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Xion Island Zero ... The Final Chapter.
The sky above Lake Windermere was an impossible blue, a colour that was too beautiful for grief. But grief and joy twisted around each other as the...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 46
Kelvin crouched beside Nash. ‘He’s in good hands, Si. They’ll help him.’ Nash shook his head. He’d seen enough to understand what was happening. The...
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Xion Island Zero: chapter 45
As they finished their meal, a bread roll sailed across the restaurant. It landed against Nash’s chair. The boy and Toby, who was probably his...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 44
The team waited for Nash to be released from the hospital before having their end-of-case celebration. They agreed that, while he was a grumpy git,...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 43
The cabin was silent. The kind of shocked quiet that follows a tragedy. Blood had soaked into the floorboards. It oozed from damaged flesh until it...
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T- Despite the mishaps, you
Posted on Tue, 13 May 2025
T- Despite the mishaps, you have made me crave a Greek island. This is brilliant. Thank you for the read. Damn I want to be there. I'd even have breakfast with Marina.
Favourite line.
or learn how to weave their own yoghurt in a...
Read full commentPosted in Island of Dreams
Hello mate, good to read you
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
Hello mate, good to read you again. Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...
Read full commentPosted in La belleza
The water looks black, but
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.
You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again
Aunty Pearl...
Read full commentPosted in Chicken Eye in the Sky
had learnt that it paid..
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014
had learnt that it paid...learned
she would not allow a word to slip from her lips. Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...
Read full commentPosted in Just Visiting
Beautifully written, and some
Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025
Beautifully written, and some lovely phrases. I don't think we'll ever understand dreams, or what their purpose is, other than maybe to work through the stress of the real world.
Read full commentPosted in I Dreamt of Tigers
A beautiful poem ... and a
Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2025
A beautiful poem ... and a nudge to all us cat owners to give them all the love they deserve.
Read full commentPosted in Tibbs Out On The Tiles
Okay, so my first comment is
Posted on Tue, 27 May 2025
Okay, so my first comment is given with a pout. If this has to finish here, then it finishes perfectly. It's all wrapped up, and it doesn't feel lacking, needing more, or in any way incomplete. It's just perfect.
But Jenny, I want more of...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Eight
Slight tense error. Stood
Posted on Mon, 26 May 2025
Slight tense error. Stood proudly...should be standing proudly.
I think this is my favourite part because I learnt two things.
I learnt that tongs (heated over a flame) were invented in 1872 by Marcel Grateau. The Marcel wave...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Seven
A tiny little typo, now that
Posted on Sun, 25 May 2025
A tiny little typo, now that demeanour is sorted out ..... sew, not sow.
So, our wild one Julia is a sweet, kind girl. Of course, if I'd written her house, they would have criticised Emily's beautiful dress that her mama made her, and...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Six
Just beautiful. This is so
Posted on Sat, 24 May 2025
Just beautiful. This is so good. I love the Upstairs/ Downstairs elements of it. And Julia is a great character. That poor maid. Gorgeous writing. I'm completely invested in this ...and notice it's only 8 parts ...Noooo.
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