monodemo
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I have 425 stories published in
16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 156763 times
and 111 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 356 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
My angel
To this day, I can’t handle the sight of honey! It transports me back to the end of my beloved Max’s life. Max developed diabetes when he was twelve...
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We're not in Kansas anymore!
An old story I've revisited
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May 4th (chapter 5 part 2)
Will he sleep it out?
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May 4th (chapter 5 part 1)
Will they decide to go on another date?
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May 4th (chapter 4)
Does the first date go well? or was it a mistake?
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thanks jenny
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
just wait, one of these days they might get closer to finding her....!
mono
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 13
well done
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
nice one richard. a great take on a shadow. i especially loved the last stanza.
congratulations on a great poem
mono
Read full commentPosted in WhoIsIt
well done
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
that was a lovely piece jenny. thanks for letting me into your world. i have a great appreciation of music too and im sorry nik turner passed. he was a good age though!
lovely piece
mono
Read full commentPosted in Edge Of Time That Influenced Mine - Nik Turner Tribute
thank you abc tales
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2022
id like to thank everyone at abc tales for the honour of the golden cherries today. i started out late in my writing, i was in my early thirties, and to come as far as having golden cherries means more than i can say
thank you
mono
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 9
yes the picture is copywrite
Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2022
yes the picture is copywrite free i got it off flickr
Read full commentPosted in heart string's part one (Tom)
exactly what i tried to make
Posted on Sun, 28 Aug 2022
exactly what i tried to make the reader feel. well that and the story is actually true. its sad and in my life i have been dealt shitty cards but there are people out there who do genuinely care about others well being and try to the best of...
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thank you for the cherries. i
Posted on Mon, 22 Aug 2022
thank you for the cherries. i really appreciate them. its hard talking about something so relevant in todays culture but yet still so misunderstood. take the kardashians for example, their always going on about their anxiety. they dont experience...
Read full commentPosted in Stop the stigma
i loved this one paul. it was
Posted on Sat, 20 Aug 2022
i loved this one paul. it was really heartfelt and heartwarming. a gem!
mono
Read full commentPosted in Once Upon A Time
i enjoyed that one. the tune
Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2022
i enjoyed that one. the tune 87 87 88 really worked well.
mono
Read full commentPosted in While the billows roll
well deserved cherries. i
Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022
well deserved cherries. i loved the rhythm of the poem. the one word opening line for each stanza.
thank you for sharing
mono
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