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Xion Usland Zero: Chapter 31

By Sooz006 on Sat, 21 Jun 2025

Nash was behind Norton, and she was closing in on the Harley. Travis turned in his seat. They were right behind Norton on his tail, and for a second...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 30

By Sooz006 on Fri, 20 Jun 2025

Nash was wired from a rush of adrenaline. He couldn’t mess up again. He had to get inside Bernstein’s head, be him, and think methodically. The guard...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 29

By Sooz006 on Thu, 19 Jun 2025

Nash stood under a yew tree and watched the last car pull away from the cemetery. The place felt thick with old ghosts, but Max was nowhere around...
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Xion Island Zero: Chapter 28

By Sooz006 on Tue, 17 Jun 2025

The wind sweeping through the cemetery was uncommitted, the kind that rustled hems and ribbons but didn’t disturb the dead. Even the weather managed...
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Xion Island Zero, Chapter 27

By Sooz006 on Sat, 14 Jun 2025

Brown ran to catch up to Nash before they went into the briefing. ‘Boss, wait up. I need to talk to you.’ ‘It’ll have to be quick, you’re already two...
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The energy of this is great.

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2025

The energy of this is great. There's no flounder or 'what now?' it's boom, boom, up, up ... and then, in all the action we have something as mundane and out of place as a lollipop stuck in a light socket, and people still have to eat. I loved...

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Wow .... no wonder your

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025

Wow .... no wonder your therapist remembered this several years later. This poem is beautiful and I love your therapist, how caring and professional he/she must be to retain the work of a patient in their heads for 4 or 5 years. And how bloody...

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That sounds like every family

Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2025

That sounds like every family dinner at our house. One of Mark's kids always has a grievance about something--and games nights get ridiculously competitive. 

The thing that makes this story work so well is the pace ... you turn it at just...

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A great piece, and a great

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025

A great piece, and a great after story about your son having the same tech years ago. Us dinosaurs know nothing. x

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Hi, Maxine ... the joys of

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025

Hi, Maxine ... the joys of technology, eh? This is great, The stress of those conversations. My computer is everything and just the thought of being without it is terrifying ... but that said, my son's never ring me. They know there's no point....

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This is deep, it's a pity we

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025

This is deep, it's a pity we don't have a recordings section, (Maybe something to look at, Eds? )  I'd like to hear it performed. 

Brilliant meter and energy. I like that every sylable was important and not just input for the rhyme. Great...

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Crikey .... I posted this

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025

Crikey .... I posted this like, five minutes ago .. thank you very, very much for the cherry. 

Here I am again, that bad penny that turns up wanting people to read and help while I'm in a slump and feeling horribly guilty for another long...

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Too many unpeopled people in

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025

Too many unpeopled people in the world. I'm a passenger assistant for children with extra needs and some of their stories are heartbreaking. The parents often need as much support as the kids The world can be uncaring in current times. But there'...

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Beautiful imagery. One of my

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

Beautiful imagery. One of my dogs flatly refused to go out in it. I had to stand outside with him. I love a good storm and don't ever remember being afraid of them as a child. I was terrified of ghosts in my room.
 

Lovely, Jenny. 

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Beautiful Richard. We live

Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023

Beautiful Richard. We live near the beach and every word of this rang true for me. Thank you for the read. 

Favourite phrase: Seaweed carpets of wet sand. 

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