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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 38
The forest vanished into blue shadows as Nash looked at the door. The hut squatted like a waiting animal, and the narrow windows reminded him of...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 37
His phone buzzed as another image came through from Bernstein. It was a photo of a faded trailhead sign in Grizedale. A single word appeared on his...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 36
Nash stood at the window with a vague hum in his ears. He was staring out of a lot of windows these days. At the table behind him, Kelvin hummed to...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 35
The fairy lights twinkled along the eaves of Nash’s house, and every bush in the front garden bloomed with a Christmas crop of diamonds. They’d...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 34
Nash stabbed his salmon with more force than necessary. The dinner plate clinked against the oak table, and Kelvin raised an eyebrow. ‘I think it’s...
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T- Despite the mishaps, you
Posted on Tue, 13 May 2025
T- Despite the mishaps, you have made me crave a Greek island. This is brilliant. Thank you for the read. Damn I want to be there. I'd even have breakfast with Marina.
Favourite line.
or learn how to weave their own yoghurt in a...
Read full commentPosted in Island of Dreams
Sweetheart, you must talk to
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
Sweetheart, you must talk to somebody. Are you still at school? Talk to a sympathetic teacher or school counsellor. Ring Childline, or the Samaritans. Make an appointment and see your doctor. Most importantly, please speak to the counsellor you...
Read full commentPosted in How do you forgive a parent?
Hello mate, good to read you
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
Hello mate, good to read you again. Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...
Read full commentPosted in La belleza
The water looks black, but
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.
You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again
Aunty Pearl...
Read full commentPosted in Chicken Eye in the Sky
had learnt that it paid..
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014
had learnt that it paid...learned
she would not allow a word to slip from her lips. Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...
Read full commentPosted in Just Visiting
Beautifully written, and some
Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025
Beautifully written, and some lovely phrases. I don't think we'll ever understand dreams, or what their purpose is, other than maybe to work through the stress of the real world.
Read full commentPosted in I Dreamt of Tigers
A beautiful poem ... and a
Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2025
A beautiful poem ... and a nudge to all us cat owners to give them all the love they deserve.
Read full commentPosted in Tibbs Out On The Tiles
Okay, so my first comment is
Posted on Tue, 27 May 2025
Okay, so my first comment is given with a pout. If this has to finish here, then it finishes perfectly. It's all wrapped up, and it doesn't feel lacking, needing more, or in any way incomplete. It's just perfect.
But Jenny, I want more of...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Eight
Slight tense error. Stood
Posted on Mon, 26 May 2025
Slight tense error. Stood proudly...should be standing proudly.
I think this is my favourite part because I learnt two things.
I learnt that tongs (heated over a flame) were invented in 1872 by Marcel Grateau. The Marcel wave...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Seven
A tiny little typo, now that
Posted on Sun, 25 May 2025
A tiny little typo, now that demeanour is sorted out ..... sew, not sow.
So, our wild one Julia is a sweet, kind girl. Of course, if I'd written her house, they would have criticised Emily's beautiful dress that her mama made her, and...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Six
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