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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 3.

By Sooz006 on Thu, 10 Apr 2025

I am filled with hatred. My name is Travis Bernstein. I’m thirty years old. Not safe around children—or adults. I close my eyes, and memories haunt...

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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 2

By Sooz006 on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

Detective Chief Inspector Silas Nash slipped into the passenger seat of the unmarked car and nodded at DI Molly Brown. ‘Brown.’ She looked at him in...

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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter One.

By Sooz006 on Tue, 08 Apr 2025

Xion Island Carrier Chapter 1 I am filled with hatred. It’s a state of being that engulfs me, and this island isn’t dissimilar to my mind. Both are...

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The Book: Chapter 51

By Sooz006 on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

You’re next!

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And the plot thickens.

Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2023

And the plot thickens.

A couple of little typos but nothing that distracts from the story.

I'm getting into the characters now.

thanks for the read.

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Thanks Celt, I'll have

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023

Thanks Celt, I'll have another look at it, appreciated. :)

Peter and I fight over cliches.

Prime example today I wrote, 'Like stealing from an idiot.'
'No, Sooz, the term is, 'Like stealing candy from a baby,'
'But you...

Posted in Silas Nash Book 1 Hush Hush Honeysuckle Chapter 3 (b)

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Strong, Strong, Strong. My

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023

Strong, Strong, Strong. My partner's father called him weak for crying at his sister's funeral, the world was different two generations down from today.

We had Mark's dad for the last two years, it was hard, it was hell, and eventually he...

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I've been away for a long

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023

I've been away for a long time. People tell me I'm stupid, but I refute that. I can work things out. This is the third piece I've read with Jam in the title--wow, what a coincidence.

Then I remembered, Oh yeah, we have the IP, I even...

Posted in The Jammy Tax Dodger

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I've never made jam--but as

Posted on Tue, 27 Jun 2023

I've never made jam--but as a child I once made rose water perfume--well, I stuck some rose petals in a jar of water and left them for a half term away at school--they were rancid. I also made milk ice lolly's (in the seventies, lots of power...

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Hi Iain, a lovely and thought

Posted on Mon, 26 Jun 2023

Hi Iain, a lovely and thought provoking piece.

We are indeed tiny.

I lived on Morecambe sea front for some years, and the ocean is one of my favourite things. But she was a treacherous lady and every year people were taken on...

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Rhiannon, Hi.Good to see you.

Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2023

Rhiannon, Hi.Good to see you.

Even if I hadn't read that this was a hymm (though I did) I think a tune would still have been there in my head. It reads as a song.

Favourie lines:

who does not seem aware
of any guilt...

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A well-rounded story that

Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2023

A well-rounded story that children would love. I can visualise the image for it.

Who doesn't love Sweets?

Now, about this island, you didn't say which body of water it was in? Asking for a friend, you understand.
Respectfully...

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You express the mindset well

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020

You express the mindset well and the writing is fluid. Writing is about putting down what you want to say and, whether the views expressed are indeed your views or the views of anybbody reading, is immeterial--they are the views of Grandma.

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Anthropomorphism at it's best

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020

Anthropomorphism at it's best. A lovely story, I like Packham ....Favourite line.

Sure enough, Mum said “Who’s seven then?” to me, so I’m seven!”