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Xion Island Carrier Chapter 14

By Sooz006 on Wed, 21 May 2025

The rain drew slow trails over Nash’s nerves like a jagged fingernail over skin. Barrow was under one of those relentless showers that made...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 13

By Sooz006 on Tue, 20 May 2025

I am filled with hatred. And the thrill of impeccable timing. I couldn’t have planned Aunty Laura’s reckoning better, though the moment she stole the...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 12

By Sooz006 on Sun, 18 May 2025

Nash stared through the one-way glass at James McAlister as the roast beef sandwich he’d wolfed down for lunch refused to settle behind his ribs. The...
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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 11.

By Sooz006 on Fri, 16 May 2025

The isolation ward, set up as an emergency ICU, was too bright. Always bright, an internal room without windows, compensating for the lack of...
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Xion Island Carrier Chapter 10

By Sooz006 on Tue, 13 May 2025

Chapter 10 ‘Detective Chief Inspector Nash,’ Dr Fendt said, shaking hands. His voice was hushed. ‘I’m sorry to call you this early, but we have a...
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I hated my old man...so why

Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020

I hated my old man...so why the hell am I invaded by somebody elses? It's four in the morning and I'm up ...again. Maybe I should leave the lot of them here and put myelf in a home.  The guitar is a massive vanity. There's a big live music scene...

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Morning Drew, all the very

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

Morning Drew, all the very best of luck with Falmingo. I wish you every sucess, lovely. somebody has to be The One, and why not you. Look forward to hearing about your sucess. 

Now about my booking, do you have a pool?.... 

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Good morning, Rachel, good to

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020

Good morning, Rachel, good to see you again.  I love spiddey people, and as long as I can beat the  iguana and the kitten--I am the designated househoold spiddey catcher, savior of all. We have the most vocal cat in history, he's always yelling...

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What I didn't write is after

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020

What I didn't write is after that conversaion the first time he got two dining room chairs and did pull ups on them ... no problem, the worst he was going to do was break my chairs.  I had to intervene when he started kicking his legs up....

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Hi Drew. 

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Drew. 

I'm left wondering if this is a stand alone or part of a bigger piece? 

Either way good story well handled. I like the way you normalised his double life as though it's the most natural thing in the world. How brilliant to...

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Posted in Transatlantic Nylon

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Hi Phil ... cracking story, I

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Phil ... cracking story, I loved thee two, it's brilliant when  2 characters gel perfectly together. One of my favourite writers on this site is Rich and he has the knack of getting humour and character interaction down pat. 

I could...

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Posted in From a distance...

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Hi Ewan, good to read you

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Ewan, good to read you again.

How many times did you edit this before posting?  If it's less than five, I'm bowing in awe. It reads as ultra polished. It's clean, honed, sharp and reads beautifully. Is it a stand alone or part of a...

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Hi Rhiannon, long time no

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

Hi Rhiannon, long time no read, hope you are well. 

Okay, so I've got to say the subject isn't to my taste, pease don't be offended by that, just each to their own and all that and I've checked all my bones and don't have a religious one...

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Rivita with butter and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018

Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning. 

 

You built the atmosphere of this well.  I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...

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Posted in The Pitsea Loop

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Hello lovely, Good to read

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018

Hello lovely, Good to read you again. 

 

Slight Spoiler!

 

This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third. 

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