Sooz006

Primary tabs

TypeTitleAuthorRepliesLast updated
StoryThe Book: Chapter 13 Sooz00651 year 1 month ago
StoryThe Book: Chapter 12 Sooz00661 year 1 month ago
StoryThe Book: Chapter 8 Sooz00641 year 1 month ago
StorySay goodbye to USA smokejack61 year 1 month ago
StoryWatching You Chapters Seventeen and Eighteen brian cross11 year 1 month ago
StoryParadise found Itane Vero21 year 1 month ago
StoryThe Singer Who Stole Their Hearts mcscraic41 year 1 month ago
StoryThe Book: Chapter 9 Sooz006101 year 1 month ago
StoryAnthem celticman231 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Book: Chapter 7 Sooz00641 year 2 months ago
StoryLend me a hand smokejack21 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Book: chapter 4 Sooz00661 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Book: Chapter 6 Sooz00641 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Book: Chapter 5 Sooz00641 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Songs On Death Row mcscraic21 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Brave Cave Dwellers Of Podastria mcscraic21 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Book: Chapter 2 Sooz00681 year 2 months ago
StoryPasswords. Maxine Jasmin-Green41 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Book: Chapter 3 Sooz00661 year 2 months ago
StoryStraight Outta Woolwich Justin Tuijl51 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Book ..Chapter 1 Sooz006121 year 2 months ago
Forum topicSuch a long time. Sooz006131 year 2 months ago
Forum topicUm… hello my old friend… rachelcoates31 year 2 months ago
CollectionThe Book Sooz00601 year 2 months ago
StoryADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD A Child Renembers Chris Whitley11 year 3 months ago

Pages

My stories

Cherry

Xion Island Carrier Chapter Nine

No missing chapters, some werre too long so I broke them into two. 6-9. The wind rattled the loose pane in the upstairs bathroom again—it was a...
1 likes
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 6.

Nash didn’t believe in ghosts until his good friend Max died—and then came back to torment him. He believed in patterns. And sometimes, a pattern had...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 5

I am filled with hatred. And the pulsing itch of inevitability crawls under my skin. It starts before I reach the airport, before I’ve even zipped my...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 4

I am filled with hatred. It’s my fire that burns inferno pretty. The Bernsteins gave me everything I wanted. I had a new room. It was as big as the...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 3.

I am filled with hatred. My name is Travis Bernstein. I’m thirty years old. Not safe around children—or adults. I close my eyes, and memories haunt...

Pages

106 of my comments have received 106 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

Broken hearts are extroverted

Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016

Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature

maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.

release the air hat had ..air that

and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...

Read full comment

Posted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart

1 Vote

As good a dream sequence as

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016

As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.

Read full comment

Posted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream

1 Vote

This reminded me of the song,

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel. 

Read full comment

Posted in Same shit, different day

1 Vote

Imagine that, a couple so

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

Imagine that, a couple so perfect they synchronize murder.... love this line. 

 

Can't beat agood old tale of darkness and wierdness. Enjoyed this, welcome. 

Read full comment

Posted in A Hallowed Evening

1 Vote

Pretty words, sad yet hopeful

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015

Pretty words, sad yet hopeful. 

Read full comment

Posted in Blue Eternal

1 Vote

Harpie doesn't have the power

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

Harpie doesn't have the power to give cherries, nothing to do with her. ...only the cherry fairy can bestow ;-)

Read full comment

Posted in Under the Ice (2)

1 Vote

This reads as very precise

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

This reads as very precise and old school, as though the poet knows how to be a poet. I enjoyed the mix of passion and nature combined with the elements and a bit of chemistry. Well thought out, well written and well compositioned. Professional...

Read full comment

Posted in Night's Fleeting Passions Subsumed

1 Vote

Beautifully melancholy. 

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015

Beautifully melancholy. 

Read full comment

Posted in Shadows on the Stairs

1 Vote

It was a stained- glass blue

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

It was a stained- glass blue today; if I could have tapped it, it would have shattered into a billion million pieces...beautiful

I had cast a cloak of comfort over my family, by casting away the dust. ..your description in this is...

Read full comment

Posted in Dust

1 Vote

Plots was offered for sale in

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015

Plots was offered for sale in the market... not sure if this is intentionall re tone of voice but if not...plots were sold. 

 

The first class washeld on the second floor of Taylor's hall, ...was held.

 

These letters...

Read full comment

Posted in Susannah Woychik's Letters -6 - 1876-7

Pages