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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 26

I am filled with hatred. But not for Carrie. Not in the way you’d expect. She’s a pathetic waste of space. The house smells like supermarket fabric...
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Xion Island Zero Chapter 24

When they went into the lounge, Danny stopped by the front door and left his boots there. ‘It’s okay,’ Kel said. ‘Don’t worry about it.’ Nash glared...
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Xion Island Zero Chapter 23 (and a cover)

Nash had a shower after work and stood by the bathroom sink with his shirt hanging open. A purpling bruise bloomed like a hydrangea across his ribs...
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Xion Island: Chapter 22.

The hotel was quiet the morning after a butchered corpse had been discreetly removed. It was a contrived coolness with the brittle calm of a cover-up...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 21 (no missing chapters I split one)

I am filled with hatred. And the ache of something I can’t name. I sit alone on my bed, the lamp throwing everything into a weak orange soup. I want...

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109 of my comments have received 110 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed this. Great writing

Posted on Tue, 08 Aug 2023

I enjoyed this. Great writing and told just as is.  I did a stint working to the rigid timescales you described as an interviewer at home. I loved it, but towards the end, had hubby's dad living with us. He had dementia and needed constant care,...

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Posted in There’s a new sick line, for calling in sick apparently! By Alfred Muggins, Call Centre Agent!

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This is what I found on the

Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023

This is what I found on the .GOV website. (I use them for most of my policies and whatnot) it only seems to apply to sex offenders and domestic abuse. But because Max had sex with at least one of the victims, I went with it. I looked at half a...

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Posted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 19

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Yes, I'll edit and tidy it. I

Posted on Mon, 10 Jul 2023

Yes, I'll edit and tidy it. I aimed to cut off at the scene break, but fat fingers must have got in the way :) 

Thanks Insert, done. 

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Posted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 11 (a)

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Thank you, Insert.  I'm so

Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023

Thank you, Insert.  I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. Do you know, I shot myself right in the foot.  This was never meant to be a series, it was just an idea that grew arms and legs on me. If I'd been serious about it, I'd have made him...

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Posted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 9 ( b)

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A fascinating piece. It's

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

A fascinating piece. It's great reading about other people's lives,especially when it's something positive like this. 

Thank you for the read. 

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Posted in Living The Dream

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Great writing. I enjoyed

Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023

Great writing. I enjoyed every word of this. :)

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Posted in Miss Australia 1978 – Part Three of Four

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If now was then, how many

Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2023

If now was then, how many more momentoes would we have of life? Our kids, holidays, days like that? 

This is beautiful, and I can't wait to see Cornwall. I've never been and we're going to make it our main holiday next year (Mark's...

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Posted in It's Too Late For Things Missed

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And the plot thickens. 

Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2023

And the plot thickens. 

A couple of little typos but nothing that distracts from the story. 

I'm getting into the characters now. 

thanks for the read. 

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Posted in 8.3 Underthings

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Thanks Celt, I'll have

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023

Thanks Celt, I'll have another look at it, appreciated. :)

Peter and I fight over cliches. 

Prime example today I wrote, 'Like stealing from an idiot.'
'No, Sooz, the term is, 'Like stealing candy from a baby,'
'But you...

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Posted in Silas Nash Book 1 Hush Hush Honeysuckle Chapter 3 (b)

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Strong, Strong, Strong. My

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2023

Strong, Strong, Strong. My partner's father called him weak for crying at his sister's funeral, the world was different two generations down from today.

We had Mark's dad for the last two years, it was hard, it was hell, and eventually he...

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