Sooz006
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Sooz006
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The Human Touch: Chapter Eleven
Chapter Eleven She was at the sink using the crash-dishes-together-angrily, method of washing up. She was drunk, but not falling over. He’d had more...
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The Human Touch: Chapter Ten
Chapter Ten Shelly pulled into the drive to see that John’s car wasn’t back and the lawns hadn’t been mowed. They’d been done the week before, so...
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The Human Touch: Chapter Nine
Chapter Nine John was in the shower when his mobile rang, she could hear him whistling and a fresh, piney fragrance of masculine shower gel seeped...
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The Human Touch: Chapter Eight ...2
~~*~~ Johnny broke into a sprint on the rough ground. He was already thumbing his walkie-talkie. ‘Delta Charlie Three. Delta Charlie Three. Over’...
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The Human Touch Chapter Eight ...1
Chapter Eight Sammy needed to pee. John had advised him to use the bathroom at the café, and Sammy had made his way there with every intention of...
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Sweetheart, you must talk to
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
Sweetheart, you must talk to somebody. Are you still at school? Talk to a sympathetic teacher or school counsellor. Ring Childline, or the Samaritans. Make an appointment and see your doctor. Most importantly, please speak to the counsellor you...
Read full commentPosted in How do you forgive a parent?
Hello mate, good to read you
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
Hello mate, good to read you again. Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...
Read full commentPosted in La belleza
The water looks black, but
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.
You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again
Aunty Pearl...
Read full commentPosted in Chicken Eye in the Sky
had learnt that it paid..
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014
had learnt that it paid...learned
she would not allow a word to slip from her lips. Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...
Read full commentPosted in Just Visiting
You express the mindset well
Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020
You express the mindset well and the writing is fluid. Writing is about putting down what you want to say and, whether the views expressed are indeed your views or the views of anybbody reading, is immeterial--they are the views of Grandma.
Read full commentPosted in Echoes Of History : The Grandkids Go On A Tour Of London : (Year Zero + 20): Section 1
Anthropomorphism at it's best
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020
Anthropomorphism at it's best. A lovely story, I like Packham ....Favourite line.
Sure enough, Mum said “Who’s seven then?” to me, so I’m seven!”
Read full commentPosted in Dog Days!*
This is the sotry of a friend
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020
This is the sotry of a friend of mine--not a friend, a man who drank in the pub I worked in. He was a millionaire and lived like a tramp. He drank out of lonliness and put away a hundred pound's worth of whiskey a day. He was intelligent and good...
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Your writing is rich and
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2020
Your writing is rich and beautiful. I really liked this. And you made me care about the fox, I hope his leg heals.
Only one complaint, by the end of the piece he needs a name--he deserves to be named :-)
Favourite line: The ears...
Read full commentPosted in The Envy of Footprints
I love the way this turns
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2020
I love the way this turns from apparent envy of the other side, to gratitude for what we've got. Cracking poem, Luigi I enjoyed it. As to Trump, well what can be said about him other than, Wow, are they all mad? What were they thinking?
Read full commentPosted in Green Grass of Home
&nbstoday hundreds of people
Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020
&nbstoday hundreds of people gathered at Hollywood Park in close proximity... Covid is done and Ellie is the new black Tommy Robinson is king.. Allegedly. The car park was packed with people wanting to hug him and we have the highest Covid...
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2
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