard talking about something so relevant in todays culture but yet still so misunderstood. take the kardashians for example, their always going on about their anxiety. they dont experience...

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Posted in Stop the stigma

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i loved this one paul. it was

Posted on Sat, 20 Aug 2022

i loved this one paul. it was really heartfelt and heartwarming. a gem!

mono

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Posted in Once Upon A Time

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