monodemo
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I have 425 stories published in
16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 157554 times
and 111 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 356 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
The after Party
the speech Grandma gives after the party!
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Motherly love
12-11-2003 Dear diary, Why is it that always he In her head comes before me? Is it his charm or simple wit That takes from me? the little git! I need...
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The Party
Have you ever wondered what goes bump in the night?
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May 4th (chapter 3 part 2)
Will Jessica return Davids message?
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May 4th (chapter 3 part 1)
Will David use the tissue with Jessica's number on it?
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i really enjoyed that, so
Posted on Fri, 05 Aug 2022
i really enjoyed that, so much that i read over it a few times. the golden cherries and poem of the week well deserved!!!
mono
Read full commentPosted in The Forest of Discarded Raiment
this poem really talked to me
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022
this poem really talked to me. the last stansa especially;. "nature's ghostly melodious echoes reverberating at its core to linger long"
beautiful
mono
Read full commentPosted in Fingal's Cave
hi jenny
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
thank you so much for sharing that touching piece. it resonated with how i feel right now so thank you
Read full commentPosted in Forget-Me-Not
well done
Posted on Fri, 29 Jul 2022
i like the way the poem turns full circle and back to his name Earnest. he was obviously a well loved man and im sorry he left you. cancer can be brutal like that.
thank you for sharing
mono
Read full commentPosted in Earnest II
thank you
Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021
thanks drew,
yea its great its a whole month now since it cant really be celebrated because of covid
Read full commentPosted in Pride
Well done
Posted on Wed, 02 Jun 2021
I love your poem one more thing. It was easy to read and very enjoyable. Thank you. A well deserved cherry
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in Building A Boat
I really enjoyed your piece
Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021
I really enjoyed your piece Luigi, its nice to read someone elses life experiences. I love to see people writing about LGBTQ experiences, especially when they are positive ones. A very well deserving cherry!!
Thank you
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in No More Waiting
very well written
Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020
once again onemorething you got a well deserved cherry.
i really enjoyed your work, the imagery is very vivid
very well written!!
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in I Tell Myself This When I Am Afraid
wow
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020
wow onemorething!
that is an amazing poem! it was gripping in its descriptions of spring from beginning to end.
thank you for sharing it with us!
monodemo
Read full commentPosted in Worm Moon
OMG
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry.
i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well.
honestly, a great piece of work
well done
Read full commentPosted in The Fox Hunt
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