Sooz006

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I have 560 stories published in 10 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 365405 times and 335 of my stories have been cherry picked.
59 of my 3,310 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 61 votes

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In a World Gone Mad: Monday 6 July 2020

We walked bloody miles yesterday. It was just under five miles, but it was heavy walking over heathland and up—and sometimes down was worse—massive...
Cherry

The Human Touch: chapter Two

Chapter Two ‘John. John, I’ve found one. Come here, quick.’ Shelly was excited. ‘Look, I’ve found an advert. She read from social media as her...
Cherry

In a World Gone Mad: Sunday 5th July 2020

Sunday 5 July 2020 We had a karaoke night last night, Andy didn’t join us because he was hung over from the night before when he went to his friend’s...
Cherry

In a World Gone Mad: Saturday 4th July 2020

Saturday 4 July 2020 I’ve done it, I’ve done it, I’ve bloodywell only gone and done it. After umph years, umph days and umph hours, I’ve finished...
Cherry

The Human Touch: Chapter One

The Human Touch Katherine Black Chapter One ‘For Christ sake, the dog’s giving birth on my bed. Don’t just stand there, bloody do something.’ Carla...

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59 of my comments have received 61 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Phil ... cracking story, I

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Phil ... cracking story, I loved thee two, it's brilliant when  2 characters gel perfectly together. One of my favourite writers on this site is Rich and he has the knack of getting humour and character interaction down pat. 

I could...

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Posted in From a distance...

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Hi Ewan, good to read you

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Ewan, good to read you again.

How many times did you edit this before posting?  If it's less than five, I'm bowing in awe. It reads as ultra polished. It's clean, honed, sharp and reads beautifully. Is it a stand alone or part of a...

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Posted in 68. Have A Cigar

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Hi Rhiannon, long time no

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Rhiannon, long time no read, hope you are well. 

Okay, so I've got to say the subject isn't to my taste, pease don't be offended by that, just each to their own and all that and I've checked all my bones and don't have a religious one...

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Posted in Whatever the mess

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Hi Simon, nice to meet you. I

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Simon, nice to meet you. I'm a returner and haven't been in for, ooh, forever.  Am returning to writing and want to review for other people before launching in unabashed with my own scribbles. 

 

Repetition of ' Proud' in a...

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Posted in From Jester To King LXXXVII

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Rivita with butter and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018

Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning. 

 

You built the atmosphere of this well.  I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...

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Posted in The Pitsea Loop

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Hello lovely, Good to read

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018

Hello lovely, Good to read you again. 

 

Slight Spoiler!

 

This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third. 

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Posted in Traveller

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A Visit

Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017

Forgive me for lurching in after months away and posting...I promise to come back and do some reviewing. 

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Posted in Listed

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Broken hearts are extroverted

Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016

Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature

maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.

release the air hat had ..air that

and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...

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Posted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart

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As good a dream sequence as

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016

As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.

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Posted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream

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This reminded me of the song,

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel. 

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Posted in Same shit, different day

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