monodemo

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I have 424 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 148248 times and 110 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 356 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes

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Hi I'm monodemo,

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

Gold cherry

The Home

Sometimes hard things have to be done!

New year's rant

My new year’s resolution isn’t your typical one. I don’t want to say I’m going to give up something, because that never works. No, my resolution...
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My greatest fear!

Seven I’ve lost This time of year! My sister absent For her I fear! Receive a text Her saying goodbye? Her struggles real I know she tries! Look at...
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May 4th (chapter 6)

Does David pop the question so early?
Cherry

My angel

To this day, I can’t handle the sight of honey! It transports me back to the end of my beloved Max’s life. Max developed diabetes when he was twelve...
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35 of my comments have received 36 Great Feedback votes

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thank you so much for not

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022

thank you so much for not only a cherry but the golden cherry. i really appreciate it and its so unexpected! 

my nanny is a wonderful woman both now and then and even though i have to seperate the two which is hard i do it for my own...

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Posted in Nanny part 1

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thank you di, it was very

Posted on Sun, 03 Dec 2023

thank you di, it was very moving just writing it. i had to do it in 2 sittings because it brought me to tears. yes, gary is a rockstar! im sorry to ohear about sam. hopefully he and max have met. they would probably have been good friends!...

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Posted in My angel

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omg! thank you

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023

Oh, My, God!!! Story of the week!!! WOW!!! I'm in complete and utter shock! Thank you so much ABCTales for this great honor. I'm literally crying as I'm writing this! It's shocked me as each and every story was so good this week!!! 

Wow...

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Posted in The Party

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Things today went grand.

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023

Things today went grand. Thank you insert for asking. Im moved over the golden cherries

mono

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Posted in The Party

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that was so enjoyable

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023

that was so enjoyable turlough. i love the way in which it flows. youve got my vote that you deserved that cherry!

mono

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Posted in My Verbal Diary Here

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Congrats on the cherries

Posted on Sun, 06 Aug 2023

Turlough, those cherries are well earned. The piece you wrote really spoke to me! Some of those lines...legendary.

niamh

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Posted in Water Under the Bridge

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Thanks

Posted on Tue, 29 Aug 2023

Thanks turlough

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Posted in 'Painkiller'

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thank you

Posted on Thu, 17 Aug 2023

thank you turlough, your comment was lovely to recieve. i know its not my best work, but then again i havnt really written anything since i came out of hospital. i'm gonna have to excercise the old brain a bit i think, lol

thanks again...

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Posted in Cow

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my mom uses water pastry. you

Posted on Sun, 18 Dec 2022

my mom uses water pastry. you make it and its all gooey and watery and put it in the fridge for a couple of hours, add more flour and roll out those bad boys!

im sorry to hear yours didnt turn out ok. remember though, if you run out of...

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Posted in Mince pies

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 thank you abc tales

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

thank you abc tales for not only the cherries, but the golden cherries as well. you have really turned my day around!

i feel very close to this book and am pouring my heart and soul into it. im not doing to well mentally at the minute, but...

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Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 13

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