monodemo
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I have 173 stories published in
9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 47257 times
and 12 of my stories have been cherry picked.
11 of my 149 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 11 votes
niamh cosgrove
Hi I'm Niamh
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
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She Cries
Picture from Pixabay She looks out onto the quiet suburban cluster of red brick semidetached houses and weeps. The seagulls on the roof on the house...
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No More
Some Flash Fiction (under 400 words) Picture from Pixabay. As the family of four made short bread cookies, Dave saw Kathy rub her ever expanding...
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Brain Hemorrhage
As I sat on the last bus home at 4am I started to regret downing that last brain haemorrhage cocktail as if it was water. It looked like a brain in a...
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Enough
As I reclined on the black leather chair, dozing, reading James Patterson’s new novel in the front room, the alien sound of the letter box clunked...
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The Small Black Velvety Box
I opened my eyes on Christmas morning excited about the fact that I thought I was going to be presented with an engagement ring. I came to that...
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thank you
Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021
thanks drew,
yea its great its a whole month now since it cant really be celebrated because of covid
Read full commentPosted in Pride
Well done
Posted on Wed, 02 Jun 2021
I love your poem one more thing. It was easy to read and very enjoyable. Thank you. A well deserved cherry
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in Building A Boat
I really enjoyed your piece
Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021
I really enjoyed your piece Luigi, its nice to read someone elses life experiences. I love to see people writing about LGBTQ experiences, especially when they are positive ones. A very well deserving cherry!!
Thank you
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in No More Waiting
very well written
Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020
once again onemorething you got a well deserved cherry.
i really enjoyed your work, the imagery is very vivid
very well written!!
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in I Tell Myself This When I Am Afraid
wow
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020
wow onemorething!
that is an amazing poem! it was gripping in its descriptions of spring from beginning to end.
thank you for sharing it with us!
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in Worm Moon
OMG
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry.
i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well.
honestly, a great piece of work
well done
Read full commentPosted in The Fox Hunt
nice one
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
i liked this poem. it was short and to the point. also i liked the use of the word thunder.
well done
Read full commentPosted in Impressions
nice one
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
wow, what a great poem!
Read full commentPosted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven
nice one
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020
i liked this poem richard, i liked it because it was easy to read and the ending was sweet!
Read full commentPosted in If Only
thank you
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.
Read full commentPosted in the zoo