Sooz006
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Sooz006
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The Human Touch: Chapter Seven
Chapter Seven Sammy packed his rucksack and then unpacked it, and packed it and unpacked it, and packed it and unpacked it, and Shelly came in to...
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The Human Touch: Chapter Six
Chapter Six Part of Sammy’s condition was that he was very single minded. Taking on sole responsibility for the dog training was a grave...
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The Human Touch: Chapter Five
Chapter Five. ‘Shelly May. Shelly May. Shelly May.’ Shelly wished that just for one hour, her son would forget her name. Fifty times a day he stood...
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The Human Touch: Chapter Four
Chapter Four Sammy stood in the middle of the kitchen. His parents were still in bed, but he couldn’t sleep and there was no point in trying when you...
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The Human Touch: Chapter Three
Chapter Three The school bus pulled up outside, Sammy was in the third seat from the front—his seat— staring out of the window. He showed no...
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I hated my old man...so why
Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020
I hated my old man...so why the hell am I invaded by somebody elses? It's four in the morning and I'm up ...again. Maybe I should leave the lot of them here and put myelf in a home. The guitar is a massive vanity. There's a big live music scene...
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: Sunday 17 May 2020...2
Can't beat agood dog done bad
Posted on Tue, 12 May 2020
Can't beat agood dog done bad story. I didn't want this to end and am looking forward to the next bit.
Read full commentPosted in Lost Dog 5
Another good chapter.
Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020
Another good chapter.
I do have one problem with it and if you're going to keep this bit, I think it needs a sentence of explanation regarding where he got the information. He found out from the library that a woman's father had...
Read full commentPosted in Lost Dog 3
Morning Drew, all the very
Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020
Morning Drew, all the very best of luck with Falmingo. I wish you every sucess, lovely. somebody has to be The One, and why not you. Look forward to hearing about your sucess.
Now about my booking, do you have a pool?....
Read full commentPosted in Flamingo Dreams
Sad, sad story ... and
Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020
Sad, sad story ... and similar to the one I find myself in ..we've taken on my partner's demented father after my other half's two brothers have disowned him and wait -hand rubbing--for the day their inderitance drops into their heaving bank...
Read full commentPosted in Lost Dog 2
Never mind the inanimate
Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020
Never mind the inanimate dishcloth ....we need to hatch an assasination attempt on the live, music stand, you do mine, I'll do yours and we'll never be caught, if you can take out my very sexy fifties copy microphone, that droops mid song too--...
Read full commentPosted in Lockdown Neuroses
Good morning, Rachel, good to
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020
Good morning, Rachel, good to see you again. I love spiddey people, and as long as I can beat the iguana and the kitten--I am the designated househoold spiddey catcher, savior of all. We have the most vocal cat in history, he's always yelling...
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What I didn't write is after
Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020
What I didn't write is after that conversaion the first time he got two dining room chairs and did pull ups on them ... no problem, the worst he was going to do was break my chairs. I had to intervene when he started kicking his legs up....
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: 1 May 2020 ...1
Beautiful paranoia. I was
Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2020
Beautiful paranoia. I was going to suggest more para breaks but I like the rambling monologue of it.
Favourite line: how once it’s fired there’s nothing you can do to stop the bullet getting into you,
I would like more of...
Read full commentPosted in From Jester To King XC
Hi Drew.
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Drew.
I'm left wondering if this is a stand alone or part of a bigger piece?
Either way good story well handled. I like the way you normalised his double life as though it's the most natural thing in the world. How brilliant to...
Read full commentPosted in Transatlantic Nylon
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