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When they went into the lounge, Danny stopped by the front door and left his boots there. ‘It’s okay,’ Kel said. ‘Don’t worry about it.’ Nash glared...
The hotel was quiet the morning after a butchered corpse had been discreetly removed. It was a contrived coolness with the brittle calm of a cover-up...
I am filled with hatred. And the ache of something I can’t name. I sit alone on my bed, the lamp throwing everything into a weak orange soup. I want...
98 of my comments have received 99 Great Feedback votes
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T- Despite the mishaps, you
Posted on Tue, 13 May 2025
T- Despite the mishaps, you have made me crave a Greek island. This is brilliant. Thank you for the read. Damn I want to be there. I'd even have breakfast with Marina.
Sweetheart, you must talk to somebody. Are you still at school? Talk to a sympathetic teacher or school counsellor. Ring Childline, or the Samaritans. Make an appointment and see your doctor. Most importantly, please speak to the counsellor you...
Hello mate, good to read you again. Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...
she would not allow a word to slip from her lips. Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...
I was loving this until we got to Penka. Poor her and poor you and poor her again, my heart goes out to you. I liked the maiden ladies' gathering place .. until I wondered if those maiden ladies were used oft past for the pleasure of gentlemen...
T- Despite the mishaps, you
Posted on Tue, 13 May 2025
T- Despite the mishaps, you have made me crave a Greek island. This is brilliant. Thank you for the read. Damn I want to be there. I'd even have breakfast with Marina.
Favourite line.
or learn how to weave their own yoghurt in a...
Read full commentPosted in Island of Dreams
Sweetheart, you must talk to
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
Sweetheart, you must talk to somebody. Are you still at school? Talk to a sympathetic teacher or school counsellor. Ring Childline, or the Samaritans. Make an appointment and see your doctor. Most importantly, please speak to the counsellor you...
Read full commentPosted in How do you forgive a parent?
Hello mate, good to read you
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
Hello mate, good to read you again. Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...
Read full commentPosted in La belleza
The water looks black, but
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.
You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again
Aunty Pearl...
Read full commentPosted in Chicken Eye in the Sky
had learnt that it paid..
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014
had learnt that it paid...learned
she would not allow a word to slip from her lips. Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...
Read full commentPosted in Just Visiting
And we end on a mystery .. it
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
And we end on a mystery .. it just gets better.
Nelly is perfect, I like her.
Brilliant. x
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Three
I was loving this until we
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2025
I was loving this until we got to Penka. Poor her and poor you and poor her again, my heart goes out to you. I liked the maiden ladies' gathering place .. until I wondered if those maiden ladies were used oft past for the pleasure of gentlemen...
Read full commentPosted in Poor Penka’s Parting
Oh Wow. I LOVE this. I see
Posted on Tue, 20 May 2025
Oh Wow. I LOVE this. I see you have several instalments, so I came straight to number one to start from the beginning.
Brilliant.
I hope you get it to at least 55K words and publish it as a book.
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part One
I love the Scottish scenery
Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2025
I love the Scottish scenery and the wilds of it. This is gorgeous, Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Treasure of Sensory Impressions
Jenny, I love your poetry ..
Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025
Jenny, I love your poetry .. but this is another level. Give me a sneak into somebody else's life, and I'm in heaven.
I also had a miserable time at school nd went to one reunion. So I got the nostalgia of this.
Brilliant,...
Read full commentPosted in School Reunion
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