Starfish Girl

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Age Cannot Wither Her

The vase had pride of place on the highly polished table. A small lace cloth placed underneath to protect the surface. The vase almost as old as her...

Mellifluent Memories

How I hate that dratted blackbird. Always there singing its fluid song, a song in praise of...some would say nature, others sunrise, some the sexual...
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The Crossing

A river to cross. The outward journey a manageable task, the goal a long stretch of beach opening onto a perfect bay. A favourite of fishermen, but...

Truth telling?

I’m not sure why I agreed to it. My nan always said ‘Be sure your sins will find you out.’ I think she might have been right but there’s still time...
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Then and Now

A writing class exercise to write a science fiction story. Could well be science fact

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135 of my comments have received 143 Great Feedback votes

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Intriguing!

Posted on Sun, 04 Jun 2023

Intriguing!

What is the switch blade for?

And they seem to eat an awful lot.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Lindy

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Posted in The Newlyweds part 1

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Hi Rhiannon

Posted on Fri, 02 Jun 2023

Hi Rhiannon

A lovely poem. You describe this area so beautifully. We spent a week in a farmhouse in Longtown May last year with views of the Black Mountains and the local church. We visited the quaint old pub at Clodock just down the road...

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Posted in Around Longtown, upper Monnow Valley

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Hi Jenny. This is lovely and

Posted on Mon, 29 May 2023

Hi Jenny. This is lovely and truly transported me to a magical place. Thank you

Lindy

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Posted in Nature's Wonders

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Hi Jean

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2023

Hi Jean

A very detailed and scary account. You face you trials and tribulations with such fortitude. Your writing is an education in that the treatment you describe I have never heard of.

Is the picture of you in the mask?

As...

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Posted in Cippy and Bella

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Lovely descriptions and

Posted on Tue, 02 May 2023

Lovely descriptions and images, don't know skunk cabbage but sounds awesome. More rain to come so you picked a good day.

I'm waiting for the bluebells in our nearby woods.

Lindy

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Posted in Above Upper Hill

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Hi Jean

Posted on Sun, 30 Apr 2023

Hi Jean

My hope is that Bella will have a permanent long sleep.

Once again a fascinating explanation of what is to happen. It all sounds so scary and futuristic. But once again your down to earth and practical explanation of the...

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Posted in Bella the Brain Pain

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Hi Jane

Posted on Mon, 24 Apr 2023

Hi Jane

I don't think you're a snob. Horses for courses I suppose. It is a very descriptive piece.

We have a very scrappy front lawn. Last year we let the clover and other weeds alone, attracted lots of bees. This Winter the lawn...

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Posted in Am I a Snob?

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Hi Rhiannon

Posted on Tue, 25 Apr 2023

Hi Rhiannon

An extremely well put together poem. One giving lots of enjoyment and information.

When I wrote my story about the trunk I was intrigued as to why an elephant's nose is called a trunk so I googled it. Fascinating as is...

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Posted in 2 Super-sensory-sensitive scrubbing towers

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Hi Jean

Posted on Mon, 24 Apr 2023

Hi Jean

What a time of it you have had. I admire you tremendously in being able to write this in such detail. I hope that being able to share your experiences is a great help both to you and to those of us reading. It does seem that a...

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Posted in Breast cancer part 4

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A very 'photogenic' piece of

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

A very 'photogenic' piece of writing.

Lindy

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Posted in April Blossom

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