Sooz006

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I have 560 stories published in 10 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 365409 times and 335 of my stories have been cherry picked.
59 of my 3,310 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 61 votes

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Cherry

The Human Touch: Chapter Seven

Chapter Seven Sammy packed his rucksack and then unpacked it, and packed it and unpacked it, and packed it and unpacked it, and Shelly came in to...
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Cherry

The Human Touch: Chapter Six

Chapter Six Part of Sammy’s condition was that he was very single minded. Taking on sole responsibility for the dog training was a grave...
Cherry

The Human Touch: Chapter Five

Chapter Five. ‘Shelly May. Shelly May. Shelly May.’ Shelly wished that just for one hour, her son would forget her name. Fifty times a day he stood...

The Human Touch: Chapter Four

Chapter Four Sammy stood in the middle of the kitchen. His parents were still in bed, but he couldn’t sleep and there was no point in trying when you...
Cherry

The Human Touch: Chapter Three

Chapter Three The school bus pulled up outside, Sammy was in the third seat from the front—his seat— staring out of the window. He showed no...

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59 of my comments have received 61 Great Feedback votes

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I hated my old man...so why

Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020

I hated my old man...so why the hell am I invaded by somebody elses? It's four in the morning and I'm up ...again. Maybe I should leave the lot of them here and put myelf in a home.  The guitar is a massive vanity. There's a big live music scene...

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Posted in In a World Gone Mad: Sunday 17 May 2020...2

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Can't beat agood dog done bad

Posted on Tue, 12 May 2020

Can't beat agood dog done bad story. I didn't want this to end and am looking forward to the next bit. 

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Posted in Lost Dog 5

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Another good chapter. 

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020

Another good chapter. 

I do have one problem with it and if you're going to keep this bit, I think it needs a sentence of explanation regarding where he got the information.  He found  out from the library that a woman's father had...

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Posted in Lost Dog 3

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Morning Drew, all the very

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

Morning Drew, all the very best of luck with Falmingo. I wish you every sucess, lovely. somebody has to be The One, and why not you. Look forward to hearing about your sucess. 

Now about my booking, do you have a pool?.... 

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Posted in Flamingo Dreams

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Sad, sad story ... and

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

Sad, sad story ... and similar to the one I find myself in ..we've taken on my partner's demented father after my other half's two brothers have disowned him and wait -hand rubbing--for the day their inderitance drops into their  heaving bank...

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Posted in Lost Dog 2

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Never mind the inanimate

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

Never mind the inanimate dishcloth ....we need to hatch an assasination attempt on the live, music stand, you do mine, I'll do yours and we'll never be caught, if you can take out  my very sexy fifties copy microphone, that droops mid song too--...

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Posted in Lockdown Neuroses

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Good morning, Rachel, good to

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020

Good morning, Rachel, good to see you again.  I love spiddey people, and as long as I can beat the  iguana and the kitten--I am the designated househoold spiddey catcher, savior of all. We have the most vocal cat in history, he's always yelling...

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Posted in Arachne

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What I didn't write is after

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020

What I didn't write is after that conversaion the first time he got two dining room chairs and did pull ups on them ... no problem, the worst he was going to do was break my chairs.  I had to intervene when he started kicking his legs up....

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Posted in In a World Gone Mad: 1 May 2020 ...1

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Beautiful paranoia.  I was

Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2020

Beautiful paranoia.  I was going to suggest more para breaks but I like the rambling monologue of it. 

Favourite line: how once it’s fired there’s nothing you can do to stop the bullet getting into you,

 

I would like more of...

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Posted in From Jester To King XC

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Hi Drew. 

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Drew. 

I'm left wondering if this is a stand alone or part of a bigger piece? 

Either way good story well handled. I like the way you normalised his double life as though it's the most natural thing in the world. How brilliant to...

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Posted in Transatlantic Nylon

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