Sooz006

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I have 560 stories published in 10 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 365410 times and 335 of my stories have been cherry picked.
59 of my 3,310 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 61 votes

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In a World Gone Mad: 1 July 2020...1

Wednesday 1 July 2020 I have found some time to write—it will probably be about five minutes before Max comes back from dropping Andy off at this...
Cherry

In A world Gone Mad: Saturday 13 June 2020...2

I finished editing Paul’s book yesterday, that’s another one in the bag. The paid one I’m currently working is deadlined for tomorrow and I have...
Cherry

In A world Gone Mad: Saturday 13 June 2020...1

Saturday 13 June 2020 This is going to be a very quick entry. I haven’t written for days because I’m up to my eyes in editing books for other people...
Cherry

Break The Child: Chapter Thirty Five: Not that Kind of Family...1

Chapter Thirty-Five: Not that Kind Of Family I’m supposed to be resting but I can’t sleep. The hospital’s too noisy and I hurt too much. Everything...

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59 of my comments have received 61 Great Feedback votes

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Luigi this is gorgeous. This

Posted on Tue, 10 Dec 2013

Luigi this is gorgeous. This isn't words it's a painting. 

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Posted in From Out a Window (I.P.)

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Will I fight against that

Posted on Tue, 17 Jul 2012

Will I fight against that leopard or would I chicken out?”... you've changed tenses here, I'd go with either would would, or will will. fear s and for sure, not even a leopard!... fears? The wonders of nature eh? This is an uplifting story about...Read full comment

Posted in Ordeal or opportunity?

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No! No! No!!! You really,

Posted on Wed, 01 Feb 2012

No! No! No!!! You really, really, really don't need exclamation marks in prose. If you do use them they should only ever be used in extreme circumstances. Unless you are purposefully using a child's voice but then you have to make it clear to the...Read full comment

Posted in It’s Gonna Be Me, Not You!

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Aw that's really sweet,

Posted on Thu, 28 Jun 2012

Aw that's really sweet, lovely ending. Do you know what the first few stanzas of this reminded me of? escaped baby iguanas. And I've chased my share of them. They are like lightning.. This was lovely and next time I see a balloon floating around...Read full comment

Posted in The Runaway Heart (Redrafted)

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I like this, I especially

Posted on Sun, 20 Jan 2008

I like this, I especially like the phrase 'weaving trees' I hope oyu idn't mean weaving through the trees, because for me that would spoil the lovely image of somebody weaving a tree.Read full comment

Posted in Cicada

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Wow, fantastic. This one

Posted on Sun, 20 Jan 2008

Wow, fantastic. This one really hit a nerve with me. While in prague this year we saw the same man twice. the first time was in the early hours of the morning and we giggled as he bounced from wall to wall and had terrible problems staying upright...Read full comment

Posted in Twisted

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