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I have 62 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 9657 times and 3 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 48 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote

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niamh cosgrove

Hi I'm Niamh

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

this is me

In this magical place I stay, Bullies I leave far away, My only friend, imagination, Free from all indignation Negativity I tend to resent No need in...

family fued

Feeling your warm embrace Brought tears upon my face I know the past involved a feud And how me you almost sued I admit there was deception Of me you...
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Cherry

Young at heart

I look in the mirror and all I can see Is a frail old woman staring back at me ‘Mom, is that you?’ I ask her bemused But then I realize I was...
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sausage nation

I live in a sausage nation, A creation, Where all you can eat is good food, No feud, For the amount of sausage is endless. My human bends down and...
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Grandfather

You sired 12 children who loved you dearly, 25 grandchildren you met all so nearly, You have 21 great grand children so far and counting, Each year...
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thank you

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.

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