Starfish Girl

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Impressions

My writing class was asked to choose favourite books and write something in a similar genre. I love E F Benson's Lucia books. This is my attempt!...

The Bridge

My writing class was given the task of rewriting a fairy story. Which story do you think I have chosen? An ordinary bridge. A bridge spanning a fast...
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Unwillingly to School

She was tall and extremely thin, the belt of the apron winding twice around her tiny waist. Hair short and neatly tucked behind delicate ears, each...
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Soul Searching

A story I do want to continue! Black rocks adorned with a filigree of white, lacy foam. Rocks churned up from the bowels of the earth. If they could...

Who's Afraid?

My writing class was given the task of writing metafiction, not sure if this is it! You know and I know we all have to do whatever we can to keep...

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118 of my comments have received 125 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Paul

Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022

Hi Paul

Don't know what happened to my previous posts!

This is lovely, your words give us a wonderful image of both Autumn and your young daughter.

Lindy

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Posted in Memories from Falls Past

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Hi Jean

Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022

Hi Jean

Once again you tell things how they are, both ups and downs. I like the beginning of your piece where you list what could have happened 'if' and the contrast with all the good things.

Glad to hear that you are feeling better...

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Posted in Chemo 15

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Hi Rhiannon

Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022

Hi Rhiannon

Such a short, but wonderful description. You pack so much beauty into so few words.

Lindy

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Posted in by Craven Arms

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I do like the way Effie has

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2022

I do like the way Effie has become a 'person' with moods, likes dislikes and preferences.Much like her 'mum' I imagine.

Keep smiling and making us smile Jean

Lindyx

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Posted in Chemo 12

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Hi Jean

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

Hi Jean

Thanks for keeping us in the loop.

Mouth ulcers are awful I remember as a child having them frequently. That stuff you can buy from the chemist is not nice but does work. Although my dentist is very nice I do put off going...

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Posted in chemo 11

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Hi Jean

Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022

Hi Jean

I love the way your writing is 'warts and all'! You write things as they are, both good and bad. But you always end on a positive note.

I think we've all been there with the food business, can't be bothered and cut corners...

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Posted in Chemo 10

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Hi Jean

Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022

Hi Jean

What an upleasant experience for you (and Effie). A well written, amusing and informative piece, as usual. You do seem to overcome the trials and tribulations of your condition with great equanimity.

RESPECT!

Lindyx

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Posted in Chemo 9

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Hi Jean

Posted on Tue, 06 Sep 2022

Hi Jean

Your descriptions of what is happening to you are always 'so human'. By that I mean you show pleasure at small things, humour at large things and a great interest in what is happening to you with a desire to share and also, if you...

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Posted in Chemo 8

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Hi Angus

Posted on Sat, 03 Sep 2022

Hi Angus

A wonderful description of these lovely, intelligent creatures. You can almost undestand why ancient people feared them. I think that they are such great birds.

Lindy

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Posted in Knowing The Crows

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Hi Jean

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022

Hi Jean

Another lovely 'little epistle'. Effie does sound like a troublesome little child at times. Glad you managed to settle her down allowing you both much needed sleep.

You are still sounding very up beat, well done!

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Posted in Chemo 7

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