Sooz006
Primary tabs
Pages
My stories
Xion Island Zero: Chapter 42
If he could keep him talking, maybe he could buy some time. Even now, Travis’ ego was overwhelming, and he needed him to see that Nash hadn’t given...
- Read more about Xion Island Zero: Chapter 42
- 4 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 343 reads
Xion Island Zero Chapter 40 and 41
Chapter 40 I am filled with hatred. I am done! Chapter 41 The room pulsed with heat, making Nash’s head spin. He was drowning in the stink of sweat...
- Read more about Xion Island Zero Chapter 40 and 41
- 6 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 447 reads
Xion Island Zero: Chapter 39
The smell hit Nash. It made his throat close. His eyes watered. Then it twisted, punching him in the throat. It was acrid and human. The stench raged...
- Read more about Xion Island Zero: Chapter 39
- 6 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 396 reads
Xion Island Zero: Chapter 38
The forest vanished into blue shadows as Nash looked at the door. The hut squatted like a waiting animal, and the narrow windows reminded him of...
- Read more about Xion Island Zero: Chapter 38
- 4 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 341 reads
Xion Island Zero: Chapter 37
His phone buzzed as another image came through from Bernstein. It was a photo of a faded trailhead sign in Grizedale. A single word appeared on his...
- Read more about Xion Island Zero: Chapter 37
- 2 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 268 reads
A tiny little typo, now that
Posted on Sun, 25 May 2025
A tiny little typo, now that demeanour is sorted out ..... sew, not sow.
So, our wild one Julia is a sweet, kind girl. Of course, if I'd written her house, they would have criticised Emily's beautiful dress that her mama made her, and...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Six
Just beautiful. This is so
Posted on Sat, 24 May 2025
Just beautiful. This is so good. I love the Upstairs/ Downstairs elements of it. And Julia is a great character. That poor maid. Gorgeous writing. I'm completely invested in this ...and notice it's only 8 parts ...Noooo.
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Five
The age of the empowerment of
Posted on Fri, 23 May 2025
The age of the empowerment of women, I think, Julia's going to make them sit up and take notice.
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Four
That's exactly what makes it
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
That's exactly what makes it perfect. It's a snapshot into somebody else's life that's very different to most of us, if not only because of time.
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Three
And we end on a mystery .. it
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
And we end on a mystery .. it just gets better.
Nelly is perfect, I like her.
Brilliant. x
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Three
I was loving this until we
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2025
I was loving this until we got to Penka. Poor her and poor you and poor her again, my heart goes out to you. I liked the maiden ladies' gathering place .. until I wondered if those maiden ladies were used oft past for the pleasure of gentlemen...
Read full commentPosted in Poor Penka’s Parting
This bustle is so awkward to
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
This bustle is so awkward to type in. May I come back to the present now, please?
Absolutely fantastic.
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Two
Oh Wow. I LOVE this. I see
Posted on Tue, 20 May 2025
Oh Wow. I LOVE this. I see you have several instalments, so I came straight to number one to start from the beginning.
Brilliant.
I hope you get it to at least 55K words and publish it as a book.
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part One
I love the Scottish scenery
Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2025
I love the Scottish scenery and the wilds of it. This is gorgeous, Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Treasure of Sensory Impressions
Jenny, I love your poetry ..
Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025
Jenny, I love your poetry .. but this is another level. Give me a sneak into somebody else's life, and I'm in heaven.
I also had a miserable time at school nd went to one reunion. So I got the nostalgia of this.
Brilliant,...
Read full commentPosted in School Reunion
Pages