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I have 57 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 7414 times and 2 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 40 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote

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niamh cosgrove

Hi I'm Niamh

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

Green Eyed Monster

They say everything is temporary, But with money families should be wary! He’s having money troubles, but aren’t we all? When she gives him money, I...
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Autumn Years

She once was a vibrant green leaf on a great big oak, Swaying nonchalantly with her friends, laughing at a joke, Now yellow and starting to turn...
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Plus Sized

I’m sorry I lied to you And hurt you over the years When I see this I try to Hold back all the tears. You don’t feel comfort Within your own skin You...
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You took my shining star!

You took my shining star! Why? You had all the others in the sky! Try as I may, I cannot understand. Buy it back, nay, You have the upper hand! Let’s...
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I'm proud of you son!

Trusting her got you caught in a snare, Beating to the sound of her drum, Son, whatever the outcome, Know that this girl was a deceiver, Not like a...
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thank you

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.

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