monodemo
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I have 355 stories published in
14 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 100830 times
and 76 of my stories have been cherry picked.
28 of my 291 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 29 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
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My stories
The illusive pop
Money I never had!
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Blue Lagoon
I have chosen Louise to be a fictional saint in my eyes as she went through something horrific and came out the other side...eventually!
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Blue Monday
This is a story that showcases the power of imagination and the strength of perception.
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Wall of happiness
Everyone should have a wall of happiness!!!
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The hidden painting chapter 5
Can a friend shine a light on the situation?
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thank you so much for not
Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022
thank you so much for not only a cherry but the golden cherry. i really appreciate it and its so unexpected!
my nanny is a wonderful woman both now and then and even though i have to seperate the two which is hard i do it for my own...
Read full commentPosted in Nanny part 1
my mom uses water pastry. you
Posted on Sun, 18 Dec 2022
my mom uses water pastry. you make it and its all gooey and watery and put it in the fridge for a couple of hours, add more flour and roll out those bad boys!
im sorry to hear yours didnt turn out ok. remember though, if you run out of...
Read full commentPosted in Mince pies
thank you abc tales
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
thank you abc tales for not only the cherries, but the golden cherries as well. you have really turned my day around!
i feel very close to this book and am pouring my heart and soul into it. im not doing to well mentally at the minute, but...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 13
thanks jenny
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
just wait, one of these days they might get closer to finding her....!
mono
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 13
well done
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
nice one richard. a great take on a shadow. i especially loved the last stanza.
congratulations on a great poem
mono
Read full commentPosted in WhoIsIt
well done
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
that was a lovely piece jenny. thanks for letting me into your world. i have a great appreciation of music too and im sorry nik turner passed. he was a good age though!
lovely piece
mono
Read full commentPosted in Edge Of Time That Influenced Mine - Nik Turner Tribute
thank you abc tales
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2022
id like to thank everyone at abc tales for the honour of the golden cherries today. i started out late in my writing, i was in my early thirties, and to come as far as having golden cherries means more than i can say
thank you
mono
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 9
yes the picture is copywrite
Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2022
yes the picture is copywrite free i got it off flickr
Read full commentPosted in heart string's part one (Tom)
exactly what i tried to make
Posted on Sun, 28 Aug 2022
exactly what i tried to make the reader feel. well that and the story is actually true. its sad and in my life i have been dealt shitty cards but there are people out there who do genuinely care about others well being and try to the best of...
Read full commentPosted in Thank you
thank you for the cherries. i
Posted on Mon, 22 Aug 2022
thank you for the cherries. i really appreciate them. its hard talking about something so relevant in todays culture but yet still so misunderstood. take the kardashians for example, their always going on about their anxiety. they dont experience...
Read full commentPosted in Stop the stigma
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