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I have 62 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 9657 times and 3 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 48 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote

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niamh cosgrove

Hi I'm Niamh

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 


My stories

this is me

In this magical place I stay, Bullies I leave far away, My only friend, imagination, Free from all indignation Negativity I tend to resent No need in...

family fued

Feeling your warm embrace Brought tears upon my face I know the past involved a feud And how me you almost sued I admit there was deception Of me you...

Young at heart

I look in the mirror and all I can see Is a frail old woman staring back at me ‘Mom, is that you?’ I ask her bemused But then I realize I was...

sausage nation

I live in a sausage nation, A creation, Where all you can eat is good food, No feud, For the amount of sausage is endless. My human bends down and...


You sired 12 children who loved you dearly, 25 grandchildren you met all so nearly, You have 21 great grand children so far and counting, Each year...


1 of my comments has received 1 Great Feedback vote

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thank you

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.

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