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I have 106 stories published in 5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 13246 times and 5 of my stories have been cherry picked.
6 of my 97 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 6 votes

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niamh cosgrove

Hi I'm Niamh

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

Spencer

I hear a knock on the window, And look out to emptiness, The knocking persists, I look into the abyss. As I’m at the back door, Quietly wondering,...
1 likes

Covid 19

This situation has me petrified , It feels a bit like genocide! Lockdown is a scary word! Especially from the Taoiseach’s mouth heard! It's the worst...

Ceviche

My daughter got sea monkeys, when she was three, Into their fortress she poured the powder, I thought ‘how hard could it be?’ Before long it was like...

Advice

The worse advice I was ever given Was from a social worker, She was career driven, Of my life an observer. How she convinced Me I wasn’t being abused...
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The queen is dead

I was in England for my wife's birthday, Down the West End. We brought our lovely daughter, And her best friend. We wandered into a busy pub, Just...

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6 of my comments have received 6 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

wow

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

wow onemorething!

that is an amazing poem! it was gripping in its descriptions of spring from beginning to end.

thank you for sharing it with us!

monodemo

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Posted in Worm Moon

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OMG

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry. 

i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well. 

honestly, a great piece of work

well done

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Posted in The Fox Hunt

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nice one

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

i liked this poem. it was short and to the point. also i liked the use of the word thunder.

well done

 

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Posted in Impressions

1 Vote

nice one

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

wow, what a great poem!

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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nice one

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

i liked this poem richard, i liked it because it was easy to read and the ending was sweet!

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Posted in If Only

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thank you

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.

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Posted in the zoo