Sooz006
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Sooz006
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In a World Gone Mad: Monday 6 July 2020
We walked bloody miles yesterday. It was just under five miles, but it was heavy walking over heathland and up—and sometimes down was worse—massive...
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The Human Touch: chapter Two
Chapter Two ‘John. John, I’ve found one. Come here, quick.’ Shelly was excited. ‘Look, I’ve found an advert. She read from social media as her...
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In a World Gone Mad: Sunday 5th July 2020
Sunday 5 July 2020 We had a karaoke night last night, Andy didn’t join us because he was hung over from the night before when he went to his friend’s...
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In a World Gone Mad: Saturday 4th July 2020
Saturday 4 July 2020 I’ve done it, I’ve done it, I’ve bloodywell only gone and done it. After umph years, umph days and umph hours, I’ve finished...
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The Human Touch: Chapter One
The Human Touch Katherine Black Chapter One ‘For Christ sake, the dog’s giving birth on my bed. Don’t just stand there, bloody do something.’ Carla...
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Hi Phil ... cracking story, I
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Phil ... cracking story, I loved thee two, it's brilliant when 2 characters gel perfectly together. One of my favourite writers on this site is Rich and he has the knack of getting humour and character interaction down pat.
I could...
Read full commentPosted in From a distance...
Hi Ewan, good to read you
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Ewan, good to read you again.
How many times did you edit this before posting? If it's less than five, I'm bowing in awe. It reads as ultra polished. It's clean, honed, sharp and reads beautifully. Is it a stand alone or part of a...
Read full commentPosted in 68. Have A Cigar
Hi Rhiannon, long time no
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Rhiannon, long time no read, hope you are well.
Okay, so I've got to say the subject isn't to my taste, pease don't be offended by that, just each to their own and all that and I've checked all my bones and don't have a religious one...
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Hi Simon, nice to meet you. I
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Simon, nice to meet you. I'm a returner and haven't been in for, ooh, forever. Am returning to writing and want to review for other people before launching in unabashed with my own scribbles.
Repetition of ' Proud' in a...
Read full commentPosted in From Jester To King LXXXVII
Rivita with butter and
Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018
Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning.
You built the atmosphere of this well. I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...
Read full commentPosted in The Pitsea Loop
Hello lovely, Good to read
Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018
Hello lovely, Good to read you again.
Slight Spoiler!
This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third.
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A Visit
Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017
Forgive me for lurching in after months away and posting...I promise to come back and do some reviewing.
Read full commentPosted in Listed
Broken hearts are extroverted
Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016
Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature
maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.
release the air hat had ..air that
and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart
As good a dream sequence as
Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016
As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.
Read full commentPosted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream
This reminded me of the song,
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel.
Read full commentPosted in Same shit, different day
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