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Sooz006
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 6.
Nash didn’t believe in ghosts until his good friend Max died—and then came back to torment him. He believed in patterns. And sometimes, a pattern had...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 5
I am filled with hatred. And the pulsing itch of inevitability crawls under my skin. It starts before I reach the airport, before I’ve even zipped my...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 4
I am filled with hatred. It’s my fire that burns inferno pretty. The Bernsteins gave me everything I wanted. I had a new room. It was as big as the...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 3.
I am filled with hatred. My name is Travis Bernstein. I’m thirty years old. Not safe around children—or adults. I close my eyes, and memories haunt...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 2
Detective Chief Inspector Silas Nash slipped into the passenger seat of the unmarked car and nodded at DI Molly Brown. ‘Brown.’ She looked at him in...
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Rhiannon, Hi.Good to see you.
Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2023
Rhiannon, Hi.Good to see you.
Even if I hadn't read that this was a hymm (though I did) I think a tune would still have been there in my head. It reads as a song.
Favourie lines:
who does not seem aware
Read full commentof any guilt...
Posted in When there has been hurt
A well-rounded story that
Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2023
A well-rounded story that children would love. I can visualise the image for it.
Who doesn't love Sweets?
Now, about this island, you didn't say which body of water it was in? Asking for a friend, you understand.
Read full commentRespectfully...
Posted in The land of candy and lollipops
You express the mindset well
Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020
You express the mindset well and the writing is fluid. Writing is about putting down what you want to say and, whether the views expressed are indeed your views or the views of anybbody reading, is immeterial--they are the views of Grandma.
Read full commentPosted in Echoes Of History : The Grandkids Go On A Tour Of London : (Year Zero + 20): Section 1
Anthropomorphism at it's best
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020
Anthropomorphism at it's best. A lovely story, I like Packham ....Favourite line.
Sure enough, Mum said “Who’s seven then?” to me, so I’m seven!”
Read full commentPosted in Dog Days!*
This is the sotry of a friend
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020
This is the sotry of a friend of mine--not a friend, a man who drank in the pub I worked in. He was a millionaire and lived like a tramp. He drank out of lonliness and put away a hundred pound's worth of whiskey a day. He was intelligent and good...
Read full commentPosted in A Man
Your writing is rich and
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2020
Your writing is rich and beautiful. I really liked this. And you made me care about the fox, I hope his leg heals.
Only one complaint, by the end of the piece he needs a name--he deserves to be named :-)
Favourite line: The ears...
Read full commentPosted in The Envy of Footprints
I love the way this turns
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2020
I love the way this turns from apparent envy of the other side, to gratitude for what we've got. Cracking poem, Luigi I enjoyed it. As to Trump, well what can be said about him other than, Wow, are they all mad? What were they thinking?
Read full commentPosted in Green Grass of Home
&nbstoday hundreds of people
Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020
&nbstoday hundreds of people gathered at Hollywood Park in close proximity... Covid is done and Ellie is the new black Tommy Robinson is king.. Allegedly. The car park was packed with people wanting to hug him and we have the highest Covid...
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2
no, I think it's because
Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020
no, I think it's because they are animals and race has nothing to with it. I think clan does, be it a family, a race or a gang. In this case a band of businessmen who only think about greasing palms and making money. Objectify a thing... In this...
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2
I hated my old man...so why
Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020
I hated my old man...so why the hell am I invaded by somebody elses? It's four in the morning and I'm up ...again. Maybe I should leave the lot of them here and put myelf in a home. The guitar is a massive vanity. There's a big live music scene...
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: Sunday 17 May 2020...2
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