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Cherry

Xion Island Carrier Chapter Nine

No missing chapters, some werre too long so I broke them into two. 6-9. The wind rattled the loose pane in the upstairs bathroom again—it was a...
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Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 6.

Nash didn’t believe in ghosts until his good friend Max died—and then came back to torment him. He believed in patterns. And sometimes, a pattern had...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 5

I am filled with hatred. And the pulsing itch of inevitability crawls under my skin. It starts before I reach the airport, before I’ve even zipped my...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 4

I am filled with hatred. It’s my fire that burns inferno pretty. The Bernsteins gave me everything I wanted. I had a new room. It was as big as the...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 3.

I am filled with hatred. My name is Travis Bernstein. I’m thirty years old. Not safe around children—or adults. I close my eyes, and memories haunt...

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108 of my comments have received 108 Great Feedback votes

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Rivita with butter and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018

Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning. 

 

You built the atmosphere of this well.  I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...

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Posted in The Pitsea Loop

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A Visit

Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017

Forgive me for lurching in after months away and posting...I promise to come back and do some reviewing. 

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Posted in Listed

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Broken hearts are extroverted

Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016

Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature

maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.

release the air hat had ..air that

and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...

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Posted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart

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As good a dream sequence as

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016

As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.

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Posted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream

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This reminded me of the song,

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel. 

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Posted in Same shit, different day

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Imagine that, a couple so

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

Imagine that, a couple so perfect they synchronize murder.... love this line. 

 

Can't beat agood old tale of darkness and wierdness. Enjoyed this, welcome. 

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Posted in A Hallowed Evening

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Pretty words, sad yet hopeful

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015

Pretty words, sad yet hopeful. 

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Posted in Blue Eternal

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Harpie doesn't have the power

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

Harpie doesn't have the power to give cherries, nothing to do with her. ...only the cherry fairy can bestow ;-)

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Posted in Under the Ice (2)

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This reads as very precise

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

This reads as very precise and old school, as though the poet knows how to be a poet. I enjoyed the mix of passion and nature combined with the elements and a bit of chemistry. Well thought out, well written and well compositioned. Professional...

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Posted in Night's Fleeting Passions Subsumed

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Beautifully melancholy. 

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

Beautifully melancholy. 

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Posted in Shadows on the Stairs

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