Starfish Girl

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Mellifluent Memories

How I hate that dratted blackbird. Always there singing its fluid song, a song in praise of...some would say nature, others sunrise, some the sexual...
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The Crossing

A river to cross. The outward journey a manageable task, the goal a long stretch of beach opening onto a perfect bay. A favourite of fishermen, but...

Truth telling?

I’m not sure why I agreed to it. My nan always said ‘Be sure your sins will find you out.’ I think she might have been right but there’s still time...
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Then and Now

A writing class exercise to write a science fiction story. Could well be science fact

Impressions

My writing class was asked to choose favourite books and write something in a similar genre. I love E F Benson's Lucia books. This is my attempt!...

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130 of my comments have received 138 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Jean

Posted on Sun, 30 Apr 2023

Hi Jean

My hope is that Bella will have a permanent long sleep.

Once again a fascinating explanation of what is to happen. It all sounds so scary and futuristic. But once again your down to earth and practical explanation of the...

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Posted in Bella the Brain Pain

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Hi Jane

Posted on Mon, 24 Apr 2023

Hi Jane

I don't think you're a snob. Horses for courses I suppose. It is a very descriptive piece.

We have a very scrappy front lawn. Last year we let the clover and other weeds alone, attracted lots of bees. This Winter the lawn...

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Posted in Am I a Snob?

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Hi Rhiannon

Posted on Tue, 25 Apr 2023

Hi Rhiannon

An extremely well put together poem. One giving lots of enjoyment and information.

When I wrote my story about the trunk I was intrigued as to why an elephant's nose is called a trunk so I googled it. Fascinating as is...

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Posted in 2 Super-sensory-sensitive scrubbing towers

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Hi Jean

Posted on Mon, 24 Apr 2023

Hi Jean

What a time of it you have had. I admire you tremendously in being able to write this in such detail. I hope that being able to share your experiences is a great help both to you and to those of us reading. It does seem that a...

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Posted in Breast cancer part 4

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A very 'photogenic' piece of

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

A very 'photogenic' piece of writing.

Lindy

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Posted in April Blossom

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Smiled all the way through.

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

Smiled all the way through. Thanks for posting.

Lindy

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Posted in Twists and Turns

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Hi Jean

Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023

Hi Jean

Still going through the mill.

Hopefully Thursday's treatment will solve one of your problems.

Nothing worse than not being able to sleep, especially when others are making it so difficult. But as you say "Please God...

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Posted in Bitty Bsarbie Boob part 3

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Oh Jean (or Barbie)

Posted on Thu, 06 Apr 2023

Oh Jean (or Barbie)

That streak of humour still there in spite of your trauma.

I imagine you were overjoyed to go home the day of the op, but what a pity they didn"t keep you in and so avoid your present problem.

Do take care...

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Posted in BITTY BARBY BOOB, RIP

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Hi Jean

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

Hi Jean

Still as impressed as ever with your writing, always a touch of humour no matter what the subject. Your positivity is quite inspiring.

My sister in law had a similar breast cancer, they told her they could just remove the...

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Posted in Bye bye baby breast

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Hi Jean

Posted on Sat, 31 Dec 2022

Hi Jean

What great news!

The future beckons with sunshine on the horizon.

Your positive attitude has given me a hope for a better 2023, for all of us.

THANK YOU JEAN.

Lindy

PS, I'm rubbish at writing...

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Posted in Chemo 17

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