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I have 702 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 905715 times and 474 of my stories have been cherry picked.
107 of my 3,767 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 108 votes

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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 36

Nash stood at the window with a vague hum in his ears. He was staring out of a lot of windows these days. At the table behind him, Kelvin hummed to...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 35

The fairy lights twinkled along the eaves of Nash’s house, and every bush in the front garden bloomed with a Christmas crop of diamonds. They’d...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 34

Nash stabbed his salmon with more force than necessary. The dinner plate clinked against the oak table, and Kelvin raised an eyebrow. ‘I think it’s...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 33

Alan wakes up. He’s missed the best part, which I think is ungrateful of him. I need to poke him, or worse, but I don’t want him to leave me again...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 32

I am filled with hatred. But today it gives me clarity. He chokes, and I watch him die. He fights it. This man wants to live when he has nothing left...

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107 of my comments have received 108 Great Feedback votes

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These chapters are so

Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2025

These chapters are so different from the pub crowd, and I can't decide which I prefer; they are all brilliant, and that stark contrast between the two is going to make a brilliant book. 

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Posted in Steelie 14

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*At times expressing even

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

*At times expressing even flow a boon.* This is a new one on me, I had to think about it. Isn't that what poetry's about, looking at the words and deriving meaning, be it yours or the poet's? I think this is saying....the ocean is violent, but it...

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Posted in Rain

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Now that would have been a

Posted on Thu, 13 Mar 2025

Now that would have been a neat trick, I should have made it horribly carsick. Thanks Celt.

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Posted in The Book: Chapter 32

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Fantastic.  I got right into

Posted on Wed, 05 Feb 2025

Fantastic.  I got right into this, anything from the 70's is pure nostalgia for me and I love it. Add to the period a good story and it's a cracker. Thanks for the read. 

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Posted in The Body in the Library

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There's so much stunning

Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024

There's so much stunning imagery here. This is incredible. 

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Posted in Two kinds of crying : 15th February 2024

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They are beautiful, just like

Posted on Fri, 28 Feb 2025

They are beautiful, just like your poem. Here's to you having gentle walks this summer, pain-free. 

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Posted in Skating Without Ice

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So pretty, loving seeing

Posted on Wed, 12 Mar 2025

So pretty, loving seeing spring on my way to work ev3ery day. 

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Posted in Spring-Shine!

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Sad, sad, sad,

Posted on Sat, 08 Mar 2025

Sad, sad, sad,

Hubby told me the HORRIFIC details last night and it's incredible that such a flame could extinguish like that. Such a man--but as fallible as the rest of us. The manner of his death reads like a horror novel and will stay...

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Posted in Goodbye Gene Hackman - Part 3

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The energy of this is great.

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2025

The energy of this is great. There's no flounder or 'what now?' it's boom, boom, up, up ... and then, in all the action we have something as mundane and out of place as a lollipop stuck in a light socket, and people still have to eat. I loved...

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Posted in Dinner-with 5 eyez (stripped)

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Wow .... no wonder your

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025

Wow .... no wonder your therapist remembered this several years later. This poem is beautiful and I love your therapist, how caring and professional he/she must be to retain the work of a patient in their heads for 4 or 5 years. And how bloody...

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Posted in Cows - lost, refound, tinkered with.

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