Sooz006
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12 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 291720 times
and 236 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 3,263 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes
Sooz006
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Heptadecatonic
Heptadecatonic She is my perfect tonic For cold days For grey days For lost upon the way days With fun times And loose rhymes With lift her skirts to...
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- 496 reads
Listed
Listed Late, late at night, in and old, old house He plays his guitar and sings deep into the walls And I sit by the window, up high at the top of...
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Crane Tower
Crane Tower Tom had been working the same shift, in the same job, for thirty six years. He operated the crane and pondered that his life mimicked the...
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Charlie Chaplin Feet
Charlie Chaplin Feet I’ve got sticking out ears, And a wobbly nose. My eyes are squinty And my teeth are loose. I’ve got a bladder that leaks And a...
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Thirteen Twenty
Thirteen-Twenty It should have been an easy case. It was simple and clear cut, somebody feeling hard done to over shadows of the past, and grievances...
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The water looks black, but
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.
You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again
Aunty Pearl...
Read full commentPosted in Chicken Eye in the Sky
had learnt that it paid..
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014
had learnt that it paid...learned
she would not allow a word to slip from her lips. Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...
Read full commentPosted in Just Visiting
Rivita with butter and
Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018
Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning.
You built the atmosphere of this well. I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...
Read full commentPosted in The Pitsea Loop
Hello lovely, Good to read
Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018
Hello lovely, Good to read you again.
Slight Spoiler!
This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third.
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Read full commentPosted in Traveller
A Visit
Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017
Forgive me for lurching in after months away and posting...I promise to come back and do some reviewing.
Read full commentPosted in Listed
Broken hearts are extroverted
Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016
Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature
maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.
release the air hat had ..air that
and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart
As good a dream sequence as
Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016
As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.
Read full commentPosted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream
This reminded me of the song,
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel.
Read full commentPosted in Same shit, different day
Imagine that, a couple so
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
Imagine that, a couple so perfect they synchronize murder.... love this line.
Can't beat agood old tale of darkness and wierdness. Enjoyed this, welcome.
Read full commentPosted in A Hallowed Evening
Pretty words, sad yet hopeful
Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015
Pretty words, sad yet hopeful.
Read full commentPosted in Blue Eternal
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