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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honjeysuckle: Chapter 24
Nash had a bad night. Loneliness was always worse when it was dark and he was in the house on his own. It was crippling. Having a selfish,...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 23
‘I need to speak to Inspector Nash,’ somebody said. ‘He’s very busy, miss, and can’t come to the desk. If you tell me what it’s about, I can give him...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 22
‘We should talk.’ ‘Of course. Shall I come to you?’ Jessica sounded repulsed. ‘No. Text me your address, please, and I’ll come to you.’ With the...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle. Chapter 21 (b)
At home, he touched things as though he’d been away for a year. He touched his bookcase in the hall and brushed his hand over some of the books. He’d...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 21 (a)
‘Go on. Tell me again what you want me to do.’ ‘This man is targeting you. Therefore it stands to reason that you either know him or you’ve had...
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Good morning, Rachel, good to
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020
Good morning, Rachel, good to see you again. I love spiddey people, and as long as I can beat the iguana and the kitten--I am the designated househoold spiddey catcher, savior of all. We have the most vocal cat in history, he's always yelling...
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What I didn't write is after
Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020
What I didn't write is after that conversaion the first time he got two dining room chairs and did pull ups on them ... no problem, the worst he was going to do was break my chairs. I had to intervene when he started kicking his legs up....
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: 1 May 2020 ...1
Beautiful paranoia. I was
Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2020
Beautiful paranoia. I was going to suggest more para breaks but I like the rambling monologue of it.
Favourite line: how once it’s fired there’s nothing you can do to stop the bullet getting into you,
I would like more of...
Read full commentPosted in From Jester To King XC
Hi Drew.
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Drew.
I'm left wondering if this is a stand alone or part of a bigger piece?
Either way good story well handled. I like the way you normalised his double life as though it's the most natural thing in the world. How brilliant to...
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Hi Phil ... cracking story, I
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Phil ... cracking story, I loved thee two, it's brilliant when 2 characters gel perfectly together. One of my favourite writers on this site is Rich and he has the knack of getting humour and character interaction down pat.
I could...
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Hi Ewan, good to read you
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Ewan, good to read you again.
How many times did you edit this before posting? If it's less than five, I'm bowing in awe. It reads as ultra polished. It's clean, honed, sharp and reads beautifully. Is it a stand alone or part of a...
Read full commentPosted in 68. Have A Cigar
Hi Rhiannon, long time no
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Rhiannon, long time no read, hope you are well.
Okay, so I've got to say the subject isn't to my taste, pease don't be offended by that, just each to their own and all that and I've checked all my bones and don't have a religious one...
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Hi Simon, nice to meet you. I
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Simon, nice to meet you. I'm a returner and haven't been in for, ooh, forever. Am returning to writing and want to review for other people before launching in unabashed with my own scribbles.
Repetition of ' Proud' in a...
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Rivita with butter and
Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018
Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning.
You built the atmosphere of this well. I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...
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Hello lovely, Good to read
Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018
Hello lovely, Good to read you again.
Slight Spoiler!
This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third.
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