monodemo
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I have 448 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 334177 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Yard Sale Chapter 1
A tale of woe, deceit, heartbreak and love.
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- 6 comments
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- 2441 reads
The Accountant
A tale of a young womans journey to reality
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- 1 comment
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- 808 reads
Freedom
A short poem about flying the coop.
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- 2 comments
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- 907 reads
The affair
Something etched in my memory!
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- 3 comments
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- 1486 reads
The love letter
I wrote this for my girlfriend. It's literally my heart on paper!
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- 508 reads
OMG
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry.
i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well.
honestly, a great piece of work
well done
Read full commentPosted in The Fox Hunt
nice one
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
i liked this poem. it was short and to the point. also i liked the use of the word thunder.
well done
Read full commentPosted in Impressions
nice one
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
wow, what a great poem!
Read full commentPosted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven
nice one
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020
i liked this poem richard, i liked it because it was easy to read and the ending was sweet!
Read full commentPosted in If Only
thank you
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.
Read full commentPosted in the zoo
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