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I have 693 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 856496 times and 465 of my stories have been cherry picked.
106 of my 3,743 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 107 votes

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Xion Island Carrier Chapter 10

Chapter 10 ‘Detective Chief Inspector Nash,’ Dr Fendt said, shaking hands. His voice was hushed. ‘I’m sorry to call you this early, but we have a...
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Xion Island Carrier Chapter Nine

No missing chapters, some werre too long so I broke them into two. 6-9. The wind rattled the loose pane in the upstairs bathroom again—it was a...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 6.

Nash didn’t believe in ghosts until his good friend Max died—and then came back to torment him. He believed in patterns. And sometimes, a pattern had...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 5

I am filled with hatred. And the pulsing itch of inevitability crawls under my skin. It starts before I reach the airport, before I’ve even zipped my...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 4

I am filled with hatred. It’s my fire that burns inferno pretty. The Bernsteins gave me everything I wanted. I had a new room. It was as big as the...

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106 of my comments have received 107 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Iain, a lovely and thought

Posted on Mon, 26 Jun 2023

Hi Iain, a lovely and thought provoking piece. 

We are indeed tiny. 

I lived on Morecambe sea front for some years, and the ocean is one of my favourite things. But she was a treacherous lady and every year people were taken on...

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Posted in RESPECT.

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Rhiannon, Hi.Good to see you.

Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2023

Rhiannon, Hi.Good to see you. 

Even if I hadn't read that this was a hymm (though I did) I think a tune would still have been there in my head. It reads as a song.

Favourie lines: 

who does not seem aware
of any guilt...

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Posted in When there has been hurt

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A well-rounded story that

Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2023

A well-rounded story that children would love. I can visualise the image for it. 

Who doesn't love Sweets?

Now, about this island, you didn't say which body of water it was in? Asking for a friend, you understand.
Respectfully...

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Posted in The land of candy and lollipops

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You express the mindset well

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020

You express the mindset well and the writing is fluid. Writing is about putting down what you want to say and, whether the views expressed are indeed your views or the views of anybbody reading, is immeterial--they are the views of Grandma. 

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Posted in Echoes Of History : The Grandkids Go On A Tour Of London : (Year Zero + 20): Section 1

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Anthropomorphism at it's best

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020

Anthropomorphism at it's best. A lovely story, I like Packham ....Favourite line. 

Sure enough, Mum said “Who’s seven then?” to me, so I’m seven!”

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Posted in Dog Days!*

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This is the sotry of a friend

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020

This is the sotry of a friend of mine--not a friend, a man who drank in the pub I worked in. He was a millionaire and lived like a tramp. He drank out of lonliness and put away a hundred pound's worth of whiskey a day. He was intelligent and good...

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Posted in A Man

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Your writing is rich and

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2020

Your writing is rich and beautiful. I really liked this. And you made me care about the fox, I hope his leg heals. 

Only one complaint, by the end of the piece he needs a name--he deserves to be named :-)

Favourite line: The ears...

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Posted in The Envy of Footprints

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I love the way this turns

Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2020

I love the way this turns from apparent envy of the other side, to gratitude for what we've got.  Cracking poem, Luigi I enjoyed it.  As to Trump, well what can be said about him other than, Wow, are they all mad? What were they thinking? 

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Posted in Green Grass of Home

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&nbstoday hundreds of people

Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020

&nbstoday hundreds of people gathered at Hollywood Park in close proximity... Covid is done and Ellie is the new black Tommy Robinson is king.. Allegedly. The car park was packed with people wanting to hug him and we have the highest Covid...

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Posted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2

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 no, I think it's because

Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020

 no, I think it's because they are animals and race has nothing to with it. I think clan does, be it a family, a race or a gang. In this case a band of businessmen who only think about greasing palms and making money. Objectify a thing... In this...

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Posted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2

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