36 of my comments have received 36 Great Feedback votes
The water looks black, but
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.
You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again
Aunty Pearl...Read full comment
Posted in Chicken Eye in the Sky
had learnt that it paid..
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014
had learnt that it paid...learned
she would not allow a word to slip from her lips. Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...Read full comment
Posted in Just Visiting
Rivita with butter and
Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018
Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning.
You built the atmosphere of this well. I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...Read full comment
Posted in The Pitsea Loop
Broken hearts are extroverted
Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016
Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature
maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.
release the air hat had ..air that
and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...Read full comment
Posted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart