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niamh cosgrove
Hi I'm Niamh
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
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the words just came out of my mouth
Every girl is pretty in their own way Even if they happen to be gay When the words just came out of my mouth I expected people to scream and to shout...
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My Max
Goodbye my darling, my precious, my all. You helped me throughout my fall In health and looked at me in awe With those big eyes and that brown paw...
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anti depressants
I take these two orange pills every night They dull out the pain the struggle and fight They numb my senses until I feel Nothing that this world...
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the zoo
‘Will you come to the zoo?’ my father suggested. I originally said yes but then I reflected; Why put myself through that, I’m an intellectual, His...
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the thank you note
To Auntie Marge, Thank you for having me last weekend. I got out of the hospital yesterday. It’s nice to be home in my own bed. I’m sorry for...
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thank you
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.
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