Starfish Girl
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Wrong Number
‘Ode to Joy’ sounding out and filling the space of her apartment. Raising her eyes to the heavens she dropped the mixing bowl and rushed to find the...
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The Day, Every Day
She woke up, letting her eyes become accustomed to the half-light, accustomed to the ordinary, to her life, to her half-life. The curtains, with...
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Red Letter
Letter A red letter day! I wonder how many of you have questioned the origins of this saying. Of course we all understand that it means something...
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A Tribute to Rimsky Korsakov
A writing class exercise, 'The unreliable narrator'! Summer time is quite stressful. The sun has got his hat on at a most unearthly hour and doesn’t...
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Experience
He could vividly remember the first time. Under the bridge on the canal. They had goaded him his mates. Called him a whimp, a pussy, a girl. Friends...
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Hi Jean
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
Hi Jean
You explain things so well with not a hint of self pity. You are certainly going through the mill but as you say the lesion on the brain was found early so hopefully it can be dealt with quickly. Your poor treatment at the hospital...
Read full commentPosted in Bitty Barby Boob RIP part 2
Tina, beautiful.
Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015
Tina, beautiful.
So many great lines and images.
I think you make her live a little for us readers as well. What a lovely tribute.
Lindy
Read full commentPosted in Quietus
So well written 'stitched
Posted on Thu, 27 Feb 2014
So well written 'stitched together with sand bags' what a great line.
Read full commentPosted in Flood
Well writte and VERY scary!
Posted on Fri, 06 Mar 2026
Well written and VERY scary! Hope your results come soon.
Lindy
Read full commentPosted in My Time In A & E ( PT 2 )
Hi Jenny
Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2026
Hi Jenny
What an awful experience. Bad enough feeling ill and frightened without having to be in A&E for so long. Your concern for others waiting for treatment shines through.
Take care.
Lindy
Read full commentPosted in My Time In A & E
You say a lot in a few words
Posted on Thu, 06 Nov 2025
You say a lot in a few words beautifully put. Colours seem to have lasted well this year
Read full commentPosted in Farewell Glows
Hi Gloscat, sorry for the
Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025
Hi Gloscat, sorry for the spoiler, and thanks for reading. Even so it is a great film and do enjoy it.
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What a lovely description of
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025
What a lovely description of the year's weather and its changing seasons.
Read full commentPosted in After the Geese
A lovely poem. I imagine the
Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025
A lovely poem. I imagine the original would sound well in its native language.
Read full commentPosted in Daffodil
A good read, picks up the
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025
A good read, picks up the bullying nature of teenagers and love the ending!
Read full commentPosted in Fraction too much fiction
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