Starfish Girl

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My stories have been read 60305 times and 28 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 789 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes

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Then and Now

A writing class exercise to write a science fiction story. Could well be science fact

I've Got it on a List

In our writing class we were each given a list and had to write about it. This was my list. It was a very pretty piece of paper, it came from one of...
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Impressions

My writing class was asked to choose favourite books and write something in a similar genre. I love E F Benson's Lucia books. This is my attempt!...

The Bridge

My writing class was given the task of rewriting a fairy story. Which story do you think I have chosen? An ordinary bridge. A bridge spanning a fast...
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Unwillingly to School

She was tall and extremely thin, the belt of the apron winding twice around her tiny waist. Hair short and neatly tucked behind delicate ears, each...
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35 of my comments have received 37 Great Feedback votes

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Tina, beautiful.

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015

Tina, beautiful.

So many great lines and images.

I think you make her live a little for us readers as well. What a lovely tribute.

Lindy

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Posted in Quietus

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So well written 'stitched

Posted on Thu, 27 Feb 2014

So well written 'stitched together with sand bags' what a great line.

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Posted in Flood

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Lovely imagery

Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2019

Lovely imagery

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Posted in Black Herons

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One to come back to. Much

Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2019

One to come back to. Much hidden within it.

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Posted in Wood Anemones

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I do like this, so much in

Posted on Tue, 13 Mar 2018

I do like this, so much in few words.

Crows do have a bad press but I like them, love their arrogant strut.

Lindy

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Posted in A Crust

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What lovely descriptions.

Posted on Tue, 08 Aug 2017

What lovely descriptions. Knowing very little about South Africa its climate and flora and fauna this was extremely interesting.

Lindy

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Posted in Autumn Leaves

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That such beautiful words can

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

That such beautiful words can come out of such grief I cannot contemplate. Through tears.

Lindy

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Posted in Blue

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Love 'confetti of swallows'.

Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2016

Love 'confetti of swallows'. Lovely poem , and images as always Tina. You help us see things through your daughter's eyes, and in a small way she lives again.

Lindy

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Posted in T'is the Season...

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Brought a smile and memories

Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2016

Brought a smile and memories to my day. Thank you Tina.

I can remember my nan saying 'keep out the 'orse road'. We didn't collect what the orses left behind though, no gardens to speak of.

Lindy

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Posted in The 'It' Girl

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If only those lost moments

Posted on Thu, 17 Mar 2016

If only those lost moments could be retrieved, but then I suppose that is part of life 'if only'

So beautifully and succinctly put.

Lindy

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Posted in The Time Saver

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