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2547 of my comments have received 2604 Great Feedback votes

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very nicely written. I wonder

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

very nicely written. I wonder how many penis adorned desks there are in the country? 

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beautifully done Tina. Have I

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2015

beautifully done Tina. Have I read this before?

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Posted in Seeing the Light

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'Hitler drank tap water'  -

Posted on Tue, 24 Nov 2015

'Hitler drank tap water'  - brilliant line!

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I'm glad to hear she did

Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015

I'm glad to hear she did something about it in the end. This poem rings very true - all the sad excuses, always the same it seems. Heartbreaking last line.

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Hello Darkpink and welcome to

Posted on Tue, 10 Nov 2015

Hello Darkpink and welcome to ABC. There's some fantastic imagery in this piece. It does need a good edit. Quite a few places where the words you've chosen don't seem to quite match what's needed. I'm not sure if you used a thesaurus perhaps?...

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Superchap is a truly

Posted on Tue, 10 Nov 2015

Superchap is a truly wonderful name for a character, and I love the list of magazines - nice to see you back again pepsoid!

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Hello Jason and welcome to

Posted on Mon, 02 Nov 2015

Hello Jason and welcome to ABC. There's some lovely imagery in this. A couple of suggestions: I don't think the repetition works very well - and 'dating furniture' - should be dated

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an interesting storyline in

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

an interesting storyline in this piece Teddy. Might be worth expanding?

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Hello L.C. and welcome to ABC

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

Hello L.C. and welcome to ABC. In answer to your question, this is engaging enough to make me want to read chapter two. A few typos and odd word choices here and there which, if you go through it again and correct (perhaps get a friend to read it...

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a nicely written children's

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015

a nicely written children's story

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