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2692 of my comments have received 2784 Great Feedback votes

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I really enjoyed this orginal

Posted on Sun, 16 Dec 2018

I really enjoyed this orginal and well written piece. A wonderful ending especially. Thank you Theshy!

If you do another draft, there are a few places where you've used the present tense - or kept it in by mistake (not sure if you started...

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Posted in A Light Supper

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I really enojyed this little

Posted on Wed, 12 Dec 2018

I really enojyed this little slice of life writing but I wanted more!

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Posted in Results: 1979

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I’m very sorry you’re not

Posted on Sat, 01 Dec 2018

I’m very sorry you’re not well Hudson and I hope you improve soon, but to be honest I’m not 100% sorry if it results in a piece of sparkling prose like this. It’s the best thing I’ve seen on ABCTales for a while. Well done!

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ok, I've just re-read this

Posted on Mon, 19 Nov 2018

ok, I've just re-read this part - I do realise this might all change if, as you say, she gets more space in the next parts, but so far she seems to me to be just a foil for gillis - someone to whom he speaks and who occasionally relays...

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Fabulous title - and I really

Posted on Thu, 22 Nov 2018

Fabulous title - and I really like the poem. Do you think perhaps that first 'but' might be a bit unnecessary?

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Posted in Poem Written On A Plane Over The Atlantic Attempting To Justify A Life Of Debauchery

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this is developing at just

Posted on Wed, 31 Oct 2018

this is developing at just the right pace - nicely balanced too, between local colour, dialogue and action. So much harder to get right than people think

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A wonderful, reflective piece

Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018

A wonderful, reflective piece. I wish you luck finding out about the man in the photograph - please let us know how you get on!

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Posted in The Bells of Hell (IP)

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Like philip says - sometimes

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

Like philip says - sometimes I find your imagery a bit too cryptic, but this one's spot on. I particularly like the second stanza. Do you definitely mean inferred? (I was just wondering if it mght be an auto correct for infra red which would also...

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Posted in vicarious trauma

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'I added some humour to avoid

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

'I added some humour to avoid sounding unhinged'  hahahahahaha - not much makes me laugh at 7am. This is a brilliant and very very funny piece. I do hope your nom de plume and membership of this site is absolutely watertight Jane 

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Posted in Autopsy of a Boss

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I really like the way in

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

I really like the way in which you've gone back and forth in time - it's done very smoothly, also your female is convincing except possibly the tin of beer in the middle of the day (I'm not even sure why tbh, it just sounds a bit male? (I know...

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Posted in Sass (Part 2)

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