Sooz006

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I have 609 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 550594 times and 376 of my stories have been cherry picked.
74 of my 3,447 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 76 votes

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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 32 (B)

Nash snatched the keys as Brown held Carter’s arm to stop him from running. Nash charged up the stairs and was aware of Brown guiding Carter up in...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 32 (A)

They drove away, discussing the fact that they were out of options. It wasn’t Max, and it wasn’t Finch. That left them with nobody. Every time they...
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Silas Nash Book !: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 31.

‘You see our predicament, Mr Finch?’ Nash said. Nash and Brown were on their third cup of coffee at their third house that day. The children were...
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Silas Nash Book !: Hush Hush Honeysuckle. Chapter Thirty B

Nash and Renshaw avoided contaminating evidence in Amanda Keys’ kitchen. Nash felt ill. This one was on him, and he felt the burden of guilt pressing...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush GHush Honeysuckle: Chapter Thrity

Nash knew that look. Jessica might as well have been standing with her hand on her hips, tapping her foot with impatience. She didn’t adopt the...
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74 of my comments have received 76 Great Feedback votes

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A fascinating piece. It's

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

A fascinating piece. It's great reading about other people's lives,especially when it's something positive like this. 

Thank you for the read. 

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Posted in Living The Dream

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Great writing. I enjoyed

Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023

Great writing. I enjoyed every word of this. :)

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Posted in Miss Australia 1978 – Part Three of Four

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If now was then, how many

Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2023

If now was then, how many more momentoes would we have of life? Our kids, holidays, days like that? 

This is beautiful, and I can't wait to see Cornwall. I've never been and we're going to make it our main holiday next year (Mark's...

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Posted in It's Too Late For Things Missed

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And the plot thickens. 

Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2023

And the plot thickens. 

A couple of little typos but nothing that distracts from the story. 

I'm getting into the characters now. 

thanks for the read. 

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Posted in 8.3 Underthings

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Thanks Celt, I'll have

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023

Thanks Celt, I'll have another look at it, appreciated. :)

Peter and I fight over cliches. 

Prime example today I wrote, 'Like stealing from an idiot.'
'No, Sooz, the term is, 'Like stealing candy from a baby,'
'But you...

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Posted in Silas Nash Book 1 Hush Hush Honeysuckle Chapter 3 (b)

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Strong, Strong, Strong. My

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023

Strong, Strong, Strong. My partner's father called him weak for crying at his sister's funeral, the world was different two generations down from today.

We had Mark's dad for the last two years, it was hard, it was hell, and eventually he...

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Posted in The Things Missed

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I've been away for a long

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023

I've been away for a long time. People tell me I'm stupid, but I refute that. I can work things out.  This is the third piece I've read with Jam in the title--wow, what a coincidence. 

Then I remembered, Oh yeah, we have the IP, I even...

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Posted in The Jammy Tax Dodger

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I've never made  jam--but as

Posted on Tue, 27 Jun 2023

I've never made  jam--but as a child I once made rose water perfume--well, I stuck some rose petals in a jar of water and left them for a half term away at school--they were rancid. I also made milk ice lolly's (in the seventies, lots of power...

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Posted in Blackberry Moment

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Hi Iain, a lovely and thought

Posted on Mon, 26 Jun 2023

Hi Iain, a lovely and thought provoking piece. 

We are indeed tiny. 

I lived on Morecambe sea front for some years, and the ocean is one of my favourite things. But she was a treacherous lady and every year people were taken on...

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Posted in RESPECT.

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Rhiannon, Hi.Good to see you.

Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2023

Rhiannon, Hi.Good to see you. 

Even if I hadn't read that this was a hymm (though I did) I think a tune would still have been there in my head. It reads as a song.

Favourie lines: 

who does not seem aware
of any guilt...

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Posted in When there has been hurt

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