monodemo
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I have 217 stories published in
9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 62642 times
and 21 of my stories have been cherry picked.
11 of my 156 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 11 votes
niamh cosgrove
Hi I'm Niamh
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
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Freddie
Spencer was a seagull who thought he ruled all of the estate he frequented. Year after year he nested with his partner, Wendy, and they made...
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Fifteen Years
Julia, was a kind and generous woman who was brought up with the beliefs that she should put others before herself. She was a gentle soul who wouldn’...
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Daddy's Little Girl
2002 Kate was a very studious girl. Unfortunately, due to health issues, she had to drop out of school at sixteen. Her father, Robert, was her idol...
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I Remember
I remember the first time I met you just as clearly as the last time I laid eyes on you. It was a sweltering day in mid-August 1998. We drove two...
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10 Seconds
It can only take 10 seconds to alter a person’s view on life…. just 10 seconds 1 Mississippi Sinead lingers by her bedside, near the clinical room,...
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thank you
Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021
thanks drew,
yea its great its a whole month now since it cant really be celebrated because of covid
Read full commentPosted in Pride
Well done
Posted on Wed, 02 Jun 2021
I love your poem one more thing. It was easy to read and very enjoyable. Thank you. A well deserved cherry
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in Building A Boat
I really enjoyed your piece
Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021
I really enjoyed your piece Luigi, its nice to read someone elses life experiences. I love to see people writing about LGBTQ experiences, especially when they are positive ones. A very well deserving cherry!!
Thank you
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in No More Waiting
very well written
Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020
once again onemorething you got a well deserved cherry.
i really enjoyed your work, the imagery is very vivid
very well written!!
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in I Tell Myself This When I Am Afraid
wow
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020
wow onemorething!
that is an amazing poem! it was gripping in its descriptions of spring from beginning to end.
thank you for sharing it with us!
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in Worm Moon
OMG
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry.
i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well.
honestly, a great piece of work
well done
Read full commentPosted in The Fox Hunt
nice one
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
i liked this poem. it was short and to the point. also i liked the use of the word thunder.
well done
Read full commentPosted in Impressions
nice one
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
wow, what a great poem!
Read full commentPosted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven
nice one
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020
i liked this poem richard, i liked it because it was easy to read and the ending was sweet!
Read full commentPosted in If Only
thank you
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.
Read full commentPosted in the zoo