Sooz006

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I have 682 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 809428 times and 454 of my stories have been cherry picked.
98 of my 3,710 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 99 votes

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Cherry

Xion Island Zero: Chapter 26

I am filled with hatred. But not for Carrie. Not in the way you’d expect. She’s a pathetic waste of space. The house smells like supermarket fabric...
Cherry

Xion Island Zero Chapter 24

When they went into the lounge, Danny stopped by the front door and left his boots there. ‘It’s okay,’ Kel said. ‘Don’t worry about it.’ Nash glared...
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Cherry

Xion Island Zero Chapter 23 (and a cover)

Nash had a shower after work and stood by the bathroom sink with his shirt hanging open. A purpling bruise bloomed like a hydrangea across his ribs...
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Cherry

Xion Island: Chapter 22.

The hotel was quiet the morning after a butchered corpse had been discreetly removed. It was a contrived coolness with the brittle calm of a cover-up...
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Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 21 (no missing chapters I split one)

I am filled with hatred. And the ache of something I can’t name. I sit alone on my bed, the lamp throwing everything into a weak orange soup. I want...

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98 of my comments have received 99 Great Feedback votes

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T- Despite the mishaps, you

Posted on Tue, 13 May 2025

T- Despite the mishaps, you have made me crave a Greek island. This is brilliant. Thank you for the read. Damn I want to be there. I'd even have breakfast with Marina. 

Favourite line. 

or learn how to weave their own yoghurt in a...

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Posted in Island of Dreams

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Sweetheart, you must talk to

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

Sweetheart, you must talk to somebody.  Are you still at school? Talk to a sympathetic teacher or school counsellor. Ring Childline, or the Samaritans. Make an appointment and see your doctor. Most importantly, please speak to the counsellor you...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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Hello mate, good to read you

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020

Hello mate, good to read you again.  Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...

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Posted in La belleza

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 The water looks black, but

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014

 The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.

You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again

Aunty Pearl...

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Posted in Chicken Eye in the Sky

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 had learnt that it paid..

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014

 had learnt that it paid...learned

she would not allow a word to slip from her lips.  Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...

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Posted in Just Visiting

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And we end on a mystery .. it

Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025

And we end on a mystery .. it just gets better. 
 

Nelly is perfect, I  like her. 

Brilliant. x

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Posted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Three

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I was loving this until we

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2025

I was loving this until we got to Penka. Poor her and poor you and poor her again, my heart goes out to you.  I liked the maiden ladies' gathering place .. until I wondered if those maiden ladies were used oft past for the pleasure of gentlemen...

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Posted in Poor Penka’s Parting

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Oh Wow.  I LOVE this.  I see

Posted on Tue, 20 May 2025

Oh Wow.  I LOVE this.  I see you have several instalments, so I came straight to number one to start from the beginning.

Brilliant. 

I hope you get it to at least 55K words and publish it as a book. 

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Posted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part One

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I love the Scottish scenery

Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2025

I love the Scottish scenery and the wilds of it. This is gorgeous, Jenny. 

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Posted in Treasure of Sensory Impressions

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Jenny, I love your poetry ..

Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025

Jenny, I love your poetry .. but this is another level. Give me a sneak into somebody else's life, and I'm in heaven.

I also had a miserable time at school nd went to one reunion. So I got the nostalgia of this. 

Brilliant,...

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Posted in School Reunion

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