Starfish Girl
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116 of my 947 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 123 votes
My stories
The Bridge
My writing class was given the task of rewriting a fairy story. Which story do you think I have chosen? An ordinary bridge. A bridge spanning a fast...
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Unwillingly to School
She was tall and extremely thin, the belt of the apron winding twice around her tiny waist. Hair short and neatly tucked behind delicate ears, each...
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Soul Searching
A story I do want to continue! Black rocks adorned with a filigree of white, lacy foam. Rocks churned up from the bowels of the earth. If they could...
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Who's Afraid?
My writing class was given the task of writing metafiction, not sure if this is it! You know and I know we all have to do whatever we can to keep...
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Red
Haven't submitted anything for ages. This a writing class exercise for setting a scene. The door was locked and bolted. Dark red, velvet curtains...
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Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022
Hi Rhiannon
Such a short, but wonderful description. You pack so much beauty into so few words.
Lindy
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I do like the way Effie has
Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2022
I do like the way Effie has become a 'person' with moods, likes dislikes and preferences.Much like her 'mum' I imagine.
Keep smiling and making us smile Jean
Lindyx
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Hi Jean
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
Hi Jean
Thanks for keeping us in the loop.
Mouth ulcers are awful I remember as a child having them frequently. That stuff you can buy from the chemist is not nice but does work. Although my dentist is very nice I do put off going...
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Hi Jean
Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022
Hi Jean
I love the way your writing is 'warts and all'! You write things as they are, both good and bad. But you always end on a positive note.
I think we've all been there with the food business, can't be bothered and cut corners...
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Hi Jean
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
Hi Jean
What an upleasant experience for you (and Effie). A well written, amusing and informative piece, as usual. You do seem to overcome the trials and tribulations of your condition with great equanimity.
RESPECT!
Lindyx
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Hi Jean
Posted on Tue, 06 Sep 2022
Hi Jean
Your descriptions of what is happening to you are always 'so human'. By that I mean you show pleasure at small things, humour at large things and a great interest in what is happening to you with a desire to share and also, if you...
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Hi Angus
Posted on Sat, 03 Sep 2022
Hi Angus
A wonderful description of these lovely, intelligent creatures. You can almost undestand why ancient people feared them. I think that they are such great birds.
Lindy
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Hi Jean
Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022
Hi Jean
Another lovely 'little epistle'. Effie does sound like a troublesome little child at times. Glad you managed to settle her down allowing you both much needed sleep.
You are still sounding very up beat, well done!
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Hi Jean
Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2022
Hi Jean
Thanks for the update.
Glad you managed to sort out your worries re the stoma nurse. It seems much of the NHS seems to be farmed out to private companies. My neighbour had a cataract op on the NHS at a private hospital. She...
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Hi Jean
Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022
Hi Jean
Still keeping me smiling, in spite of. Loved your description of Effie's singing. My writing class teacher has a stoma as a result of a ruptured bowel a couple of years ago. Very nasty at the time but now she is fine and is coping...
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