monodemo
Primary tabs
I have 425 stories published in
16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 161394 times
and 111 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 356 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
May 4th (chapter 2)
Did David just meet 'the one?' Will Eoin show up and ruin the night?
- Read more about May 4th (chapter 2)
- 4 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 394 reads
May 4th (chapter 1 part 2)
This is chapter one of my new book. I hope you like it as there are going to be many twists and turns along the way. Enjoy!
- Read more about May 4th (chapter 1 part 2)
- 4 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 470 reads
May 4th (chapter 1 part 1)
This is chapter one of my new book. I hope you like it as there are going to be many twists and turns along the way. Enjoy!
- Read more about May 4th (chapter 1 part 1)
- 2 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 472 reads
the knot
How much pain would you take for your beloved?
- Read more about the knot
- 4 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 277 reads
Beauty is in the mind of the beholder
What would you choose...a shallow relationship or love?
- Read more about Beauty is in the mind of the beholder
- Log in to post comments
- 147 reads
nice one
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
i liked this poem. it was short and to the point. also i liked the use of the word thunder.
well done
Read full commentPosted in Impressions
nice one
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
wow, what a great poem!
Read full commentPosted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven
nice one
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020
i liked this poem richard, i liked it because it was easy to read and the ending was sweet!
Read full commentPosted in If Only
thank you
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.
Read full commentPosted in the zoo
Pages