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2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 7414 times
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niamh cosgrove
Hi I'm Niamh
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
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Green Eyed Monster
They say everything is temporary, But with money families should be wary! He’s having money troubles, but aren’t we all? When she gives him money, I...
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Autumn Years
She once was a vibrant green leaf on a great big oak, Swaying nonchalantly with her friends, laughing at a joke, Now yellow and starting to turn...
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Plus Sized
I’m sorry I lied to you And hurt you over the years When I see this I try to Hold back all the tears. You don’t feel comfort Within your own skin You...
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You took my shining star!
You took my shining star! Why? You had all the others in the sky! Try as I may, I cannot understand. Buy it back, nay, You have the upper hand! Let’s...
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I'm proud of you son!
Trusting her got you caught in a snare, Beating to the sound of her drum, Son, whatever the outcome, Know that this girl was a deceiver, Not like a...
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thank you
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.
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