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Xion Island Carrier Chapter Nine
No missing chapters, some werre too long so I broke them into two. 6-9. The wind rattled the loose pane in the upstairs bathroom again—it was a...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 6.
Nash didn’t believe in ghosts until his good friend Max died—and then came back to torment him. He believed in patterns. And sometimes, a pattern had...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 5
I am filled with hatred. And the pulsing itch of inevitability crawls under my skin. It starts before I reach the airport, before I’ve even zipped my...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 4
I am filled with hatred. It’s my fire that burns inferno pretty. The Bernsteins gave me everything I wanted. I had a new room. It was as big as the...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 3.
I am filled with hatred. My name is Travis Bernstein. I’m thirty years old. Not safe around children—or adults. I close my eyes, and memories haunt...
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Hello lovely, Good to read
Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018
Hello lovely, Good to read you again.
Slight Spoiler!
This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third.
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Read full commentPosted in Traveller
A Visit
Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017
Forgive me for lurching in after months away and posting...I promise to come back and do some reviewing.
Read full commentPosted in Listed
Broken hearts are extroverted
Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016
Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature
maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.
release the air hat had ..air that
and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart
As good a dream sequence as
Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016
As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.
Read full commentPosted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream
This reminded me of the song,
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel.
Read full commentPosted in Same shit, different day
Imagine that, a couple so
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
Imagine that, a couple so perfect they synchronize murder.... love this line.
Can't beat agood old tale of darkness and wierdness. Enjoyed this, welcome.
Read full commentPosted in A Hallowed Evening
Pretty words, sad yet hopeful
Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015
Pretty words, sad yet hopeful.
Read full commentPosted in Blue Eternal
Harpie doesn't have the power
Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014
Harpie doesn't have the power to give cherries, nothing to do with her. ...only the cherry fairy can bestow ;-)
Read full commentPosted in Under the Ice (2)
This reads as very precise
Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015
This reads as very precise and old school, as though the poet knows how to be a poet. I enjoyed the mix of passion and nature combined with the elements and a bit of chemistry. Well thought out, well written and well compositioned. Professional...
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Beautifully melancholy.
Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015
Beautifully melancholy.
Read full commentPosted in Shadows on the Stairs
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