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A writing class exercise, 'The unreliable narrator'! Summer time is quite stressful. The sun has got his hat on at a most unearthly hour and doesn’t...
He could vividly remember the first time. Under the bridge on the canal. They had goaded him his mates. Called him a whimp, a pussy, a girl. Friends...
120 of my comments have received 127 Great Feedback votes
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Hi Jean
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
Hi Jean
You explain things so well with not a hint of self pity. You are certainly going through the mill but as you say the lesion on the brain was found early so hopefully it can be dealt with quickly. Your poor treatment at the hospital...
What a touching and moving account of your last day out with 'mum'. What strikes me is the pleasure she took in her new 'experiences' even though some she had experienced before,many times. Each day presenting something to enjoy.
Hi Jean
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
Hi Jean
You explain things so well with not a hint of self pity. You are certainly going through the mill but as you say the lesion on the brain was found early so hopefully it can be dealt with quickly. Your poor treatment at the hospital...
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Tina, beautiful.
Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015
Tina, beautiful.
So many great lines and images.
I think you make her live a little for us readers as well. What a lovely tribute.
Lindy
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So well written 'stitched
Posted on Thu, 27 Feb 2014
So well written 'stitched together with sand bags' what a great line.
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You say a lot in a few words
Posted on Thu, 06 Nov 2025
You say a lot in a few words beautifully put. Colours seem to have lasted well this year
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Hi Gloscat, sorry for the
Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025
Hi Gloscat, sorry for the spoiler, and thanks for reading. Even so it is a great film and do enjoy it.
Read full commentPosted in Red Letter
What a lovely description of
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025
What a lovely description of the year's weather and its changing seasons.
Read full commentPosted in After the Geese
A lovely poem. I imagine the
Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025
A lovely poem. I imagine the original would sound well in its native language.
Read full commentPosted in Daffodil
A good read, picks up the
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025
A good read, picks up the bullying nature of teenagers and love the ending!
Read full commentPosted in Fraction too much fiction
What a touching and moving
Posted on Fri, 11 Oct 2024
What a touching and moving account of your last day out with 'mum'. What strikes me is the pleasure she took in her new 'experiences' even though some she had experienced before,many times. Each day presenting something to enjoy.
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - A day out
So sorry to hear that you are
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
So sorry to hear that you are ailing. My husband often quotes his granny who said "Don't grow old" but the alternative is much worse!
I had an MRI scan a while ago, didn't get music to listen to. I thought the sounds were like listening to...
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