monodemo

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I have 425 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 157502 times and 111 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 356 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes

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Hi I'm monodemo,

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

The after Party

the speech Grandma gives after the party!

Motherly love

12-11-2003 Dear diary, Why is it that always he In her head comes before me? Is it his charm or simple wit That takes from me? the little git! I need...
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Gold cherry
Story of the week

The Party

Have you ever wondered what goes bump in the night?
Cherry

May 4th (chapter 3 part 1)

Will David use the tissue with Jessica's number on it?

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35 of my comments have received 36 Great Feedback votes

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i really enjoyed that, so

Posted on Fri, 05 Aug 2022

i really enjoyed that, so much that i read over it a few times. the golden cherries and poem of the week well deserved!!!

mono

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Posted in The Forest of Discarded Raiment

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this poem really talked to me

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022

this poem really talked to me. the last stansa especially;. "nature's ghostly melodious echoes reverberating at its core to linger long"

beautiful

mono

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Posted in Fingal's Cave

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hi jenny

Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022

thank you so much for sharing that touching piece. it resonated with how i feel right now so thank you

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Posted in Forget-Me-Not

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well done

Posted on Fri, 29 Jul 2022

i like the way the poem turns full circle and back to his name Earnest. he was obviously a well loved man and im sorry he left you. cancer can be brutal like that. 

thank you for sharing

mono

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Posted in Earnest II

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thank you

Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021

thanks drew,

yea its great its a whole month now since it cant really be celebrated because of covid

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Posted in Pride

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Well done

Posted on Wed, 02 Jun 2021

I love your poem one more thing. It was easy to read and very enjoyable. Thank you. A well deserved cherry

monodemo

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Posted in Building A Boat

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I really enjoyed your piece

Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021

I really enjoyed your piece Luigi, its nice to read someone elses life experiences. I love to see people writing about LGBTQ experiences, especially when they are positive ones. A very well deserving cherry!!

Thank you

monodemo

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Posted in No More Waiting

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very well written

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020

once again onemorething you got a well deserved cherry.

i really enjoyed your work, the imagery is very vivid

very well written!!

monodemo

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Posted in I Tell Myself This When I Am Afraid

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wow

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

wow onemorething!

that is an amazing poem! it was gripping in its descriptions of spring from beginning to end.

thank you for sharing it with us!

monodemo

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Posted in Worm Moon

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OMG

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry. 

i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well. 

honestly, a great piece of work

well done

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Posted in The Fox Hunt

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