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I have 173 stories published in 9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 47257 times and 12 of my stories have been cherry picked.
11 of my 149 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 11 votes

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niamh cosgrove

Hi I'm Niamh

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

Cherry

She Cries

Picture from Pixabay She looks out onto the quiet suburban cluster of red brick semidetached houses and weeps. The seagulls on the roof on the house...
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No More

Some Flash Fiction (under 400 words) Picture from Pixabay. As the family of four made short bread cookies, Dave saw Kathy rub her ever expanding...

Brain Hemorrhage

As I sat on the last bus home at 4am I started to regret downing that last brain haemorrhage cocktail as if it was water. It looked like a brain in a...

Enough

As I reclined on the black leather chair, dozing, reading James Patterson’s new novel in the front room, the alien sound of the letter box clunked...

The Small Black Velvety Box

I opened my eyes on Christmas morning excited about the fact that I thought I was going to be presented with an engagement ring. I came to that...
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11 of my comments have received 11 Great Feedback votes

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thank you

Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021

thanks drew,

yea its great its a whole month now since it cant really be celebrated because of covid

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Posted in Pride

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Well done

Posted on Wed, 02 Jun 2021

I love your poem one more thing. It was easy to read and very enjoyable. Thank you. A well deserved cherry

monodemo

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Posted in Building A Boat

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I really enjoyed your piece

Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021

I really enjoyed your piece Luigi, its nice to read someone elses life experiences. I love to see people writing about LGBTQ experiences, especially when they are positive ones. A very well deserving cherry!!

Thank you

monodemo

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Posted in No More Waiting

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very well written

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020

once again onemorething you got a well deserved cherry.

i really enjoyed your work, the imagery is very vivid

very well written!!

monodemo

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Posted in I Tell Myself This When I Am Afraid

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wow

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

wow onemorething!

that is an amazing poem! it was gripping in its descriptions of spring from beginning to end.

thank you for sharing it with us!

monodemo

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Posted in Worm Moon

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OMG

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry. 

i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well. 

honestly, a great piece of work

well done

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Posted in The Fox Hunt

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nice one

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

i liked this poem. it was short and to the point. also i liked the use of the word thunder.

well done

 

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Posted in Impressions

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nice one

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

wow, what a great poem!

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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nice one

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

i liked this poem richard, i liked it because it was easy to read and the ending was sweet!

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Posted in If Only

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thank you

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.

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Posted in the zoo