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I have 691 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 846034 times and 463 of my stories have been cherry picked.
105 of my 3,740 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 106 votes

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The Book: Chapter 48

The morning sun shone, gilding the kitchen with the illusion of peace and the promise of finality. The lights hummed, casting golden halos over the...
Cherry

The Book Chapter 47

The book had been silent for too long. It refused to give them anything. Alice and Mick had left the courthouse in a haze of failure. The second task...
Cherry

The Book: Chapter 46

They didn’t have time to breathe. The soil settled over Tristan’s remains, and the book snapped open. Fresh ink oozed across the page in strong,...
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Cherry

The Book Chapter 45

The room around Alice was silent. The air mauled her with unseen hands, pressing against her like the weight of history curling at the edges of her...
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The Book: Chapter 44

You thought it was him, didn’t you? I can feel your certainty, Alice. The way you whisper his name and turn every brittle page in search of Brother...
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105 of my comments have received 106 Great Feedback votes

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Broken hearts are extroverted

Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016

Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature

maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.

release the air hat had ..air that

and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...

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Posted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart

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As good a dream sequence as

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016

As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.

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Posted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream

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This reminded me of the song,

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel. 

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Posted in Same shit, different day

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Imagine that, a couple so

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

Imagine that, a couple so perfect they synchronize murder.... love this line. 

 

Can't beat agood old tale of darkness and wierdness. Enjoyed this, welcome. 

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Posted in A Hallowed Evening

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Pretty words, sad yet hopeful

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015

Pretty words, sad yet hopeful. 

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Posted in Blue Eternal

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Harpie doesn't have the power

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

Harpie doesn't have the power to give cherries, nothing to do with her. ...only the cherry fairy can bestow ;-)

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Posted in Under the Ice (2)

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This reads as very precise

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

This reads as very precise and old school, as though the poet knows how to be a poet. I enjoyed the mix of passion and nature combined with the elements and a bit of chemistry. Well thought out, well written and well compositioned. Professional...

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Posted in Night's Fleeting Passions Subsumed

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Beautifully melancholy. 

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

Beautifully melancholy. 

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Posted in Shadows on the Stairs

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It was a stained- glass blue

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

It was a stained- glass blue today; if I could have tapped it, it would have shattered into a billion million pieces...beautiful

I had cast a cloak of comfort over my family, by casting away the dust. ..your description in this is...

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Posted in Dust

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Plots was offered for sale in

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015

Plots was offered for sale in the market... not sure if this is intentionall re tone of voice but if not...plots were sold. 

 

The first class washeld on the second floor of Taylor's hall, ...was held.

 

These letters...

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Posted in Susannah Woychik's Letters -6 - 1876-7

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