Sooz006

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I have 450 stories published in 12 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 286230 times and 236 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 3,264 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes

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Heptadecatonic

Heptadecatonic She is my perfect tonic For cold days For grey days For lost upon the way days With fun times And loose rhymes With lift her skirts to...
Cherry

Listed

Listed Late, late at night, in and old, old house He plays his guitar and sings deep into the walls And I sit by the window, up high at the top of...
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Cherry

Crane Tower

Crane Tower Tom had been working the same shift, in the same job, for thirty six years. He operated the crane and pondered that his life mimicked the...

Charlie Chaplin Feet

Charlie Chaplin Feet I’ve got sticking out ears, And a wobbly nose. My eyes are squinty And my teeth are loose. I’ve got a bladder that leaks And a...

Thirteen Twenty

Thirteen-Twenty It should have been an easy case. It was simple and clear cut, somebody feeling hard done to over shadows of the past, and grievances...

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36 of my comments have received 36 Great Feedback votes

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 The water looks black, but

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014

 The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.

You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again

Aunty Pearl...

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Posted in Chicken Eye in the Sky

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 had learnt that it paid..

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014

 had learnt that it paid...learned

she would not allow a word to slip from her lips.  Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...

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Posted in Just Visiting

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Rivita with butter and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018

Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning. 

 

You built the atmosphere of this well.  I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...

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Posted in The Pitsea Loop

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Hello lovely, Good to read

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018

Hello lovely, Good to read you again. 

 

Slight Spoiler!

 

This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third. 

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Posted in Traveller

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A Visit

Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017

Forgive me for lurching in after months away and posting...I promise to come back and do some reviewing. 

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Posted in Listed

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Broken hearts are extroverted

Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016

Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature

maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.

release the air hat had ..air that

and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...

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Posted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart

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As good a dream sequence as

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016

As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.

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Posted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream

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This reminded me of the song,

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel. 

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Posted in Same shit, different day

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Imagine that, a couple so

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

Imagine that, a couple so perfect they synchronize murder.... love this line. 

 

Can't beat agood old tale of darkness and wierdness. Enjoyed this, welcome. 

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Posted in A Hallowed Evening

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Pretty words, sad yet hopeful

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015

Pretty words, sad yet hopeful. 

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Posted in Blue Eternal

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